SWASAN OS-Trust & Communication is the main Key

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hey,beautiful ppl!i m sumi/sonu.i tried to write something on swasan.its my 1st writing on swasan also in ths 4um.i m a very bad writer bt a very gd reader..its after laksh save swara from goons during kidnapping.sorry,console wala hug to thik tha but tht forhead kiss didnt go with me well.i cnt digest tht.so i imagine ths after wht happen...hope u guys like it.appriciation/critisicm evrythng is welcomed.sorry for any mistakes.



swara was very scared,she hugged laksh in fear.laksh console her & give her a forhead kiss.after some time whn swara becm normal she got tensed & pushed laksh away..

laksh-swara meri baat suno kaha jarahe ho,ruko...but swara kept walking...she stopped a auto,climbed into it & went from thr.lash was standing thr shockingly...

at MM-

swara enterd into MM..everyone was busy with karwachauth's preparation.no one noticed her except ragini...she was going to swara bt kept engaged by AP.

swara jst ran from thr & direct went into guest room..she saw sanskar was working on laptop.sanskar noticed her state & stood up to ask something.but before he could say anything swara jst hugged him tightly & sobbed..sanskar asked worriedly 'arre swara,kya hua..kaha gayi thi,sab thik hai na.washroom se ane k baad i saw ur msg ki ragini ne tumhe milne bulaya akele me gharke bahar,tum wohi jarahi ho.par ragini to ghar pe hi hai.i tried to call u but unreahable aya.sab thik hai na?kya kaha usne?'...but swara still in shocked state.sanskar tried to console her bt whn he saw swara sobbed continiously he came out 4m her hold & ask again 'u r scaring me?batao kya hua?...aur ye..ye..chot kaise lagi pointing at her elbow..ragini ne kuch kia...bolo swara?'...but instead of answering she went to balcony take the jug & poured all water on her head thn kept rubbing her forhead..sanskar was shocked..

swara ran from thr & went to shower...she stood under shower & kept rubbing her hands,forhead...laksh's hug,kiss everythng came to her mind...she felt disgusted & kept sobbing..

all ths while sanskar knocked bathroom door but whn swara didnt open,sanskar went into bathroom..he was shocked seeing swara's state...her eyes was puffy red,she sat under shower silently..sanskar immidietly off the shower & shook swara tightly...-'swara baat kya hai...ka hua tumhe..'but swara again hugged him & silently cried.

sanskar calm her down.he give her a pink-off white sari which he brought for swara.he asked her to wear tht & come out.swara did same..

after whn she came out sanskar make her sit on bed & himslf kneel down in4nt of her thn ask again 'kya hua?thik ho...pani piyogi?'swara-'nehi.tum vul rahe ho.maine vrat rakha hai'.sanskar-'par firvi tum thik ho?batana chahti ho kya hua...whn he didnt got any response he said 'thik hai.jab thik lage tab batana.ab thora rest karo'..he was going whn swara hold his hand & make him sit beside him.but sanskar brought first aid box & strt his aiding on her elbow..swara staring at him all the time..

after some time whn thy sat silently swara said 'ragini ne mujhse kaha milne k lia.par jab man waha pohochi waha mujhe laksh mila.'sanskar became worried.

sanskar hold her hand & ask-kya kia usne isbar?kuch kaha tumse aur wo waha kya kar rahi tha?'

swara-wohi uski fisul ki batein..kehne laga ragini natak kar rahi hai,mujhe uske zindagi me wapas jana hoga..fir wada mangne laga ki main use help karu ragini ko uske zidagi se bahar nikalne me agar wo jhut bol raha hai to & after tht uske zindagi me wapas chala jau.thn maine usse promise kia ki agar ragini jhut bol rahi hai to main zarur usse madad karungi uske zindagi se ragini ko bahar nikalne me par mai khud kavi uske zindagi me wapas nehi jayungi..fir he tried to manhandle me par jab gusse se waha se nikal rahi ti pata nehi kaha se ek gari me kuch gunde aye aur mujhe uthake le gaye..'

sanskar-'WHAT!r u all right?main abhi DR ko bulati hu'..

swara-'nehi main thik hu.tum baitho.again she hold his hand & told him everythng-'after tht laksh ne uss gari ka picha kia aur mujhe bachaya.main bohot dar gayi thi aur..aur maine usse hug kar lia'.she closed her eyes tighly & a tear fall down 4m her eye..

sansker hold her hand tightly,& ask calmly-'fir kya hua'.

swara looked down-'usne bhi muje hug kia aur..aur..mere ma..mathepe ki..kiss kia.'

swara suddenly looked up & said-trust me sanskar uss waqt wo sab itna jaldi hua main kya kar rahi hu kuch samajh nehi aya.i was scared.par jab mujhe hosh aya i jst cm bk to home'..all the time she hold sanskar's hand..

sanskar hugged him tightly...thn said-'i trust u sanskar.tumhe mujhe explaination dene ki zarurat nehi hai.agar mujhe tumse explaination chahiye hota to main kaal raat hi tumse expaination mangti jab laksh raat ke do baje humare kamre me aya tha.& uss waqt tumare jaga koi aur vi hota to wohi karta..now relax.'I m happy tht u shared evrythng.

Swara jst stared at him & suddenly spoke-'kyu karte ho itna mujhpe bharosa...kyu karte ho itna pyaar wo vi tab jab isme tumhe seway dard k kuch nehi mil raha..janti hu bohot selfish hu main...'but before she coula say further sanskar kept his finger on swara's lip & ssusshd her-'chup,ek dam chup.firse wohi baat suru kia tumne.mujhe pata hai mujhe meri zindagi me kya karna hai,kispe varosa kana hai,kisse pyar karna hai...its my prob.tum ye sab sochna bandh karo aur aram karo.'

swara-'ek baat bolu sanskar ,main janti hu,tum bhi jante ho ki main tumse pyaar nehi karti.par tum mere zindagi me bohot maine rakhte ho.bhalehi main tumse pyar nehi karti par tum mere dost se kuch zyada bante ja rahe ho.sab kehte hai i m a independent girl par main janti hu ki main tumpe depennd karne lagi hu & main khush hu.chahe jaise bhi ho ye sach hai humari shadi hui hai.pati-patni hai hum.i respect this relation.aaj karwachauth hai.& maine fast rakha hai.main aisa koi kam anjane me vi nehi karna chahti jisse iss riste ka apman ho.'

sanskar staring at her for sometime & thn give her a consoling hug.he kissed her forhead & hugged again..thy stand peacefully in each others arms..

sanskar's monolog-sayed humare rishte me avi vi chance hai.lakin insab me ragini ka msg,laksh ka waha hona fir kidnaping ye sab kya hain...jo vi ho I will find out.main humesha swara k sath hu,usse kuch nehi hone dunga.


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Posted: 10 years ago
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lovely awesome update
I so wish to see this scene in serial
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice update...last last lines that are really ture...lover urslf 1st so that u can love others nice...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tapathi

Nice update...last last lines that are really ture...lover urslf 1st so that u can love others nice...😊

thts my signature post.not a part of os.glad u lk it.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice work! I really hope that Swara tells Sanskaar everything about the kidnapping and Lakshya saving her before he sees those pictures that Ragini send MM.
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Awesome OS 👏👏
Loved it 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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lovely update dear.. sanskar's care and trust beyond words.. good job.. write more..

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