Ankahee - SwaSan poetry

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@Jess_Ru

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

omg yahan poets bhi hain ...wow very nice yaar do write more

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CarpediemRose

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

It was so awesome,loved it a lot👏

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Malangan

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: medhasankar
See, I told ya..you would write very well.
Poignant..and straight from the heart shab. Very well done.👏

The last couple of lines...brilliantly conveyed his state of mind.

Keep writing.

Love--
Medha.

Thanks for encouragement: D

When I wrote ..I felt it was adhura and I don't know ..coz according to me he hav dealt with more pain and loneliness than we could hav think . losing someone you love is the hardest part. And to live with the fact tears you apart every nano second.

He had no other way but revenge and wounds which he kept them fresh and never let them heal.

I will definitely write more :)

M glad u liked it

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Malangan

@TeriMalang

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Shikha022
that was superb for a moment i thought m in writing forum..
so started writing its reply or say flip part...
but then realized that its if !!
loved it.
you shd write more !!

Awww that was a huge compliment.

I would really love to read everyone's reply to poetry.

Everyone hav different visions thus a new angle to the ankahee.

I will do

M glad u liked it :)

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Malangan

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11
Shab 🤗
Thanks so much for mentioning me! I meant what I said and this proves it! Loves the pathos in this, the devastation from the pain this love causes comes through so well! And yes please do write more.
I thought as I read this:

Labzon se karna hai bayaan mushkil iss mohobbat ki gherariyon ko
Bass hai yeh ek dariyaan, tanhaiyon aur dard ka,
Aise hai doobe hum ke na hai koi kinara
Fanah hein harr aarzoo pyaar ki joh nahi tera sahara.

Sorry- pretty poor compared to yours but came to me so wanted to share :)

Shruti 🤗

It's all you guys encourament . warna this would hav never come out :P cz m kinda shy when it comes to my poetries :P

This poetry is nothing compared to all the pain he went through. He lost everyone in one single day and was dealing with same pain everyday for years. That definetaly hadn't been easy on him. Thus he found a new way .rage , revenge against his own ppl which atleast gave him a reason to continue this life .

Omg! This was beautiful.

The depth of his love cannot be said in wrds neither can ever be measured.

Unfortunate for him,he cannot even expect the same love back

And is determined to love the same person with all his

Oh come on . that was so apt. Ankahee ehsaas of sanskar. It fits so perfectly :)

Glad u liked it

I will defo write more