More Dn Frnzzzzzz...!!!!

Hlooo frnz... m nt nw here..but i didnt knw abt writtng a stry here.. ;) :) But i gt to knw so m thnkng to rite my stry here... soo if u guys are intrstd so let me knw ..through ur respnse... Title of my stry is "More dn frzzz"

"More dn FRNZ" CHARACTER INTRO:- Manik/Nandini- lead members Manik- 20 yrs old Handsome luking guy who brokeup with his gf soha..A vry gud frn who can even die for his frnz..Superb singer.. Nandini-19 yr old fun lvng sweet grl..who is full oflife.. Navya-common frnd of manik and nandini.. cabir-Bf of navya,bst frn of manik,nd close frnd ofnandu. Abhi- cool handsome guy, Nandu's bro...nd likesmukti. Mukti-bst frn of nandu...nd has a crush on abhi. Dhruv/Alya- sweet couple and nandu's close frndz... Nandu's gang - "Avengers" (mukti,alya,dhruv,navya) They are science students and music is dere passion.. nandini and mukti are guitarist..navya flute player..dhruv is drum master..alya piano playr.. Abhi- senior of dem..nd an Architect student..also have sm knowledge of music.. "

Nice story

Hey..
Congratulations for writing a story..
Nice concept..
Good work..
All the best..

nice concept...n also nice title...

Part-1: Class room scene: Alya- hey guys..dnt u thnk dis lectr is going sooborng..i mean i cant tolerate it ... Mukti-chil babes!! Tere saath at least tera bf toh..mera soch..hw i m feeling.. & God knws yenandini khn rh gyi.. Daily late hoti h madm.. Dhruv- Hang on guys!! dere she is..(A sweet bubly grl is standng at d door wearingwhite top nd red jeans..hvng an innocnt puppyxpressions on her face).. Nandu- Mam!! may i plzz cm in..? Mrs Singh- Ooh look whz dere..(in sarcasm) mamaap mjhse puch ku rhi hn..plzz aayiye na.. Aj knsabhana h apje paas late aane ka.. Nandu- (yawning) Noo mam aj to bhana sochneka tym hi nh mla.. srry..(with a cute smyl on hrface) Mrs singh - seriusly nandini.. u always manage toentr in my clss aftr getting 20 min late.. by showngur dis puupy face nd smyl.. cm in.. Nandu entrs in clss nd take her seat with mukti..mukti givs hr a killr xprssn.. alya ,navya nddhruv greets her.. After attending class of 1hr and lab of 1 hr..dey allget hell tird nd bor..so dey decide to sm refrshment music..dey entrs to music room and strt dere jamming session... mnk's entry in nxt chappy... tll me hws it?