{ff:I want her back} CH-5 pg-21 Updt.

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Hi everyone. 😃
This is my new story I hope you will like this. 😊



This story revolves around the two main characters going through the worst phase of their life. Their love is grinding between their egos, fate and stupidity. They need a break from this situation full of pain. Let's see what will they do something or not to save their marriage.




I WANT HER BACK








PROLOGUE



No pls!! .. Pls don't go!! , don't go!! , listen I am sorry.. Pls!!


Someone tried to stop a woman from going. But she left with her stuff.


I woke up from my sleep startled by the dream only to realize that my dream was my reality, my truth now. she has gone for forever


She left me. I still remember her face while she was going. She was crying, she was crying because of me. I was the reason.


I sat straight on my bed and looked at my room. It was her room. Eveything was full of life when she was here but now they all look dull, devoid of happiness. It's been two days now since I saw her. She wasn't even answering my calls. She has gone through so much in these days. She needs me. I need her. I can't bear this much alone. I can't lost her specially when I have just realized the importance of my love. I need to go their. I want her back. I want her back in my life.


Knock!! Knock!!. Someone tapped the door.


"Who's there? " I asked.


"I.. Your sister. "


I opened the door. I saw the lady in front of me with the food with her. She was my neighbour in her forties but for us she was part of my family. She took care of me and her like our mother. When Nandini needs her mother the most at that time she was there for her always.


"Eat this. You hadn't any thing in your stomach since last night. "


"I am not hungry di. "


"You need to be strong for her. She needs you to be there for her. Pls have this. "


"I want her back di. I am going to her to bring her back. "


She wiped my tears that were flowing continuously from last some days. These were the worst days of us. I cursed myself for not able to understand her even after almost two years of our marriage.


"I know you will. " she smiled at me and then leaves me alone.


After an hour I was ready to go to her. To bring my lifeline back. I started my car. There was 2 long hrs distance between us. How weird we humans are? We didn't realized the importance of a thing /person until we lost them. I laughed at myself at my stupidity.




"Enough is enough Nandini. "


"Why Manik?Why you always think that I am lying to you? "


"Because you never tell me the truth. "


"You know what I don't want to explain anything so good night. "


She said angrily and went to room locked it from inside banning me to go inside my own room.


Even I wasn't interested in listening to her at that moment and I slept on the bed in other room and that's the day when I realized I have lost everything.




So guys this is my new story and I seriously want all of you to tell me about what you think how's the story. I am writing it because it is inspired by the true story and I seriously want to write this. Another reason is that my other ss is going to end soon and my ff ahh! M still confused over it and this means I am free. I will continue this one if I'll get a good response.


So what you have to say tell me.


Thank you so much for reading. 😊





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Chapter-5 😃


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Posted: 9 years ago
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interesting ...continue soon 😊
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Hey nice nd intresting
Ll get to knw more
As ll get more updates
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nice start
do pm mre when u update
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Nice n interesting story waiting to know manik kaise manaega use.
Update soon
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Nice ff..continue it..one suggestion give character sketch..it's easy to connect with this story..n thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome prologue...

loved it so much...

it is so true...the day you loose something you realise the value of it and need in your life...you always learn the hard way...

manan have drifted apart after 2 years of marriage...

wondering what made them move away...

can't wait to see what happens next...

keep up the good work and continue soon...

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new ff...
Interesin prolouge..
Lvd d concpt..
Do continue..
Waitin 4 d nxt prt...

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Very interesting.
Exciteddd for next parttt.
New concept.
Continue please.
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Originally posted by: Lovelylav7

Nice ff..continue it..one suggestion give character sketch..it's easy to connect with this story..n thanks for pm



I know it will be easy to understand but according to me character sketch likh diya to sab pehle reveal ho jayega that's why I didn't wrote any
And don't worry first chapter mein jitna possible hoga main bata dungi 😊😊
Is it ok?
And ya thanks for telling me this😊

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