{ff:I want her back} CH-5 pg-21 Updt. - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
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its awesome cont soon plzz
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb
A very emotional update
Nandu's miscarriage... Her condition... Manik crying and trying to control her
The distance between them increasing...
Who is di?? Their neighbor?..
Very well written
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ArSha_ManNan

Superb
A very emotional update
Nandu's miscarriage... Her condition... Manik crying and trying to control her
The distance between them increasing...
Who is di?? Their neighbor?..
Very well written
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Thank u
Yup that di is their neighbour.
Will provide more detail about characters in nxt updt.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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emotional strt ..

manik used 2 neglct nandini 4 money ... dats disgusting !!

bt wht hppnd 2 nandini ??

wht ws she hiding ??

or why she dont wnt manik now ??
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Originally posted by: bluelake99

emotional strt ..

manik used 2 neglct nandini 4 money ... dats disgusting !!

bt wht hppnd 2 nandini ??

wht ws she hiding ??

or why she dont wnt manik now ??


Will clear all ur doubts😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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when are u gonna update?????????????????????????????😕
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seriously awesome loved it
update soon😃
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Superb...loved your story plsss update soon...
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HI Everyone. enjoy this one too.I know chota hai par m busy preparing for my tests next week. N something is better than nothing😊😊
CHAPTER-2



"Everything is under control now. Don't worry. She is completely fine now. " Doctor told me after the process when I was waiting outside completely tensed.

I felt some relief.

"I want to meet her. Can I? " I asked the doctor.

"Yes you can but first she wants to meet some di. Till then Complete the all the formalities Mr. Malhotra. She'll get discharged today only. "

"Thanks " He went from there.

"Manik" di called me from back. She was with us too.

"You should go inside. " I told her to go inside as now she needs someone but not me. And that hurts more.

I saw her going inside.



Next day, Around 11 in the morning I prepared the breakfast for Nandini. She was sleeping upstairs. Di told me that she was much more heartbroken after seeing the dead baby after the abortion. She was continuously telling her about how the baby looked like in the hospital. It wasn't completely grown. She hasn't eaten anything since yesterday. I have tried my best to feed her but it's of no use.





I went to the room with the breakfast, place that on the table and started drawing the curtain to let some sunlight in from outside. There was already enough darkness in our life. I sat near her on the bed kissed her forehead and tried to wake her.

"Nandini! " I just wanted to make her feed something otherwise she will deteriorate her health.

She opened her eyes, for some moments she looked at me like asking for some reasons and suddenly turned her head towards the other side of the bed.

"It hurts me Nandini. " at last I said those words aloud. It's becoming unbearable every second. She straightened herself.

"Talk to me please. Look at me at least. I know there is another thing too which you aren't telling me. . "

"Why? Why are you acting now? Di isn't here. No one is here. Be happy as this is what you always want, my child is no more now and I am leaving too. " she said it in one breath.

Silence Complete silence filled the room.

Those rude words of her penetrate through my heart, shocked me deeply. What was she saying?

She was wrong here, Completely wrong. I love her, I loved my unborn baby too. She is my life now.

She started packing her bags. Her face was blank, devoid of all emotions. I stopped her by holding her both hands. I made her sit on the bed and I sat on the floor. She wasn't looking at me. A tear fell on my hands which were holding hers. She was crying again. She hold my hand when I tried to wipe her tears.

"I have signed the papers already. They are in your cupboard. " she said still not looking at me.

"Which papers? " I didn't realize until she told me.

"Divorce papers. That were in your cupboard. I have signed those papers. I always want your happiness. And this time too, you will get what you want."

Divorce papers!! Which were in my cupboard?

OH God! But how come she get them? I had thrown them away for forever. They were my mistake. I signed those because of some misunderstandings and because I was stupid. No.. No she can't leave me like this. For this foolishness of mine. I'll rather die than being without her.

"But I love you. " Just this escaped my mouth. At that moment, my priority was to stop her from going. I knew she' wasn't interested in any explanation And no explanation can compassionate my mistake.

"Don't act. "

She told me looking directly into my eyes. And this proved that she really think like this. For her, I was acting. Was I really?

She freed her hands from my hold and again started packing her bags.

I looked towards her my vision blurred because of the tears in my eyes.

"Do you really think I am acting Nandini? "I asked her hoping her to say no.

But she crushed my hope.

"Yes" she said her voice unclear because she was crying too.

I can't let her go just like that.

I went to her and again hold her hand. But she jerked it away.

"Nandini that papers.. That papers doesn't mean anything now. They are trash for me. I have signed those because I was a complete fool. I was mad. I am still. They were part of our past. I have signed them six months back .I really don't have any idea who placed them in my cupboard. I swear on you, I had thrown them. I love you and will always love you. I promise.. "

"No pls no, I don't want to hear your false promises once again. "

Her every word was crushing the already broken pieces of my heart.

"My promises five months back too and today weren't false. They were true. They are true. How can you say this? Don't you love me Nandini? "

I was afraid of listening something which I didn't want to hear.

"I used to love you. But now it's over. Bye " she said harshly.



Kuchh Bhi Na Suna,Kab Ka Tha Gila

Kaise Keh Diya Alvida





She picked her bag and went outside the room asked the driver to taker her to her home. She gave alast glance to the house and then left.She left me. I had lost my voice by listening to her last words while leaving.

She used to love me?? She used o love me!!



Neither you came nor I...That's why it's all ruined today.



So this is it.😃

Phirse batao na kaisa tha.😳

Silent readers,please give me your opinions too na if u like this and agar pasand ni aaya to baat hi alag hai phir.😊

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