ISHRA OS LOVE WILL KEEP US TOGETHER

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Posted: 9 years ago
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English and hindi both r not my mother tonguepls ignore typos
[AUTHOR NOTE : ISHRA LIVE ALONE IN A FLAT]
AFTER ENTERING THE KEY HE GET TO KNOW THAT THE MAIN DOOR OF HIS FLAT IS OPEN"HOW CAN BE THE DOOR IS OPEN ISHITA CAN'T BE AT HOME AS I HAVE SLAPPED HER IN ANGER I THINK ITS THIEF AND HOW COME THE HOUSE IS SO CLEAN AFTER HAVING ARGUMENT WITH HER I DIDN'T CLEAR THE HOUSE "THOUGH RAMAN
HE SEARCH THE WHOLE HALL BEHIND THE SOFA IN KITCHEN BUT DIDN'T SEE ANYONE HE THOUGHT MAY BE ISHITA CAME BACK
HE ENTER IN THEIR BEDROOM AND SAW HER BAG WAS LYING IN BED"JKR EK DIN BHI MUJHSE DUR NAHI REH PAYI"THOUGHT RAMAN
HE GOES TO FRESHEN UP
AFTER SOME TIME HE SAW ISHU ENTER THE ROOM WEARING A SARI AND HER HAND WAS FULL OF CLOTHS"SHE IS LOOKING ELEGANT SHE HAS WEAR THE SARI FOR THE 1ST TIME AS SHE DONT WEAR SARI MAYBE SHE CAME FROM THE TERRACE AFTER WASHING CLOTHES " THOUGHT RAMAN
SHE GLARE AT HIM KEEP THE CLOTH IN CUPBOARD AND EXITED THE ROOM
HE COME TO HALL AND SEE HER WORKING ON KITCHEN
"TUM KAB AYI"HE ASK HER
SHE GLARE AT HIM AGAIN
"TUM MERE GHAR ME HO ISILIYE TUMHE MUJHSE BAAT KARNI HOGI MAIN KISI GHUNGI LARKI K SATH SANSAR BANA NAHI SAKTA"SAID RAMAN
BUT SHE DIDN'T UTTER A SINGLE WORD SHE KEPT WORKING
SO HE THOUGHT TO BE SILENT FOR SOME TIMES
AFTER 10 MINS
SHE SAID"WANNA DRINK TEA"
HE WAS SHOCKED THAT SHE WAS TALKING LIKE NOTHING HAD HAPPENED BUT HE COMPOSE HIMSELF
AND SAID "HA PAR AKELE NAHI TUMHARE SAATH"
SHE SILENTLY GOES TO KITCHEN
RAMAN'S POV
I KNOW I DID WRONG BY SLAPPING HER I SHOULDN'T HAVE DONE THIS
OUR RELATIONSHIP IS ABOUT
7/8 YEARS WE HAVE MET FIRST IN OUR COLLEGE READ AT SAME UNIVERSITY
BY THE WAY I WAS THE ONE MAD FOR HER ALWAYS GLUED WITH HER BUT I DIDN'T IRRITATE HER EVER
I LOST MY PARENTS IN A ACCIDENT AFTER PASSING INTER EXAMINATION I CAME TO DELHI FROM PUNJAB
LIVED IN MATCH (WHERE SOME BACHELOR BOYS LIVE)
I SOMEHOW BE FRIEND WITH HER BUT I DIDN'T TELL HER THAT I LOVE HER
I PROMISED MYSELF THAT I WILL WIN HER AND MAKE HER FALL IN LOVE WITH ME IT WILL BE RIGHT TO SAY THAT IT WAS MY PLAN
I HAD ONLY THOUGHT THAT SHE IS MINE

AS THEY SAY PATIENCE FRUIT IS SWEET AND I WIN HER AND MADE A RELATION WITH HER
BUT THEIR WAS A PROBLEM HER FAMILY WAS AGAINST OUR MARRIGE AND IT WAS NORMAL AFTER SOMEDAYS HER BROTHER BALA AND SOME OF HIS FRIENDBEAT ME FOR MAKING RELATION WITH HER
MY LEG WAS LITERALLY BROKE AFTER THAT INCIDENT THEY STARTED TO SEE BOYS FOR HER MARRIAGE. OUR UNIVERSITY LIFE END
I TOOK A JOB BEFORE IT I WAS A HOME TUTOR THEN WE DECIDED TO ELOPE AND GET MARRIED AND WE DID IT IMMEDIATELY AFTER DECIDING IT
AFTER SOMEDAY THEIR ANGER REDUCED AND THEY ACCEPT ME AS THEIR SIL
BUT I WAS HELL ANGRY WITH HER BROTHER WHEN SHE REMEMBER HER PARENTS I TOOK HER TO HER MATERNAL HOUSE AND I WARN HER THAT " MERE GHAR TUMHARE PARENTS AUR JO KOI BHI HAI AKE REH SAKTA HAI WO JITNE DIN CHAHE BUT TUMHARA WO BROTHER MERE GHAR ME KADAM TAK NAHI RAKHEGA"
BUT YESTERDAY WHEN I CAME BACK FROM OFFICE I SAW HER BROTHER WAS SITTING IN MY HOUSE I DIDN'T SAID ANYTHING TO HIM AFTER HE LEAVE WE HAD A SERIOUS ARGUMENT AND I END UP SLAPPING HER AND SHE LEAVE THE HOUSE I KNOW I WAS WRONG THIS TIME MY TRANCE BROKE BY HER VOICE
"YE LIZIYE CHAI "BUT SHE BROUGHT ONE CUP OF TEA
I SAID TO HER"EK CUP KYU LAYI OH SAMJHA PEHLE MAI PIYUNGA PHIR TUM PIYOGI HAI NA SHARING SHARING VAI WAH TUM APNI ROMANTIC PATI K SATH REHTE REHTE ROMANTIC HO GAYI NOT BAD HA!."SHE AGAIN DIDN'T SAID ANYTHING AND WAS GONE
AFTER BATHING I COME TO HALL AND SEE HER
SHE WAS WATCHING TV
I SAT WITH HER IN SOFA VERY CLOSELY
SHE MOVE BESIDE AGAIN I SAT WITH HER TOUCHING HER BODY SHE AGAIN MOVE ASIDE THIS TIME I KEEP HER HEAD IN HER LAP AND SHE STAND UP ANGRILY AND SAID "TUMHARA PROBLEM KYA HAI""WHAT CAN BE MY PROBLEM I WAS SITTING WITH MY WIFE AND FEELING THE WARMTH OF HER BODY U KNOW!"NOW SHE OUTBURST "YE PYAR TAB KAHA THA JAB MAI GHAR SE NIKLI THI YE PYAR TAB KAHA THA JAB MAI ITNI RAT KO GHAR SE NIKAL GAYI THI YE PYAR TAB KAHA THA JAB MAI THAND SE KAAP RAHI THI"
"MAI TO AMMA APPA K GHAR JANE HI WALI THI PHIR ADHI RASTE SE LAUT AYI YE SOCH KAR KI TUM MERE LIYE TENSED HOGE ISILIYE MAI SARI RAAT TERRACE PAR THI ITNI THAND MAI TAB KAHA GAYA THA YE PYAR TAB KYU NAHI AYE AP MERE LIYE"SHE COULD NOT SAY ANYTHING SHE RAN TO HER ROOM SOBBING HE THOUGHT "SHE IS RIGHT YAAR I SHOULD HAVE STOP HER WHAT DID I DONE SHIT "AFTER 2 HR
ISHITA CALLED RAMAN FOR DINNER HE CAME AND SAT ON A CHAIR AND SAID TO HER"TUMHE APNE BAAL KHULE RAKHNE CHAHIYE THE NA"LISTENING TO HIM SHE WENT TO KITCHEN AND COME BACK I NOTICE SHE OPENED HER HAIR NOW I SEE A SOFT LOOK ON HER FACE TAKING THE CHANCE I SAID TO HER THAT "I WILL NOT HAVE DINNER U HAVE TO FEED ME "SEEING MY STUBBORN FACE SHE TOOK THE PLATE AND SERVE FOOD AND ABOUT TO FEED ME BUT I STOP HER SAYING "I DON'T WANT TO EAT FOOD "
SHE SAID INNOCENTLY " THEN"
I SAID SHAMELESSLY "I WANNA EAT UR LIPS"SHE BLUSHED PROFUSELYAND SAID
"WO BHI MILEGA DON'T WORRY BUT AFTER DINNER "BUT U COULD HAVE SAID SORRY TO ME BUT U DIDN'T"
I SAID WO EK ADVERTISEMENT HAI NA SIRF EXCEL KA
"DAAG SE AGAR KUCH ACCHA HO TO DAG ACCHE HAI WAISE HI JHAGRE SE AGAR EK KISS MILE TOH JHAGRA ACCHA HI HAINA "
SAYINGS THIS HE CAPTURE HER LIPS



THAT'S IT MY DEAR FRIENDS ISHE LIKHNE MAI MUJHE 4 HR LAGE PLS GIVE UR REVIEWS ITS REALLY ENCOURAGE ME TO WRITE ANOTHER STORY
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice OS Kimty..
U portrayed the emotions of real life couple in a nice manner..
"Bade bade deshon mein aisi choti choi baatein hoti rehti hai"
This line suits for any normal couple in real life.. 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely one
But u didn't complete it
Why Bala was sitting in their house
But loved how he ask for kiss
But he didn't apologize also
But it was cute.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: cutieruhi

Lovely one
But u didn't complete it
Why Bala was sitting in their house
But loved how he ask for kiss
But he didn't apologize also
But it was cute.


tumhara Bhai tumse Milne ata haina??
waise hi bala ishita se Milne aya hai
why he will ask for apology
he gave dialogue of surf exel na!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: kimty1230


tumhara Bhai tumse Milne ata haina??
waise hi bala ishita se Milne aya hai
why he will ask for apology
he gave dialogue of surf exel na!!





Ok thanks for ur clarification dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
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good trybro good try!!!
keep writing more!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice one
was her brother there to make amends
can understand Ramans anger but to take it on Ishita ...very wrong
was upset that instead of apologising he chose to woo her back
but hey what works for them ...lol
had little trouble translating so wanted to request next story could u plz put subtitles
keep up the writing
thanks for pm nplz keep em comin
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Khubsurat Os Keep Writing Like This
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice os kimty but raman was really wrong this time and he should apologize ishu for the same ,poor ishu was in terrace all the night.rest was lovely.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice is
U portray ishra emotions really nicely
But raman ko sorry bolna chahiye tha yaar

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