new asya story sneak peek pg 2{7-11-15}

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Posted: 9 years ago
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HELLO EVERYONE,

I know no one remembers me,

but still I am back,

with asya story ,

same one with azma version also,

here it is,

She was crying ,

Asking him not to leave her and go away,

But he didn't listen to her and went away,

She fell onto her knees ,

She sat there for God knows how much time ,

She was still thinking that maybe ,maybe he will come and take her away from this cruel world,

But alas nothing like that happened,

She was still waiting on her knees all alone there in that not so crowded park,

Lost in her own world,

Crying to herself ,remembering all the memories with him,

When suddenly she felt a tap on her shoulder,

Her face brightened up thinking it was him,

But all her happiness went into vain,

It was not him it was someone whom she knew,

It was her best friend, whom she thought she had lost because of her lover,

But no he was back and ready to forgive her for everything,

And he wanted a chance for them ,

She thought to herself and thought that maybe she should agree ,

And then she couldn't remember when was the last time she was so happy,

She was glad that she decided to move on and now she is happy ,

With him, her bestie, life partner, lover...

This was her love story...

Sometimes it is good to forget bad memories and move on in life .

And yes true love does exists...

Please let me know how is it,

should i continue?

thanks in advance.

for pms buddy me,

joota chappals most welcomešŸ˜†,

and plz let me know is it good or bad.


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Amina... thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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An interesting concept ... loved it ...
Will love to read further ...
Plz continue it and pm me if you can ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I like asya version more
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Both versions
Loved to read it
Plz continue soon
Thanks
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Amina...

An interesting concept ... loved it ...
Will love to read further ...
Plz continue it and pm me if you can ...


thanks buddy me for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Both versions
Loved to read it
Plz continue soon
Thanks

thanks will do
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: azsumay

I like asya version more


thankee😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow nice
Hoping tht BFF is asad
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sneak Peek

asad please mujhe maaf kardo .
agar aaj tumne mujhse mooh mod liya toh main mar jaungi.
jo galti hui usse bhul jao
aur please mujhe eik mauka do...
said zoya crying helplessly..

p.s:
sorry ppl due to college unable to find time
but will try to update really soon .
hope u understand.😊

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