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Posted: 9 years ago
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Yes i am back with a new story, dont know how they come to my mind only during exams...
Well anyways here is a glimpse i have still not decided whether it would be FiveShot or FF or SS so based on the response and how the story goes...


Aliya's POV:

Damn this cold and fever i cant wait for them to announce who that lucky *coughs* person is!!!!
Tv -" And in 2 mins we will announce the winners name..."
After a short commercial break...

"Break it seems *Achhhooo* That's like half an hour more...
Hope they announce before she comes..

Sound of door opening...

"Oh god hoped too sooon" Damn...

Nandini's POV:

Yes just one more exam left and then i will become a graduate and can finally be free for a few months, but i will surely miss my college friends...

While going to the room i could hear the tv and Aliya's sneezing(:P) now i have to tell mom to stop her and her obsession with...

Opens the door and
"Aliya how many times have i told yo---"

"Shhh shut up they are going to announce soon"

"Announce wh-??""

"Shut it Nandu"
and there comes my poor pillow flying to my face,I just shook my head and started arranging the mess she calls bed.

Tv-"...and now the lucky person is *drum roll*"

"stupid tv people and their gimmicks ,why are yooo---"

*smack another pillow*

"shut up nandu"

I shock my head and started arranging again and she went to her tv world.

Tv-"yes it is Nandini Moorty who will be spending the next week with the famous rockstar MM"

"Another of their stupid reality shows youuu, wait what ?! me ?! wth ???""

I turned to look at the tv which had my pic on the corner with the host going on about how lucky i am and all...

I looked at Aliya whose expression changed from exited, sad, shock,disappointment,and again Happiness...

"wait no that cannot happen shit no way..."

Not what i am thinking please , Aayippa please save me...

Aliya's POV:

I was sad to not her my name but when i heard Nandu's name i was sad but my brain gave a new idea and i looked at her with hopeful eyes...
The one she cant say no to my puppy dog face ;)

"no aliya no i won't"

"Nanduuu"

"No you know i hate him and his attitude and recklessness , I dont even now how you made me to let stick his picks all around our room but this i wont accept no, N-O, never"

And she walked out of the room.


After 3 hours...

Nandini's POV:

"Nandu , Aliya hasnt taken her food nor medicines , she isnt talking to anyone properly, I am scared if her typhoid comes again"

OMG this girl and her MM tantrums, she knows exactly how to make me agree.

I walked up to our room and saw her talking to his poster and not looking at me, i sat next to her and told

"fine i will go only for you, when is it ?"

I could see the excitement in her eyes and i cant deny that too my little sis (the drama queen)

"Really Nandu you will spend a week with him for me ?"

"Yes Alooo-Wait wait what ?"

A week with him, Ayippa what have i gotten myself into ?!
A week with the monster,attitude filled guy ?!

Why can't she be the fan of Ranbir or Siddarth ?!


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So i am sure you all know ho MM is ? right guys ?

So how is it ? it was a really sudden idea so sorry for any mistakes i had to hurry to finish up studying sorry for the errors *not proof read*
share your views and tell me if i should continue
-Niki

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Posted: 9 years ago
#2

awesome update...

loved it so much...

this is gonna be very interesting...

nandu spending a week with manik...for the sake of alya...

can't wait to see what happens next...

keep up the good work and continue soon...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice plot
ofcourse we know who mm is
but thing is nandu hates him and going to spend whole week
well that sounds intersting
egrly waiting for starting of ur story
please pm me when u update
tc
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Posted: 9 years ago
#4
its awesome...continue. If send PM please PM me😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#5
Interesting ... Simply wow
Hahaha poor Nandu and let's see what manik feels abt this lol
Let me know when u update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#6
Obviously u should continue...
Do one thing introduce Dhruv for Aliyaa too
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Posted: 9 years ago
#7
intresting...
continue soon...
lets c how she gonna spend whole week with mm... 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice start and nice story
Let's how they both get involved with each other
Continue soon
And pls pm me too
Take care
:)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Its awesome
Plss PM me next time

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