I want this scenes btw SAWSAN

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Scene 1:
Pooja in MM
Ap ask swara to bring Pooja sanam which are in store room so swara will go to bring that and sanskar will see swara going to store room he want talk abt ragini so he will follow her.store room is very dark...then swasan both are talking by closing door so that knw one will listen there talks...suddenly sujatha will come push the door...Soo that sanskar will fall on swara...due to darkness sujatha she won't see them and more over they will be behind the door..in that push...sanskar who falls on swara accendently his lips touches her neck...😉 and jark like current passes in swara...

By this accident scene they are unable to look into each other... Sanskar says sorry to swara and swara also accept his sorry...but by this scene a small kind of happiness generates in this both couple



Frnds how is this?it is just a small thought which u got in my mind...Soo I presented it there are some more scenes running in my mind... I will post later if u guys like it plzz comment on it...iam not a good writer...plz any mistakes in my writing and presenting scene forgive me...😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
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amazing I would love to see this scene in serial hope we get this kind of scenes in serial
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Posted: 10 years ago
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SCENE 2:
Morning aarti time:

All MM people are near mandir swara and ragini doing aarti...suddenly there will come a sanke...by seeing that everyone will get scared...and ran here and there will scare

Aadarsh will ran near stairs and will stand there and laksh will follow him with more scare and more secure he will get onto aadarsh...😉

Dp will hide behind the pillar and ram will hide behind do

Ap ran near kitchen and pari also will be with ap by holding each other

Sujatha and ragini jumps on sofa...and with scare they hold each other...😆


And finally...swara with scare will hold sanskar...and our sanskar is protecting her...in his waramth arms she feels very secure...

Later servants come and they will take away the sanke after that everyone will come to normal position except swasan...
They both are enjoying each other in embrass...suddenly sanskar come into sneses and try to move swara but she will not and agn hold him tightly and says


Plz sanskar mujh mat chodo mujh saap say bhut darr lagtha hai...plz don't leave me...and take away from me here...iam scared a lot...

And Dp says sanskar to take swara into there bedroom and sanskar take her to there bedroom...😉


How this guys...saap ne miladi jodi...😉

Any errors are mistakes forgive me...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tapathi

Scene 1:

Pooja in MM
Ap ask swara to bring Pooja sanam which are in store room so swara will go to bring that and sanskar will see swara going to store room he want talk abt ragini so he will follow her.store room is very dark...then swasan both are talking by closing door so that knw one will listen there talks...suddenly sujatha will come push the door...Soo that sanskar will fall on swara...due to darkness sujatha she won't see them and more over they will be behind the door..in that push...sanskar who falls on swara accendently his lips touches her neck...😉 and jark like current passes in swara...

By this accident scene they are unable to look into each other... Sanskar says sorry to swara and swara also accept his sorry...but by this scene a small kind of happiness generates in this both couple



Frnds how is this?it is just a small thought which u got in my mind...Soo I presented it there are some more scenes running in my mind... I will post later if u guys like it plzz comment on it...iam not a good writer...plz any mistakes in my writing and presenting scene forgive me...😊

love to See That
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice thread. Do write more scenes
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tapathi

Scene 1:

Pooja in MM
Ap ask swara to bring Pooja sanam which are in store room so swara will go to bring that and sanskar will see swara going to store room he want talk abt ragini so he will follow her.store room is very dark...then swasan both are talking by closing door so that knw one will listen there talks...suddenly sujatha will come push the door...Soo that sanskar will fall on swara...due to darkness sujatha she won't see them and more over they will be behind the door..in that push...sanskar who falls on swara accendently his lips touches her neck...😉 and jark like current passes in swara...

By this accident scene they are unable to look into each other... Sanskar says sorry to swara and swara also accept his sorry...but by this scene a small kind of happiness generates in this both couple



Frnds how is this?it is just a small thought which u got in my mind...Soo I presented it there are some more scenes running in my mind... I will post later if u guys like it plzz comment on it...iam not a good writer...plz any mistakes in my writing and presenting scene forgive me...😊


Hayee
Cute and intimate, love it! 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tapathi

SCENE 2:

Morning aarti time:

All MM people are near mandir swara and ragini doing aarti...suddenly there will come a sanke...by seeing that everyone will get scared...and ran here and there will scare

Aadarsh will ran near stairs and will stand there and laksh will follow him with more scare and more secure he will get onto aadarsh...😉

Dp will hide behind the pillar and ram will hide behind do

Ap ran near kitchen and pari also will be with ap by holding each other

Sujatha and ragini jumps on sofa...and with scare they hold each other...😆


And finally...swara with scare will hold sanskar...and our sanskar is protecting her...in his waramth arms she feels very secure...

Later servants come and they will take away the sanke after that everyone will come to normal position except swasan...
They both are enjoying each other in embrass...suddenly sanskar come into sneses and try to move swara but she will not and agn hold him tightly and says


Plz sanskar mujh mat chodo mujh saap say bhut darr lagtha hai...plz don't leave me...and take away from me here...iam scared a lot...

And Dp says sanskar to take swara into there bedroom and sanskar take her to there bedroom...😉


How this guys...saap ne miladi jodi...😉

Any errors are mistakes forgive me...


Hahah this would be hilarious! and we'll get a cute Swasan hug. 😳
@Bold- 😆😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanq frnds...I will implement some more scens very soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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SCENE 3
Helping a little girl:

Swara and sanskar become very close there are connecting and swara also started lilltle bit of feelings for sasnkar...everyday sanskar used to say swara that he is going to office...but one due to urgent meeting he won't infrm her and he will leave for office...he was in meeting so that he will switch of his mobile so that no1 shud disturb...


In office:
After meeting has been done laksh will come and he will say that he want to talk to him abt ragini.They will decide to talk outside so that DP or RAM or Aadrsh not listen.they started taking on road park they standing outside of the park and talking meanwhile one small girl who is playing with ball attrct sanskar he just concentrt on that girl more...(because sanky just love kids)and sanskar stop looking that girl and listen what laksh is saying to him.

Meanwhile the ball which that little girl is playing will fall from her hands and roll towards road...little girl run behind ball to get that...suddenly a truck will be coming and this was seen by our hero sanskar and he will save that little girl. In this incident his head is injured...

MM House:

Here in MM swara she was just sitting chair which is in her balcony by closing her eyes and thinking "why today sanskar went without informing me at any of cost he will always say me and he will y not today"but...suddenly she will wake up that she feels something happen to sanskar..she towards her phone which kept on their bed and try to call him but phn is switch off she will get more tnsn and go down to ask sujatha whether she might have knw where he went she rushes downwards and went into kitchen where Ap and sujatha and park are arranging dishes for lunch...

Swara reaches sujatha and enqr abt sanskar where he went his mobile is swithd off aara where he is exactly...then sujatha replied aaj uska urgent meeting hai issiliya maara choori jaldi office chaligaye...lunch keliya ayaga wo

But eventhough swara was tnsed and her heart is saying kuch tho hua sanskar ko...while Ap observe swara and says to swara don't worry sanskar went to office only he will be back...and everyone leave kitchen except swara...he hold her hands and pray to god that nothing shud happen to sanskar...

Suddenly she will hear Sanskar...it was Ap kyu hua tujy...as chot kisa lagaa...

By hearing this swara run out from kitchen and saw sanskar with bandage on his head...and rushes towards him...veryone was tnsed and worried how this has been happens...then laksh explain whole story...then Sujatha says u shud be carfull agar thereby ko kuch hogaya tho...and Ap says aaj mein bhoot kush hu...humara beta badey kaam...sujatha mein jalti hu aap say...kyun ki itina acha beta ko jannam diya isliya...😊 and say sanskar to take rest..

Sujatha take sanskar into his room...swara she can't speak because everyone are around her she will take food for sanskar.


In swasan room:
She is angry,fustrted,tensced and worried abt him.she entered in room but she didn't spoke him kept food on table and went near cupboard to arrange it...sanskar observer her and try to speak with her and ask her y she is not talking are you angry on me...what happens y ur not talking...and sanskar trying to explain her and she unable to control her feelings and rushed towards him and huged him tightly...and broke into tears...and said y u went to office without infrmng...that meeting is that much imp that u can't even call me or even msg me...and where the hell ur phone how many times I tried to you...u knw how much I tnsed darr lag mujh I thought something has happen to you but don't knw what happend...you saved that little girl its okay u shud be careful ryt...jaan chaligayi this meri...tumara zindagi sirf tumara nahi hai sanskar...meri zindigi bi usky swath Judi hai...😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Scene 3 was very long...bear me plzz...if it is boring iam sorry...😊

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