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Chapter 16-Part 1
"God surely knows the hopes and fears you keep in your heart. For when you trust in his love, mracles happen."
It was already evening. The sun on the verge of going to sleep and moon about to come on it's duty. The birds going back to their home indicating that it was the time to have rest after the whole day's hard work. Jalal was still waiting for Jodha's call.. Not even a single call after they talked in the afternoon nor any message. He stood up to go to his home but not before checking his phone for the last time. He knew she was upset and also knew that he's going to be in a great trouble while facing her wrath but still waited for her to call.

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20th October 2015;
Bangalore
10:30 am
Two days had passed but Jodha didn't call. And when the tensed man called her, it said the mobile is switched off. His tension reached its peak and his anger too.
"What does she think about herself?" He banged on the wall after calling the nth time in the day.
Finally his creative mind had a clue about whom to reach for. He instantly stepped out of his cabin and went to that person.
"Aarnaa, I want surya's number... Otherwise you call him and ask him about Jodha's whereabouts.."
"Yes sir..."
The confused lady instantly called her friend.
"Hello surya..."
"Yes Aarnaa...what happened..."
Jalal said in a low tone audible to the lady in front of him. "Give it to me..."
"Talk to Jalal sir..." And handed over the phone to him..
"Ummm surya... I wanted to ask about Jodha..."
"Yes Jalal ask..." Surya knew what is coming up so he prepared himself about the listeners reaction.
"Umm how's Jodha? Is everything fine with her? I called her several times but her mobile is switched off.." In the meanwhile he walked inside his cabin to avoid unwanted paparazzi.
"Yes ... Actually Jo... Jodha.."
"Say it surya..."
"Vo Jodha's phone isn't working... So..."
"Oh.. That's all... I was so tensed for a moment.." He heaved a sigh of relief after listening to him.
"So can i talk to her if she's around ?" Added he.
"Nope... She's not here."
"Not here? Then where's she?"
"Don't you read the celebrity times?"
"Where did that come from Surya? I'm asking you something else and you are asking me whether I read the celebrity times? That's seriously crazy."
"Yes... Because today it highlighted What happened to Jodha Singh..."
"What do you mean Surya... Say it fast..."
"She's met with an accident yesterday morning . She's badly hurt her right foot and is in an critical s..state.and..."
"Whaaatt!" Saying that Jalal was shocked would be less to say. He wasn't able to say anything further neither he heard anything after that. He felt as if his newly formed world collapsed. Here, he was busy in cursing her for not calling him but, there,she was fighting for her life.
"Jalal... Jalal are you there?"
"I am coming there.." He uttered correction he whispered and the call went dead.
He immediately called Abdul and told him to arrange his private jet as there's an emergency. The flabbergasted man left from Bangalore not before informing his mother about Jodha. Though she insisted on accompanying him to Delhi but he politely refused saying he'd manage everything and he'd seek her help if needed.
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4 hours later.
CITY HOSPITAL
DELHI

A poignant man barged in frantically searching for his lady love's cabin.
"May i know the room number of Jodha... Jodha singh?"
"I'm sorry sir, but we can't allow you inside in the non-visiting hours."
Meanwhile Moti stepped out of the elevator and saw Jalal standing in the reception area arguing with the receptionist.
"Jalal!" She yelled though not in a too loud voice.
"Moti... I want to see Jodha. Please..." Pleaded the helpless man.
"Jalal... Jalal calm down.. Calm down... I'll take you there."
She then turned towards the receptionist and said "he's a part of the family and not a visitor. So please..."
"Ok ma'am... Since you are a family member so we're allowing him in. Sir you may go..."
They soon reached Jodha's ward. Though none of the people standing there were allowed in but they could see her through the glass.
Jalal went near it and saw her. Unlike the old Jodha, chirpy, bubbly, fun loving, glowing. There she was lying all pale and silent. Jalal felt as if someone stabbed his heart. Watching his love like this was definitely not one of those things which he thought of.
He was busy in cursing her for not calling him but here she was fighting the battle of life. He wish Jodha was here to comfort but fatefully she was the one who was responsible for his current condition.
The doctor came out of the I.C.U after checking her. Jalal ran towards him asked in haste.
"Doctor, how's Jodha now? Will she be ok? Is she..." He was cut in between by the doctor.
"Sir.. Sir... Please calm down. Miss Jodha is out of the critical state but we fear if she doesn't gain conscious in next 12 hours then she may slip into coma..."
Jalal was utterly shocked. He never imagined that he'd have to face such a day in his life. The person whom he loves the most, admires the most would be in such a state. He came out of his world when he saw the doctor walking away. He stopped him and asked.
"Doctor cam I meet her? Please.."
"I am sorry sir, but we can't let any outsider meet the patient, only the family members can meet her in the non visiting hours."
Jalal was going to say that he was her to be husband but stopped in his tracks when he remembered that He had promised her that no matter what he would disclose their relationship before the right time comes. But fortunately Maina came for his rescue.
"Doctor, he is one of the family members. Please allow him to go in." The bewildered man silently thanked the rescuer and lightly smiled.
"Ok ma'am. Sir you may go in but only for a short time. Please don't make it too long."
"Thank-you doctor!" And he started walking towards the ward to meet the injured lady.
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The sorrowful man entered the room which heavy heart. He never wished to see Jodha like this. Tubes injected in her body, a pale face, bandages on her hands and feet, it was a terrible thing to look at. From the first time when he had seen her on the tv, she was always an enigmatic and a radiant lady, but, this was a totally different Jodha. This wasn't the Jodha who couldn't keep mum even for a minute, constantly blabbering always, and he always wondered how did she manage to do that. This Jodha, wasn't even speaking one work!. He went near her and sat on a stool near the bed.
"Jo, how are you? See, I am here as I promised. But you didn't welcome me. I'm very mad at you.." He was trying really hard to control the salty drops from falling off his eyes. But one finally fell down and that too on Jodha's wrist.
"Open your eyes and talk to me Jo... You love to irritate me na, then why are you silent this time? Speak up... I know you have many things to say but..."he chocked and wasn't able to utter anything further. Staying silent was the only option with him otherwise he would cry out hard.
JODHA'S POV
I know Jalal had come to meet me there. I wanted to open my heart up. But I wasn't able to speak anything. He talked to me and a teardrop fell on my wrist, I knew he was silently sobbing. I wanted to rub those tears off his eyes but then I wasn't able to do that too. I wanted to look at him, after-all we had met after a long time, hough not actually, but it was a long one for me. Oh god! I wasn't able to open my eyes too. I felt as is there's a unknown force binding me, preventing to let me do any action. I was feeling helpless. I knew my mom, surya, Moti and off-course Jalal were here. But poor me, couldn't call out any of them to help me. Now only god could help me."
Hello guys, thanks for waiting patiently for this chapter. And offcourse for liking my previous chapter. This part is specially dedicated to those who constantly nudged me for updating...😆This is a boring one and a short one too I know, but that's all I could think at that moment... Will try to update next part soon... Please add me in your buddy list for pms... Till then have a happy reading😊.

Edited by 155pari - 10 years ago
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Chapter 16- Part 2
JODHA'S POV
I very well could feel everything around me... I knew mom was standing over there silently sobbing, raj Bhai and bhabhi trying to console her and my little sweetie pie confused all over. I felt guilty over it, but I was helpless. I could hear everything. Jalal was talking to me.
"Jo please talk to me... It doesn't suit you being so silent... I know you are angry at me for not fulfilling my promise, but see I came here..."
I tried really hard to move myself but no avail. The unknown force was still too much as compared to my energy. I felt really weak. I knew i was badly injured, may be that's why I couldn't. I didn't know what the doctor say, but one thing I was sure about that he had said something shocking.
Meanwhile a nurse came in and reminded Jalal that his time was up. Supposedly, he'd have just nodded and the nurse then went out. He took my hand up, near his mouth and lightly kissed it. Then bent ahead and kissed on top of my forehead. I really felt like talking to him, pouring out all my pain to him. I really couldn't move. Then Jalal stood up to go, he was about to go when he realized his and my hands were still locked. He slowly entangled my finger and gently kept it on the bed.
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7:30 pm,
The city hospital.
ICU CORRIDOR
All were standing there like a statue not wanting to leave the place even for a second. The whole family stood silently, some of them taking the support of the wall and some, just sitting quietly. In the morning when Jalal arrived there was no one except the patient's mother, brother, his wife and the confused kiddo and her two best friends; Surya, who told Jalal about Jodha and Moti, who helped him come in. But now there was a huge crowd. Other than the people who were already there, some of the shooting friends also came. And hamida also joined the group. Many of them already left but some of her very close one were still there.
Finally, one of them gathered all the courage and spoke up.
"Maina, you haven't eaten anything since yesterday evening. Please eat something. If Jodha regains conscious, then she'd be very upset about this. If not for us, then for your daughter."said the worried middle-aged friend.
"How can I Hami? When my daughter is in over there fighting for herself, how can you expect me to enjoy the delicious food?"
"I know Maina. But that doesn't mean you remain hungry. I know what you are going through. But this is not for me. This is for you... Please..."she pleaded know how adamant was her buddy.
"Aunty, ammi is right. Jodha wouldn't like all this. Please have something."
Finally after a lot of how's and why's the gloomy mother headed towards the canteen with her friend. Moti and surya managed to convinced Jodha's other friends to go back home. Now only Jalal and the two of them were left.
Moti was about to stand up when she saw two inspectors coming to their side.
"Good evening Mr. Surya. "
"Good evening sir."
"Is the patient awake?"
"No sir, she hasn't gained conscious yet."
"Ok"with this the senior inspector turned towards the junior one and said "Patil, stay here till she gains conscious."
"Ji saheb." Replied the sub inspector in Hindi.
("Ok sir")
"Mr. Surya please cooperate with us."
"Sure sir."then the two gentlemen shook their hands and the armed man took his leave.
Jalal turned towards Surya and asked.
"You called them?"
"No, the accident happened in front of the police station. So it was bound to happen."
Though Jalal didn't want to make it a publicity gimmick by letting the police force enter in this but later shove away the idea.
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9:30 pm
Same place

"Jalal beta go and have some food. You haven't eaten anything since morning."
"No aunty. I don't feel like."
"You were the one who persuaded me to eat. If not for us then for Jodha. Please beta."
"Ok but before that I want to meet Jodha."
"Hmm wait." The worried lady then called the doctor and asked if Jalal could go and meet the patient to which the doctor agreed.
"Thankyou aunty."and the grateful yet tensed guy went to check upon his lady love.

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Jalal silently went in and gently closed the door behind him. He sat on the chair beside Jodha. She was still unconscious. The grief-stricken man just held her hand and sat admiring her features. Though she looked pale but still she managed to look beautiful.
JODHA'S POV
Someone entered in. I don't know who was it. Then sat holding my hand. It felt like a familiar touch. Which kinda I loved. It was Jalal. But he wasn't speaking anything. Why? Is he afraid that if he speaks then he'll break up? Yess... He is... I didn't want him to be like this. I again tried to move my hand with my full energy till I could manage to. This time there was a slight movement in my fingers but Jalal supposedly didn't notice it. May be it was too less to notice. I again put whole of my energy and moved my fingers. I didn't know where he saw it or not but I couldn't put anymore energy in that. But after sometime after sensing that he was expecting me to move a bit more, i again moved my fingers indicating that i could understand his feelings.

JALAL'S POV
I was just holding her hand and sitting quietly. Didn't utter even a single word, otherwise I knew I'd break down. I didn't know what happened but for a moment I felt like Jodha moved her fingers. But later pushed it aside thinking that it was a mere imagination. But later after a minute or so, her fingers moved again. I left her hand a tried to see if actually there was a movement or just my thinking. But unfortunately it didn't so again I held her hand firmly. A bit later I could feel her fingers moving again. I instantly left her hand and saw them actually moving. I was elated. I called the nurse, two of them hurriedly came in. Along with them a doctor also came and others too.
I told them what just happened and they stood looking at her expecting to open her eyes. But to my shock she didn't move even a bit.!
Hello dearies... Here's the second part of this chapter. Hope you like it. Please hit likes and post your precious comments. And yes, the previous part got the maximum likes in all the chapters I've posted till date. So, a big thankyou to all of you those who liked and commented on that one. 🤗I hope you'll do that for the upcoming chapters too!. This is the last chapter which I'm posting before I go on a long vacation. So probably you'll get the next chapter by the end of this month. Till then enjoy this one...
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Edited by 155pari - 10 years ago
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nyc ch
Jo accident
Ja broken
if I not wrong it that man's plan who was stalking Jo...
hope Jo will fine soon...
fr sure Ja will not leave that person who had attempt to kill his jo...
update soon
n thnx fr pm
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Finallu u updated .. Vrna m nidhu k sath aane hi vali thi yha ... Bach gyi ..😆😆 ... Jodha met wid an accident ... Poor jalal cant see his love like this ... I think this accident will be related to that mysterious person who was stalking her ... Update soon
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Namu... 😳
How could you do this????
NIRDAYI INSAAN... 😡
How dare you hurt my JODHA...
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Originally posted by: Priyankaakdha

Finallu u updated .. Vrna m nidhu k sath aane hi vali thi yha ... Bach gyi ..😆😆 ... Jodha met wid an accident ... Poor jalal cant see his love like this ... I think this accident will be related to that mysterious person who was stalking her ... Update soon

thankgod i update on the right time...😆poor nidhi di... Dont worry dii aapki jo jald hi sahi salamat hogi... Aur priyanka dii youll come to know the mystery behind her accident soon...😃
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Originally posted by: Priyankaakdha

Finallu u updated .. Vrna m nidhu k sath aane hi vali thi yha ... Bach gyi ..😆😆 ... Jodha met wid an accident ... Poor jalal cant see his love like this ... I think this accident will be related to that mysterious person who was stalking her ... Update soon

agree with u diii...mmm
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Originally posted by: ..Prii1994..

Namu... 😳

How could you do this????
NIRDAYI INSAAN... 😡
How dare you hurt my JODHA...

Omg! You too priu???? Ill have to make jo fine in the next chapter itself otherwise you people will kill me😕😭

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