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Posted: 9 years ago
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Manik loves stars and Nandini adores fireflies.


It's the first festival that they celebrate after Cabir 's death.


This year Aliya and Harshad plan a party. Harshad can't do anything alone against Fab 4, Aryaman, Maddy and Nandini.


Manik decides to come with Nandini so he goes other house. He didn't know that she already leaves with Aryaman.


He ring the door chachi opens the door. They are dressed to celebrate diwali.


Chachi : Manik tum, I can't believe... Come, come...


Manik has tears to see how the people around them are happy to see him again. He looks Rishabh coming down in white waisty. He looks so adorable. He hugs Manik.


Manik : How are you?


Rishabh : Good.


Manik : OOOH... WAIT


Manik can't believe his ears.


He hugs him again.


Manik : How this happen? Nandini didn't say a word about it. I am so happy for you. Say another word please mere liye.


Rishabh : Never leave Nandini please.


Manik : Khabhi nai. So where is Nandini?


Chachi : She leaves already with Aryaman.


Manik becomes angry but he controles himself : Chachi can Rishabh comes with me for the party.


Chachi hesitates : But I think it's not good idea, if he has attacks...


Manik interrupts her : Don't worry chachi I will handle him and yes chachi he has the rights to be happy.


Finally chachi agrees.


They quits the house for Aliya's house.

Manik and Rishabh enter on the party. Rishabh runs to hug Nandini. She didn't see Manik.


Nandini : How can you be here?


Rishabh : I come with Manik.


Nandini : Likin kaise?


Rishabh : He comes home to pick up you but you left already so he took chachi's permission to take me.


Nandini thinks : Thank you so much Manik it's the first time I can see my brother so much happy.


Nandini searches for Manik. She saws him with Mukti.


She comes to him.


Nandini : Manik can we...


Manik to Mukti : Will you join me for a danse?


Mukti tries to refuse but he takes her on the floor.


They dance on Piya Ke Bazaar Main.


Bye God teri sewa karenge, (o meri! billo Rani)

Bye God badi hit rahegi, (teri meri prem kahani)

Bye God mere liye tu aaja (aaja re aaja re aaja re aaja)

Bye God dil tod ke na ja (na ja re na ja re na ja re na ja)

Aise kaise de doon dil tujh-ko yaar

Badha mehenga padhega yeh mera pyaar

Ja re ja ja..

Aaja aaja.., aaja aaja, piya ke bazaar mein

Aaja aaja.., ho aaja aaja, piya ke bazaar mein

Aaja aaja..


( Aryaman takes Nandini on the floor Aliya and Dhruv join the couples).


Bye God teri sewa karenge, (o meri! billo Rani)

Bye God badi hit rahegi, (teri meri prem kahani)

Bye God mere liye tu aaja (aaja re aaja re aaja re aaja)

Bye God dil tod ke na ja (na ja re na ja re na ja re na ja)

Aise kaise de doon dil tujh-ko yaar

Badha mehenga padhega yeh mera pyaar

Ja re ja ja..

Aaja aaja.., aaja aaja, piya ke bazaar mein

Aaja aaja.., ho aaja aaja, piya ke bazaar mein

Aaja aaja..

(Instrumental Break)


(Manik hurts Mukti's hand but she continues).

Kyun afsaane naye roz tu izaad kare

Kyun chain-o-sukoon tera yahaan barbaad kare

Mera chain hai tu, sukoon bhi tu

Shaam hote hi ye dil teri gali aa chale

Aise kaise de doon dil tujh-ko yaar

Badha mehenga padhega ye mera pyaar

Ja re ja ja..

Aaja aaja.., aaja aaja piya ke bazaar mein

Aaja aaja.., ho aaja aaja piya ke bazaar mein

Aaja aaja..

Scooty se nahi toh car se aa ja, saat samundar paar se aa ja

Dil ye pukaare tu pyaar se aaja, aaja re aaja re aa..

(Instrumental Break)

Tu meri ada ko kar nazar-andaaz nahi

Pyaar mera hai tez dhaar koi koi raaz nahi

Tera humraaz-am hoon, bane devdas-am hoon

Pyaar karta hai tujhe dil yeh dagebaaz nahi

Aise kaise de doon dil tujh-ko yaar

Badha mehenga padhega yeh mera pyaar

Ja re ja ja..

Aaja aaja.., aaja aaja, piya ke bazaar mein

Aaja aaja.., ho aaja aaja, piya ke bazaar mein

Aaja aaja..

Bye God teri sewa karenge, (o meri ! billo Rani)

Bye God badi hit rahegi, (teri meri prem kahani)

Bye God mere liye tu aaja (aaja re aaja re aaja re aaja)

Bye God dil tod ke na ja (na ja re na ja re na ja re na ja)


Manik sees blood on Mukti's wrist. He did a first aid.


Mukti : Why you are so jealous?


Manik : How he can pick up her? How he can dance her? How he can touch her? I can't believe she can do it to me.


Mukti : Stop Manik you go to far, it's not her fault if you had an accident. Never talk about her like that even if we told her that you are dead she believe until the end that you are alive and will come back one day. And damn it she was right.


Manik understands his mistake.


Aliya comes to Manik : You don't know how she lives with your memories. she still loves you. Never insult her.


Dhruvv : She is right buddy she is your true love.


Dhruv takes Aliya from here.


When he tries to approach her Aryamaan comes with two glasses.


Aryamaan : I think you are beautiful in this lengha. Green and pink are beautiful on you.


He tries to hug her.


Nandini : I think you drink so much today. Please control yourself.


She tries to move but he holds her hand.


Aryamaan : Did I disgust you?


Nandini : No but... I don't like it.


Aryamaan : Oh you prefer that Manik touched you.


Nandini : Aryamaan shut up. I thought you was my friend like my brother.


Aryamaan : Really?!!!!! But you know what I start to love you. What can I do I don't choose it? But it's happen.


Aryamaan hugs her. He throws him and has tears. He comes to her again but Manik comes and holds his collar.


Manik : How dare you Aryamaan to touch my Nandini? I wil kill you today.


He gives him two, three punches. Dhruv separates them.


Harshad takes Aryamaan outside.


Nandini hugs Manik.


Manik : He can't do anything.Don't cry.


Nandini : I am sorry Manik, I would have wait for you.


Manik : No it's okay. He is the culprit. Come and wash you face.




They go to the bathroom. Nandini washes her face and Manik wipes her face with the towel. She holds his head and just kisses him. He lets her enter on him.


They fall one the bed. He removes his top but don't stop the kiss. He takes the pin her dupatta.


Manik : You are so beautiful.


Nandini blushes : And you are so handsome in blue I can't take my eyes.


Manik : Really.


He makes a lollipop on her neck.



THE END




Rest is your imagination. Hihihihihihi

Love you guys hope you will have a wonderful diwali.


Edited by 8seetha - 9 years ago

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey I lik d strtng...continue it..
I would lv to read mr..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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U r back so happy continue
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Pls continue n update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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u got the 10 comments pls
jaldi update krdo plzzz
waise its awesme lets see kya hotahai
love it
waiting update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Arre this is so nice thought of urs plz continue yaar
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey Seetha after so long dear ... How are you? Wow story is nice and plz continue it soon ... Waiting... Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 9 years ago
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What truth??
Congrats on new story :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome start...
loved it so much...
very interesting concept...
can't wait to see the outcome of the fight between aryaman and manik...
keep up the good work and continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very beautiful and emotional.

So you kicked out aryamn...😆.

And Diwali night was awesome and romantic.

Thanks for sharing this awesome update.

Stay blessed dear.



Love. .
Jyoti.





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