Tum Hi Ho : Raman SS [Part 11 Page 7]

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Posted: 10 years ago
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He returned home after a long tiring day to an empty house. He wondered how much life had changed in these five years. His passion had overrode his sanity. What was he lacking? In fact, he'd a loving family, a mother he raised him like a prince, a sister who spoilt him rotten and friends who provided him moral support and his lady love who lent a shoulder for him to cry on in solitude during despair. He was the happiest being around them. He'd realised that his happiness resided in them and not with his colleagues who celebrated with him only when he succeeded at his work yet at other times ridiculed his style of work when it felt unsatisfactory.

He'd been selfish; neglecting those people who cared for him the most and running behind temporary pleasures.

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"Ishita yeh sahi time nahi hai to get engaged and all. I mean ek baar internship poori hu jaaiye; I promise I will marry you, grand tareeke se."

"Raman tum humaare rishte ko importance dete hi nahi ho so main kyun tumhaare peeche bhaagti rahoon. Why don't we break up amicably? No drama?

She left silently, wiping a tear from the corner of her eye.

~

He packed his bags and went of to claim back his love, his life, his Ishita...

TO BE CONTINUED



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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely one dear
Please continue and write till the end
Waiting
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This is awesome!
A really interesting start!
Continue soon Di and please don't leave this one!😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: cutieruhi

Lovely one dear

Please continue and write till the end
Waiting



Thank you so very much dear! Your appreciation means so much to me. I will surely continue soon. Thank you!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: smilesforever98

This is awesome!

A really interesting start!
Continue soon Di and please don't leave this one!😃



Hello Prabh! How have you been? We haven't spoken in so long! Thank you so much your appreciation means so much! Hopefully, I won't leave this one!

P.S. A Contract of Love has become all the more exciting now... you are doing a wonderful job 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Badtameez_Dil_1



Hello Prabh! How have you been? We haven't spoken in so long! Thank you so much your appreciation means so much! Hopefully, I won't leave this one!

P.S. A Contract of Love has become all the more exciting now... you are doing a wonderful job 👏

Hey! I'm great, how are you?
I know it's been months since we've talked!
And really it seems like a very promising story!

Thanks for liking COL! Glad you're still reading it and enjoying it!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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PART 2

Raman was a broken man today; devoid of emotion; completely drained out. He sat at a bar and gulped a few pegs. He believed it eased his pain.

He felt angst today ... helplessness, incapability... he's mother was fighting with cancer all this while and today she'd left him forever.

It shattered a part of him that he wasn't there with her...

It was futile, he knew, drowning in guilt but could he help it?

"Mujhe hamesha iss baat ka malaal rahega ke main apni Maa ke liye kuch bhi nahi kar paaya. Kuch karna toh dhoor; main toh unke saath tak nahi raha! Main ek bahut bura insaan hoon." He sat weeping in the baar with Mihir ... his best friend, his brother, his confident

"Mihir Mummyji mujhe choor ke chali gayin! Kya main itna bura tha?"

Before Mihir could even utter a word ... Raman answered

"Unho ne toh kitne calls bhi kiye teh ... I love her a lot yaar" and with that he drifted off to sleep...

TO BE CONTINUED
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: smilesforever98


Hey! I'm great, how are you?
I know it's been months since we've talked!
And really it seems like a very promising story!

Thanks for liking COL! Glad you're still reading it and enjoying it!



I've been great. Oh I love COL waise I've updated the 2nd part to this one ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Poor Raman!😭
But this story is really great!
You updated so soon, but still I want to read more, so update soon!😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: smilesforever98

Poor Raman!😭

But this story is really great!
You updated so soon, but still I want to read more, so update soon!😃



I'm so happy you're liking it Prabh. & your wish is my command... I'm updating Part 3 very soon... :)

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