SwaSan FF (PART 6 PAGE 6) - NO TITLE YET

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Okay so I did say I was going to make a FF on SwaSan which I shall be starting tomorrow. It's about a boss and employee which face many problems with twists and turns. If you have any suitable suggestions for the FF, please do comment below.
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A story about a beautiful, yet lively girl Swara who loves her life. She takes responsibility for her family business, being the only heir of her family. Sanskar, a hard working fellow who loves his job and family. Upon receiving a job with Swara as his boss, he has to tackle many difficulties..

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Swara - A bubbly girl who takes care of her family business, yet young. She has no interest in work and is therefore is looking for a secretary for ease.
Sanskar - A hard working fellow, who isn't much rich. Upon seeing a job ad, he applies for the position of a secretary.

The first update will be given tomorrow. Please do give feedback!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow dear...
Awesome concept
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Loved it...
Continue soon...
Please pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Different concept. ...
Do cont and pm me while updating. ...
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Quite a new approach. Am interested. Can I request a pm??
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hey aysha
nice n different concept
update soon
n if possible then do pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 1

"Yeh bhi fail ho gaya" murmured Swara, as she crossed off his name on the paper. She scanned the long list which read the remaining interviewees. Glancing at the clock which read ten to four, she took a deep sigh. She rested her head back on her chair, trying to relax. But how could she relax? She needed a perfect candidate who works hard, has relevant experience and preferably a female. Oh and of course one who took on challenges. After all they'd have to deal with the Swara Bose.
Swara quickly sat up straight. She wanted this over as soon as possible. She briefly scanned the remaining names on the list. Realizing they were all males, a disappointed Swara had begun.
'Ab jo sab ladke hi reh gaye hai, to koi acha sa, hardworking and yes hot wala mil jaye please God..' Swara pleaded within.
She quickly dialled the reception code and waited for a response, which she soon enough had got.
"Hello Swara madam. How can I help you?"
Swara looked at the next candidate for the interview and resumed her conversation with the receptionist.
"Haan, call in Mr..."
*Swara's mobile phone rings.* She picks her mobile up finding its her dad.
"Hello madam, are you still there?" broke Swara's attention towards her mobile.
"Oh yes, sorry just a second" Swara replied.
She glanced rapidly at the name and read it out.
"Yes it's Mr Sanskar Maheshwari. Call him in right away."
Upon saying this Swara quickly put the phone down and rushed to answer her dad's call on her mobile phone. She answered it.
"Swara, tum kab tak ghar aaogi?" enquired her dad.
"Bas thori hi der mein dad. Yeh aakhri interview aaj ke liye lena hai.. Acha dad main aap se baad mein baat karti hoon abhi mujhe inteeview lena hai" Swara quickly hung up and placed her mobile on her table. She waited for the next candidate to appear. 5 minutes passed but one appeared. She stood up and started walking around her cabin, but her eyes focused on the clock. 10 minutes passed, 15 minutes passed but there was still no sign of anyone. This time Swara begun to get annoyed.
"Yeh jo bhi larka hai, isse apni job ki koi fikar nahi hai kya. Ab dekhti hoon isse jab yeh aata hai. Isse to bilkul yeh position nahi milegi" decided Swara.
Soon enough 20 minutes had passed by.. Swara walked to her desk and sat on her chair. She thought of ringing up the reception to ask. But before she could even pick up the phone, she heard a knock on the door.
"May I come in madam?" a manly voice asked.
'Lagta hai aa gaya..' Swara thought to herself. She said yes, allowing the man to enter.
Swara struggled to see the man, as he opened the door slowly revealing his self, until finally the door got out of the way. Stood opposite Swara was a fair toned man with a light stubble. Wearing a black coloured three piece suit, he held a portfolio. He smiled at Swara whilst walking towards her. Swara gazed at him. He had already met one of Swara's criteria of being hot. He stood near Swara's desk opposite her.
"Hi madam, I'm here for an interview" he confirmed whilst breaking Swara's staring moment.
'Yeh kya kar rahi hai Swara. Ye to wohi hai interview wala. Mujhe itna time wait karva ke abhi aaya hai."
Swara applied her stern look towards the man. She slowly built all the anger in her again, just waiting to release it on the man. After all he had made Swara wait. Why was he going to get the job?
Edited by ayshax - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Aww...Sanskar has already made an impression - half good, half bad. Waiting for next.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: mistofshadows

Aww...Sanskar has already made an impression - half good, half bad. Waiting for next.


Maybe something you won't expect
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 2

"You're interview has been cancelled. Get out" order Swara.
Sanskar wondered what he had done wrong. Swara looked at him fiercely.
"But mada..." Sanskar tried to speak but Swara interrupted.
"To tum ye hi soch rahe hoge ke kyun. Is time pe aaoge to interview cancel hi hoga na" chirped Swara.
Sanskar looked awfully confused.
"Aise kyun dekh rahe ho Mr..." Swara paused as she didn't know the man's name. She scanned through her super long list until she found his name.
"Yes Mr Aditya. To main kya keh rahi thi? Haan... maana ke tumhare paas achi education hogi or suitable experience hoga or tum HOT bhi ho lekin agar tumhare paas punctuality ki koi kadar nahi hai, then you don't deserve this job." snapped Swara .
*Sanskar looked stunned but understood the misconception simultaneously.*
'Arey ye kaisi ladki hai bolti hi jaa rahi hai or mujhe HOT bhi bola?' Sanskar thought. He looked down at his self.
'Kya main hot hoon?' Sanskar wondered.
Swara carried on snapping until Sanskar had enough. Every time he'd try to utter a word in defence, she'd over take him.
"SHUTUP!" ordered Sanskar. He'd heard way too much. Swara stopped all of a sudden and looked shocked. She stepped behind a few metres distancing her self from Sanskar.
"Ab meri baat suno. Pehli baat, main yahan tumhari bakwaas sunane ke liye nahin aya, interview dene ke liye aya tha. Wo to tum mujhe dene hi nahi de rahi. Kab se charhe hi jaa rahi ho mere upar. Dusri baat mera naam Sanskar Maheshwari hai, aditya nahi. Aur mera interview kal ka tha lekin aap ki receptionist ne mujhe aaj hi bulaya."
Swara's mouth drew open in shock.
'What had she just done? She should've given him a chance to speak. She's so stupid.' All these things kept rolling in her mind.
Sanskar walked past Swara and left his portfolio on her desk
"Dekh lena please." requested Sanskaar.
He walked towards the door on the other side of Swara's cabin. He swung it open and turned his face towards Swara giving a little smirk.
"Teesri baat. Itna bhi hot nahi hoon main" he said whilst walking out.
Swara stood stunned still. She thought of the way she had snapped at him whilst she recovered.

Will she appoint Sanskar as her secretary?

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very nice 👏
She didn't let him talk, misunderstood him as Aditya 😆
A different concept 😳
Please can you pm me whenever you update? 😊

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