FUN FICTION|...& MILAN of VINA-GUITAR(updated PART-1 pg5)|02/11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: s1133
Mice story line yaar..
Continue soon...

thanks
i start soon😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Sunshine2604
the storyline sounds very interesting.
waiting for your next update.

thanku
i will soon😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: nimarious
concept of the story is very interesting...!!!!!!
its awesome...!!!!!
do continue soon ...!!!!😊

thanku dear
i will soon update😛

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Posted: 9 years ago

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here i am giving you prolog as i said this is mix with comedy so i give a demo as in this prologue i hope u guys likes it
read it and tell me should i continue with this concept okay

Prologue

Girl- i said na Vina is better then this gutter.

boy-what u said? madem pahle bolna to sikha aao, this is not gutter it is guitar, so from next time before saying about my JANU anything na then i will not leave you alone with your BABY..

girl- don't u dare touch or do anything to my BABY, and i said na VINA is more good then your this Ugly GUTTER i mean GUITAR watever so please take it and leave from here i want to practice okay
, pahle hi bhot time kharab ho gya hai tumhari wajah se.

boy- no i am not leaving, you u are leaving from here because everybody knows that GUITAR is better then this VINA. and i can give you proof of it if u want, but u have to admit the truth BABY.

girl- how dare u call me BABY, BABY hogi teri maa. don't call me BABY. only my friends have that right so keep it in your head and leave from here, and i know VINA is better then GUITAR so now aap hum pe meharbani kr k yaha se jane ki kosis karoge humhe practice karni hai.

boy- chill ANGRY BIRD i mean if BABY only called by your friends then i give u this new NAME 'ANGRY BIRD' it suits u, u always looks like angry bird when u fight so from today onwards i will u ANGRY BIRDS, now is it okay with u BABY i mean ANGRY BIRD?? and WINK on her.

girl- what?? what is this? angry bird and all? i said na stop giving me your name which is more suit u, but i think u know my name every body called me NM so you also called me with name, not other now u leave please.

boy- y should i listen u ANGRY BIRD, this is my right what i speak, so u don't tell me.
and now u leave or throw out this outside, huhn bolo

Girl- don't u dare touching my BABY. i know u always wants to touch it, many times i have caught u and this thing only i know, your friends also don't know that u tires to play VINA, so u have to admit that VINA is better then your GUITAR.

Boy- this is not my GUITAR , this is my JANU, and don't you dare telling my friends about that night, u also no na i am not in my sens so i don't know what i am doing but u made video of me, but u also know na i have also your secret with me which no one knows other then US, your FIRST KISS with me, so go ahead and tell everyone that i tried to play VINA, and i open this secret that you have KISSED ME.

GIRL- no, don't u dare say about it to anyone, that is not my fault someone spiked my drink and i am not in my senses so i don't know how i did it, my 1st kiss with A DON.

boy- of like this DON AND ALL. ha and a smile appear on his face listen this

GIRL- yeah DON. and i think your this smile is more increase when i will elaborate the meaning of DON.

boy- yeah u don't tell me i know it already DON means DREAMBOY OF NM, hain na ANGRY BIRD and laugh loudly

girl- stop calling me ANGRY BIRD, and i think tumjh apne sapno ki duniya se bahar aa jana chahiye, this is not u think.

Boy- okay then u tell me what u mean by calling me DON and all, haa batao and smiles

GIRL- she turns towards BOY and said DON matlab DON matlb and slowly slowly goes towards door and then shouts

DON=DONKEY OF NATIONAL

and laugh on HIS FACIAL EXPRESSION which is changed from a CUTE BOY TO ANGRY MONSTER. and then she run out.

BOY- WHAT? he is shocked after hearing by her, it took some time for him to digest those words and only what he hear is DON-DONKEY OF NATIONAL.

this is their daily routine to fight both together for practice of their next event which is in 2weaks, and in this event they are are performing because of their fights and this is their punishment for fighting in collage campus that they have to perform together in next event.

and from lat 4 day this routine is continue that these two person is fight daily with each other and never listen their friends and when they try to interfere in between then or try to say something they both shouts o them also so due to this their friends daily leaves from there after saying when your fight if finish then we meet u in canteen and tell us who is winner and who will practice.?

their friend tries to make them understand that they have to practice together but they have not listen anybody other then their ego. and this is their daily thing from last 4 days.

today also only both of them fighting on this practice session and their friends leaves from their after hear last warning from them that if they will say any thing in between then we don't perform in this event, and this this to not a good thing performing without their leads so their friends leaves from there leave them alone fight with each other

today when nandini shouts her name and open gate of music room saw that a another member of band of that boy is standing outside and laughing like a mad person. she is shocked that kya esne sun liya what we are talking about some time before KISS and all and she prays to her ayyiappa and leaves to her class

that boy who is laughing is come their and when he reach there he only hear last conversation in which that girl said that the meaning of DON is DONKEY OF NATIONAL, and he understood for whom she is saying

he come inside saw that that person stood there like statue with shocked
expression.

he control his laugh very badly and said in a loud voice

new boy- aaj bhi tum dono ne ladte huye sara time kharab kr diya hai na,to ab aapki meharbani ho to CLASS CHALE DON. and start laugh loudly like mad.

this drama happen daily they start their fight for music practice then for their instrumets and last it end on each other fighting with each other on personal things rather than music fight, we can called it MIX FIGHT OF EMOTIONS.

here is prologue i hope it is according what i said
so should i continue plz tell me
okay

am waiting

vicky singhalwal

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manan_eku

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Amazing prologue bhai

Loved it to the core

The of Don - donkey of national

It's wonderful

I am laughing like hell after reading it

Thanks for the pm bhai

Continue soon

Love you a lot bhai

You loving sis

Eku (your doll:) )

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kiranmai_angel

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

nice prologue

different intresting AND funny

do continue

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sharon.babu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

OMG this was too funny...

best prologue that i have read...so full of entertainment...

the fight was so hilarious...the DON and Angry Bird nicknames...priceless...

want to know more about their past and their 1st kiss...it will be fun to see their journey...

keep up the good work and continue soon...

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Jyoti

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Dear...

This is amazing. ..

Very interesting and different and

of course very hilarious to.

I liked it very much.

Never read comedy mixed romantic story of

Manan.

Please continue. ..looking forward to seeing.

Thanks for sharing this beautiful story.

Stay blessed dear.

Love. .

Jyoti.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: manan_eku
Amazing prologue bhai
Loved it to the core
The of Don - donkey of national
It's wonderful
I am laughing like hell after reading it
Thanks for the pm bhai
Continue soon

Love you a lot bhai
You loving sis
Eku (your doll:) )

thankx doll
i am making it funny
because writing sad romantic is not my type
it take more efforts then funny
aur vese bhi i don't like ye rona dhona
but for u guys i will writem them in other ff 😊