ArHi TS(Drabble): Rumor Has It (Removed)

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cheesemad

@cheesemad

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Sadh123

@Sadh123

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

Lol I am still laughing. Rumour it is! I love you my sweet girl. I read it in my boring lecture and would have almost got caught. Thank god, that prof didn't look at me. My friends looked at me like I was mad. You know we were asked to find the difference between Hindu and Muslim Marriage. They were like why is this girl even grinning looking at that. 😆

I read it thrice already! You are the best in humour. But on a serious note, this is how rumour spreads and all of a sudden becomes the truth. Oh Khushi is a drama queen here. Totally exaggerating. And yeah bechari Payal re!

Whoa ASR you are my man.. Oops khushi's man totally. I want the inside story ab! I don't know why, but your every Drabble leaves me yearning for more. I get highly impatient and end up wanting a next part. What have you done to me girl? I seriously loved every line of this one. Sheetal you deserve it girl! Naked and almost? That cracked me up totally! Love yA for giving me such an interesting and hilarious lecture! 😳

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SirenMitra

@SirenMitra

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

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OMG!🤣 Sheetal kapoor was naked and ASR is gay.. Khushi was too much...

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aimmy

@Aims.

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

Reswa 😊

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I'm here😆

I woke up and logged in. Woa! A PM from Basanti and here we are! A rumor filled tale 👏

I just loved it Basanti 👏 I know it has become my signature line these days but I really mean it. You can say my "Loveed It" has all those Bhari Bhari words from dictionary 😆😳

The combination was my favorite. A crazy Khushi and a naughty Arnav 😃 Wohoo! It just made my day! She tried to impress him but he! Aww he didn't even notice. My poor baby Khushi 😆 The convo with Payal was just 😆 Specially this

"Khushi you do realize you are talking to your sister who is five years elder to you? Payal asked.

As if you did nothing to trap my innocent Jiju,"

Don't tell me this Jiju is Akash 😆 And then that Contact lenses part! Damn it! 🤣 This is so me! when I first time put them what I did I can't even tell you here 😆 Bang! You rocked Basanti

His entry made my heart go Dhak Dhak He was not even noticing her but likes her as well. Aww😃 And her was there when she fell off wearing those Lenses 😆 She is still better than me 😆 He doesn't want her to wear those dresses and he likes her with her specs. I want someone like him re. Why your Arnav is always a treat to read Basanti? I Always lose myself whenever he is around ❤️

A huge round of applause for my Basanti! You are my rock star you know that? Simply Brilliant 😃👏

P.S As far as other rumor is concerned Finger crossed. 😉

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Fe-en-Dios

@Fe-en-Dios

Stunner

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Posted: 9 years ago

I just got back n saw this

And the other news too 😛

Pls send me a PM when u update else I will miss it 😕

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Ok the first thing that came to my mind after reading this is that it's darn cute 😳

For one I am happy u haven't gone over broad and made it "cheesy " 😎..."bites tongue "

And second it's all pretty "believable "

Yes crushes and attraction is NORMAL and " acting " on it is pretty impulsive too.

So the red kinky dress, the high heels and the lenses were apt 👏

I love how u are exploring this genre of "short n sweet " and i am saying it for the zillionth time komal, it's tougher to write a short update ...so kudos to u for making this so nice 👏

I could totally imagine ASR going to meet khushi' and khushi' describing an "almost naked " sheetal to Payal and khushi' is right no one is as innocent as payal sounded while " trapping the jiju "

Loved it 😳

PS if u don't like my critical review ..lemme know ..I will put a more flowery one 😛Though I prefer this 😳

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Savera84

@Savera84

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Ocean of Happiness

Posted: 9 years ago

Who cares what it is (Drabble, OS or beech ka)? I just loved it.
Cheers...

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Parvathi Devi

@honey-sweety

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

Awww that was so sweet OS/Drabble...😆

I tell you kushi is crazy, a certified crazy for that matter...she thinks ASR is a gay just because he ddint pay attention to naked Opps almost naked Sheetal and the efforts kushi did for him...

Hey dear, you should write these kind of stories more often...

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sunitikapoor

@sunitikapoor

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

I am telling you...your Khushi is crazy...She thinks Arnav is Gay😆 because he is not giving attention to almost naked Sheetal...I mean seriously. It was a perfect combination of a naughty Arnav and a Crazy Khushi.

Who cares whether it is a drabble or OS...I loved it...Keep writing dear.