SwaSan SS : Ek Adhoori Kahani :Final Showdown Part 3 Updated (Pg 11)

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SwaSan SS : Ek Adhoori Kahani

Scene : Festival of Navratri has engulfed the city and group of boys and girls are seen dressed in traditional outfits lighting up the festive mood. On outskirts of city different clubs had organised Garba Nights. Swara and Ragini dressed in traditional clothes arrive at Garden Resort Club. After dancing for nonstop hours they move out of the club around 3 am in midnight but someone is following them.

Swara : " Ragini I am feeling as of someone is following us. Drive as fast you can "

Ragini : " Don't worry just recite Hanuman Chalisa *Chant God's Name*.

In matter of few minutes their Vehicle collides with a Truck..!!

Zooommm Thuddd Thudd..!!

Voice Over : What Happens if someone you love reciprocates in weird way ?? Or What if there is question mark on his existence ?

Spoof Fame 'Akki' presents one of the most hatke story on SwaSan with Ragini and Laksh playing cameos.

Stay Tuned to this space for full story which is divided in to three parts..!!

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SS SwaSan : Ek Adhoori Kahani

Characters :~ Swara,Sanskar, (Main Leads)😊😳
Ragini ,Laksh (Parallel Leads)😉

Location :~ Ahmedabad, Gujarat (India)😆😃

PART 1

"Knock Knock!!..

Swara wake up..!! It's already 8 and we are getting late for college.!! We have not even done Navratri Shopping..Please Yaar Uth Jao Na..!!"

Swara is still sleepy and opens the door. " Ragini I am not coming college. So tired..!! Last night i was writing Maths Assignments and slept around 1:30 Am. In afternoon i will come college and we will go for shopping. So now let me sleep..!! Bye..!! 🥱

Ragini attends all lectures for Laksh. In break time while exchanging notes Laksh informs about some Navratri Event. "Hey Ragini i have entry Passes for Golden Garba Nights. So are you coming with Swara ?? We will have fun and enjoy whole night.So we will meet around 9:30 tonight ,i will be waiting" Ragini takes two passes and hugs Laksh. Here Swara comes college and picks up Ragini. While driving her two wheeler Swara asks Ragini " Kya Hua College Mein?? Anything important ?. Ragini explains everything in detail and also informs her about Golden Garba Nights Passes which she got from Laksh. Swara is ecstatic and says" Wow Ragini this is the best news you told me. Ab Aayega Mazaa..!! She screams with Joy as Navratri is her favourite festival. They reach Law Garden area which is famous for traditional Navratri outfits. Numbers of shops adjacent to each other on footpath were bustling with gangs of ladies and girls bargaining and selecting colorful clothes. After wasting 2-3 hours Swara and Ragini select 5 traditional outfits. It was already getting dark and they had to quickly reach Garba Venue in span of 1 hour as the venue was located on outskirts of the city.


Laksh is waiting for Swara and Ragini as it was already 10 Pm. Here Swara and Ragini on their vehicle are lost in the way and searching for the venue. " Call Laksh and ask him to come and pick us." says Swara as she tries to adjust the helmet. Ragini calls Laksh but his phone is out of reach. Meanwhile their vehicle tyre punctures and both are stranded in service lane. " Oh god what's happening with us? Swara I think we should cancel our plan and go back to our room.!!" says Ragini in slow voice as she is scared and feeling uneasy. Swara notice small hoarding which showed them their way to Golden Garba Nights. " Ragini we are lucky..!! We are close to the venue. Lets drag this vehicle up to the parking lot." Laksh comes out and takes sigh of relief when he see Ragini and Swara coming. Swara tells Ragini to join Laksh while she will park the vehicle and join them. While coming back from from parking area Swara's Dupatta is stucked in Car's Side mirror. A guy comes and helps Swara in removing the Dupatta from mirror. Swara gets conscious and hesitates from saying anything and quickly leaves with her Dupatta. " Oh hello..!! Listen..Wait...!!" Guy runs behind Swara and stops her. " Madam do you drive your vehicle without keys ?"What nonsense ?? and she notice her keys in his hands. I am so sorry ..Thanks for helping me twice. By the way what's your name ?" Swara asks him. Sanskar he replies having broad smile on his face. " Cool I am Swara Shah " She lends her hand for friendship..!! Sanskar waits for a while and thinks. Swara laughs and says" Arrey Itna Time Kyun Le Rahe Ho ?? You are thinking as if i am proposing you". Both laugh and enter the garden area where different groups are dancing in sync with tunes of Garba beats.

Swara is searching Ragini but she is unable to find her. Sanskar asks " Kisko Dundh Rahi Ho..!!? Your BF or umm..?" Swara laughs " Lol i don't have BF because haven't found someone who can handle me..!!Actually i am searching my freinds Ragini and Laksh. Sanskar insist her to join his group if she don't mind. Swara agrees and both start doing Garba with the group. Crowd was going frenzy and everyone had gala time dancing on tunes of regional folk songs. In break time Swara and Sanskar decide to have some snacks from food stalls. Swara asks " So you are studying or working? Sanskar thinks and takes time to answer. Swara is confused and suspicious regarding Sanskar's behaviour. " I don't get why you think so much on answering simple questions? " Acually I am shy and introvert so don't mingle with people so easily, but since you have asked then let me tell you, I am a Civil Engineer and right now working with a Construction Company named SRS Pvt Ltd" Swara is impressed and smiles " Wow great Civil Engineer..Cool..Wait here let me search where is Ragini and Laksh till then you have food and wait here only.

While here Ragini and Laksh are busy munching delicious Pav Bhaji and Sandwich. Swara catches them "Hmm You both forgot me and having food huh..!! Ragini gets up and puts Sandwich in Swara's mouth " Bas Khush ? Now you are happy?" By the way tell me with whom you are dancing ? " Swara tells everything from beginning and revealed how Sanskar helped her and she is having fun with his group. She asks Ragini and Laksh to join her and is excited to introduce Sanskar. Swara takes both of them near Ice Cream Stall where Sanskar was standing. Swara searches here and there in whole ground but Sanskar was nowhere to be seen. Even his group was missing so Laksh tells Swara " Why will they wait for you see its already 1:30 Am and we need to leave , we will meet him tomorrow "..!! With this Trio leaves venue and Laksh tell Swara to keep her vehicle in Parking lot only as he will call a mechanic tomorrow who will repair punctured tyre here only. Laksh drops Swara and Ragini and leaves. Swara is still in her dreamland and thinking about Sanskar.




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princess_tara thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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looking interesting
continue soon
n do pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Yeah Sure..!! Will PM you..!! ;)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It's good friends i want to write ff but i don't know how they are saying by email address hasn't validate so what's i do plz someone tell me
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow akki
Sounds interesting😃
But i have a confusion...swaragini r teens kya or married to the boys or ur story is not related to the show😕
Jo bhi hai I liked the prologue
Continue soon
N if possible then do pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow I love d suspense factor here
Awesome concept
pls update soonish 😳
& pls do PM when u update next 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow Aakash lovely SS 👏👏
Please do continue soon😛,sounds so interesting 👏👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Story is under development and if possible I will soon update here may be by tomorrow morning..!!
And yeah the story has nothing to do with the Serial except the characters..!! :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Akki Bhai yay finally you are writing something on SwaSan 👏
You already know how much I loved hour's ZaYa ishq wala love FF so no obviously moi ko yeh bhi pasand aane wala hai 😳

Promo is jhakaaas 👏
Concept is hell interesting bhai 😎

You know moi so inactive aajkal so plz wala plz do PM ms jab next part update karo 😳

Thankyou in advance 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Tuned in for EK ADHOORI KAHANI...

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