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Posted: 9 years ago

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jj23

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Posted: 9 years ago

#192

perfect as well as beautiful ending

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meravigiliso

@meravigiliso

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Posted: 9 years ago

#193

Aditi , u r one of my most favourite writer in forums . Ur every work taught me valuable lesson in my life . All the stories have such eternal touch ,i cried with characters , i laughed with them nd went all emotional ride along with them . "Forever always" will b vry dear to my heart . U had created maan ,geet nd armman character so real ,i could always feel der pain,nd anguish they were undergoing . As i said before sumtyms one person comes ur life just to make u meet ur destiny ,here armaan had done it .

U had shown how "letting go of ur past ",is so important for ur present .geet nd maan had gone through painful journey but destiny brought them,together .

Last part made me so emotional aditi ,letting go of ur loved ones is so painful but maan nd geet had made armaan to live peaceful soul . Both der diaries entry choked me with tears .It was painful yet so peaceful .maan nd geet r "forever always "

Aditi u r an marvellous writer .plz do keep writing on waiting for new one . And lot of hugs from me to u for this beautiful pieceof writing ,will cherish for long tym nd indeed one for my library .

Will conclude by saying " happiness is journey not an destination ",

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jyotiagarwal

@jyotiagarwal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#194

Beautiful ending!!! Not sure if I ever commented in this thread coz m one of those stubborn lazy silent reader whom you all keep on bashing and very well deserved not denying it. However this my dear made me cry literally. Them finally letting Armaan go...the moment the pain amd ironically the relief was so well potrayed...I am really sad that this has come to an end and i will not see any more updates on this but at the same time this was a perfect end beutifully written.

Hope to see you write more such stories!!

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Sindhu

@sree10

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Posted: 9 years ago

#195

going to read the whole once again.

THANK YOU

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nishamna

@nishamna

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Posted: 9 years ago

#196

Amazing dear. Maneet become none soul. There journey of being strangers to Mr and Mrs khurana was amazing . their unison was so beautiful. The way they both submit to each other and pleasured each other was beautiful written.finally maneet let armaan go but not from their heart. He was the should reason of maneet's togetherness. He was the one who made maneet more closer as their pain and loss was same. That was really touchy moment when maneet wrote their diary for the last time. Every word was written by them was having only pure love . n yes indeed maneet were made to be for each other. They are the real soul mate of each other.

Aditi I am really feeling like cry when I read it's a last part. This story is one of my favourite story and will always be remained. I become so attached with this story that I want to say to you to continue. But no as I am agree with you. It's a perfect ending. This story started with armaan who was died but after him two people were dying.with every second. But gradually the same both people met and fall in love and started their life again where they are actually living a life.

Thanks dear for the wonderful story. It will always be very close to me.

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lathaanireddy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#197

perfect ending😊
overall story is very very good and very emotional also i liked the story very much
thankyou for an wonderful story and all the best for ur other stories😊

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sanum23

@sanum23

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Posted: 9 years ago

#198

its just amazing

maan geet become one and geet decide to finally

let go Armaan and both thanked armaan fr given

them wonderful life partner its all bcuz of him both

bond togetter now and happy

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Sayia

@Sayia

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Posted: 9 years ago

#199

amazing updates

love the ending 😃

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fantesy

@fantesy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#200

maaneet became one in all senses .. it was realy hot ... last part made me cry .. finally maaneet let armaan go .. whole journey was so beautiful ... this is one of my favourite story ... you are truly amazing writer dear ... the way you express all emotions is just so beautiful .. loved it .. gonna miss miss song and stranger so much ..

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