AKDHA OS:ON A RAINY DAY...

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Hey guys back with an os after a long back time.Well I got this idea when I was listening to tip tip barsa song .so that's it I started to scribble this story.I hope you guys will like it.Let me tell u I'm going to update this story in two parts as for the first time I'm gonna write a mature content.So now enough of my blah blah.Here you go guys.Happy Reading..

**ON A RAINY DAY**


As soon as Jodha stepped outside of her office she felt chill breeze caressing her .The night was serene with dark clouds hiding the moon and the luminous stars.

"May be it will rain in few minutes.Before that I should reach my house."she yhought rubbing her arms for warmth.
With in few minutes it started to rain.


"Now what to do.It is starting to become heavy."

Jodha walked faster and went to the near bus stop before she could drench completely.She turned her head and noticed her empty surroundings.

"Oh god!there's no one around.I don't know why?It's really started to make me think of horror movies."

Jodha shooed her negative thoughts and a small smile played on her lips when she caressed her stomach.

Suddenly she heard someone nearing to the bus stop.Her breath caught when she saw four men walking unsteadily with alcohol bottle in their hands.Jodha's heart started to beat fast.Her hands became moist and she shivered in fear.


"Hey beautiful"one of the men spoke only to increase her tension.Her heart skipped a beat when they came near to hear and when she tried to move they rounded her.
Before she started to run one of the guy held her hand.

Jodha was terrified what was happening her.She screamed for help!shouted for help


"Oh god!plz save me from those devils!"

She ran from those men after kicking them on their important part leaving them wincing.Jodha heard the sound of their boots behind her.

"Hey bhagawan!they are still following me.Where shall I go and hide."She turned back to see them still following her.

Suddenly she stumbled down on the ground.


"Ouch!It pains like hell!
Ahh!my ankle!"
She started to rub her ankle but her brain commanded her to get up and run.By now she was totally drenched in rain.Tears were rolling down her cheeks.

Jodha regained herself and started to run wincing but all of sudden banged into a big rock like object.


"It's not a wall!I can feel it's breathing...wait.oh god!It's a man"Jodha thought and slowly she raised her head to see the man's face.It was literally dark everywhere and only a street light was the source of light qhich was far away from them.Sudden flash of lightening and she saw the man's face.

Omg!its...its..J-alal?I mean my Jalal?By the way what is he doing here?How he came here just like that ?Did he know really know I was in danger?"her imaginations flew high.
He was the man who she wished to see,she longed to be with;her husband...no..no...her fake ex-husband well to be exact her contract husband and most importantly the father of her unborn little peanut.

Their gazes never seperated untill those men stoid before them.When one of them neared her;she held her husband's muscular hand with her.

Jalal didn't speak a single word and he was standing like a rock with his jaw clenched.


"Oye hero!move asideone of the guy spoke trying to hold Jodha's hand.But before he could touch her he laid flat on the road with a bleeding nose.Others including Jodha gasped in shock.

"Omg!did he really fell down by one punch ?I really can't believe it."Jodha checked her husband's stiffened muscles.

Jalal pulled her behind him and punched another guy .After getting some more punchings from Jalal all those scumbags ran away in fear.

Jalal slowly to look at his lady love.
"Awwm..how much I missed my wifey"They both forgot that both of them were drenched in rain.
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remaining part will update after seeing your response guys.


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Guys i'm so overwhelmed with your response.seriously 63 likes this is my first hit above half century.yaar itna likes toh mere ff's ko bi toh diya karo na.ok now with out further delay here u go with nxt part.



Both of them jerked from their long staring session due to the stricking sound of thunder. Jalal's gaze trailed down her hour glass figure.He gulped when he saw the red satin saree material clung to her accentuating her curves.When his gaze collided with her,he tried his level best not to laugh.Jalal very well know what her dirty mind must be thinking right now.Being in a contract marriage for more than a year he knows her both in and out.

"What a pervet,he didn't changed at all"cursing him Jodha turned away from him.

Jalal frowned with her ignorance.
"Can't she say a simple thank you.Well from whom r u expecting that."

"Why should I talk to him?Why should I care about himHe just left me when he got his first love back..I was the one who sacrificed my love for him.I'm never gonna think about him.shaking her head Jodha struggled to walk with her aching girl.She just want to go far away from him.She some how struggled to walk and pick her bag.

Suddenly Jodha heard a bike sound behind her and she saw the man and it is none other than her Jalal.


"He has a bike?From when did billionaire boy started to ride on bikes that to ditching his expensive cars.Who knows?whatever?"Jalal raised the accelerator breaking her thoughts and signalled her to sit.Being a tantrum queen Jodha acted like she never listened or cared about his presence.She stood still and even though she wanted to move she can't because of the pain.

Jalal again raised and again signalled her which she just ignored.Jalal gritted his teeth and thought
This woman didn't changed a bit.controlling his anger he barked at her to get on.

"Hop on Jodha"his commanding words surely send shivering waves through her spines.

"He still remembered my name?Wow!how delightful is that?"she glanced at him and saw him put a stand on his bike and nearing her like a mad bull.

Jodha moved back and was about to fell down but he held her waist She held his jacket fir support and he held her waist.Jodha can feel those tungking sensations already.They were again lost in each other eyes but Jalal pulled away.He made her stand and saw her shivering
Jacket doon?"he asked her softly and without waiting for his answer he removed his jacket and put around her shoulders.Jodha lokked at him.She knew that he is a perfect blend of both good and bad.

[COLOR=MAGENTA]He still cares for you?"
her heart jumped in joy but her mind snapped her saying"Care my foot"

With that Jodha removed his jacket and threw it on him but alas it landed striaght in a mud pool.

"This girl "clenching his teeth.He suddenly held her waist and lifted her and made her to sit on his bike.

[COLOR=MAGENTA]"Put me down you moron."
Jodha yelled and got downfrom bike and said[COLOR=MAGENTA]"I'm not coming with you.

"Challenging are we?"he seethed giving a deadly glare which made her to sit back on his bike.

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"Chalo" Jalal said stopping the bike and started to walk.

"Where?" [ COLOR= BLUE]she asked shivering.





"I'm taking you out for a date"was his reply.

"Huh?"she asked and Jalal shook his head and held her wrist and pulled her closer to him and whisphered"Haan"and winked.Jodha's eyes widened when he swept her off the ground and carried her in bridal style and started to walk near to the village.




"Where are you taking me?"Jodha asked as she saw him walking towards a hut and started to wriggle in his arms.

"Date;I already told you."he replied huskily sending shivers down her body.

Jalal slightly knocks down the door.A Elder man comes out of the hut and looks at the drenched couple.
[B"Ji,woh humara gadi karab hogaya aur mere biwi ki tabiyat theek nahi hai.If u don't mind can we stay here for some time untill it stops raining."Jalal asked with his puppy dog eyes to which the elder man smiled at him and said"No problem beta.I think you and your wife need some privacy;so you stay in my house .I will stay at my brothers house for this night.If you need any help call me.I will be there only"the old man pointed the house and left the couple.

Jalal smirks looking at Jodha and opens the door and soon after entering he makes her to stand and says"Here we go wifey."

"I'm not your wifey Mr.Jalal?Jodha snapped at him and opened her moth like a fish when she saw her husband naked upperhalf and she took a step backward when Jalal took a step towards her.


"Mr.Jalal..."she started as was advancing towards her.

"Jalal.."he whispered huskily and her heart skipped beat .

"Go and take of your wet saree.I will lit fire for us."saying that he went to collect the sticks.

Mean while Jodha removes her wet saree and lay it near his jeans.She is still shivering and in no time Jalal reaches and lits bon fire and sits near it waiting for his wife who was busy with her thoughts.

"Will u give your darshan any time soon,wifey?"Jalal teased his wife who was pacing to and fro.

""Will u stop calling me wifey,Mr.Jalal?"Jodha glared at him and with out her knowledge she stood before her husband.

Jalal propped his brow and smirked at the free show.Jodha frowned thinking why the hell is he smirking and that is when she saw him standing up and nearing her.

Jalal had enough of his wifes tantrums.He stood up and walked near her and with out speaking a word he lifted her and laid down on the hay stack.


Silence prevailed down even the tension was thick in the rain.Jodha could feel his gaze on her back.Jalal kept looking at her and sighed.

The cool breeze was sending shivers down her body.Her teeth were tuttering due to the intensity of chill.Jalal observed her shivering and slowly turned her towards him.

Jodha eyes fluttered open and were captivated by his teal orbs.Suddenly she felt a tear drop on her cheek and saw his misty eyes.Which was a very unusual thing for Jalal.

Jalal couldn't take more and hugged her tightly and confessed his feelings"God,I missed you so much Jaan."


"I'm dying every second after you left me after ending our contract."a tear rolled down his cheek and she stared at him in shock.

Jalal composed himself and continued"You asked me na what I feel for you?"saying that he pulled her even closer and stared directly into her eyes and said those three words which she wanted to listen from his mouth.

"I LOVE U JODHA"...

Her breath hitched in her throat when he nuzzled in the crook of her neck.
"My answer for your question is I love you"he nuzzled more deeply causing butterfly sensations in the pit of her stomach.

She suddenly turned away from him and thought"He can't be serious."

"Are you listening to what I'm saying ?"he asked softly.

"Yeah heard it.If you've finished your drama.Take me back to my home."she jerked him and was about to stand ,when he pulled her close.


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"Jo"he whispered and she shivered visibly when he kissed her nape.



"Don't you have any feelings for me?"he whispered nibbling her ear lobes.

Jodha gulped and replied"I ..I don't."
"Jodha!" his deep voice reverberated in her ears.
"Jalal!" she gasped.

He had a light stuble on his face, there was sadness in his eyes and she was able to read it clearly. His hair was a little dishelved which added a lot to his tiredness.
"what are you doing here?" Jodha quickly put on an annoyed expression.When Jalal advanced smirkingly towards her and now, he started to scare the poor girl.

"what are you doing??" she shouted.
"I'm taking what belongs to me" he said kissing her adam's apple.But her stubborness didn't let her and in rage she pushed him.

suddenly Jalal pulled her and pinned her against the hay stack with his long and strong arms.
She could smell his rich, intoxicating and spicy scent ,making her system go weak.His face was so close to her that she was almost able to feel his breathing on her neck. His touch made her feel secure, she wanted to hug him,surrender in his arms and tell him that even she had same feelings for him.

"Damn! He already started to mess with my mind! You love him enough and you have to let him go! You can't hold on to him forever. He is not yours."Jodha thought.

"let go of me, Jalal!" she screached,against her own will. she didn't want him to let her go. she wanted to stay prisoned in his arms forever.




"you promised me that you would never leave me, remember?" his voice held so much of hurt and she wasn't able to look into his piercing gaze anymore.
Finally managing to push him,she quickly stood and walked away,not wanting to face him.

Jodha knews very well if she just look into his eyes for another second, she wouldn't be able to stop myself from saying the truth.
But, in the next second Jodha felt his tall figure touching her back. His fingers glided on her arms.

"I thought,there was something between us" his deep and soft voice echoed in her ears.
"there was nothing between us,Jalal!don't you get it? It was all just an act!just a fu****g contract" she said, moving further away from him.


"just an act?? My foot!" Jalal said,coming infront of her and forced her to look into his eyes.
"It was an act! I never loved you! I hated every moment that I had to spend with you" Jodha said,hoping he would believe her.

Jalal suddenly pulled her towards him, making her chest crash against his. The next second, she felt his lips touch the sensitive area behind her ear. He slowly started to nibble on it and she had to bite her lips inorder to avoid the moan escaping her lips and her mind totally lost track of when her choli was thrown leaving her upper half naked under his sight.


"did you hate this,Jodha?"he whispered into her ears and slowly his tongue licked her earlobe,sending bolts of electricity through her body. Jodha wasn't able to find to answer him. Her mind went haywire the moment he touched her.


"tell me,Jodha" he demamded. His voice was low and husky as his hand slid down her waist and reached her skirt and soon left her stark naked .
Starting from her feet ,his fingers slowly travelled behind her calf, to her thighs, making her knees buckle and his long fingers slowly travelled uptowards an area where only he has touched her before. Jodha writhered under his magical touches.

"Answer me"he kept his voice so stable and commanding which always surprised her.
She opened her eyes to meet his and that was the mistake she did.

" Damn me! His teal grey ones stared right into her soul and as she opened her mouth ,a soft gasp escaped her mouth "N-no"


That was all that he needed to crash his lips against her.
He held her face so securely in his large palms and his fingers traced her features as his lips were doing its job of devouring her. It was like, he was was trying to memorise his wifes face,his wife's features,their kiss,their moments together.

"How had I missed this feeling of his lips on mine!"Jodha's heart spoke to her.

They kissed like long lost lovers, his tongue did wonders on her lips and teased them ,making her gasp. He took the chance to gain the entrance and attacked her mouth. Jodha was lost in esctacy as their tongues danced in unison.


Her fingers raked through his soft and unruly hair and shd pulled him more towards her,making their bodies press more harder together,if that was even possible. She wanted to savour this feeling for lifetime. His tongue punished her brutally but still she felt a moan escape her lips. His fingers which were resting on her bare thighs now moved upwards and pulled her. But it was too late for her to turn back. She had lost it completely.

Soon lost in sexual euphoria Jodha started to fumble with his denims buttons.

"Take it off"she grunted against his lips.In a swift motion Jalal freed himself from the last piece of his clothing.A groan escaped from his lips that made him realize how much he missed her.

The very next second Jalal carried her and again laid her back on the hay bed.He hovered her and gave a peck on her lips.Their breaths mingled with each other.Jalal started to kiss her neck and left his love marks all over her neck.

"mhmm.."Jodha moaned as he bit on her collar bone."I missed you so much baby"Jalal whispered into her ear and her little heart fluttered with joy.

He started to tease her peaks of her twins with his fingers and slowly desire started to stir in her belly.

Soon his lips took place of his fingers and soon his teeth followed his tongue.

"Jalal.."she moaned his name and her body arched back with the first wave of pleasure.

"Let yourself Jo"he huskily mumbled and she followed his orders and started to swim in the ocean of pleasure.

Jalal's fingers travelled down her abdomen and for a sec he raised his head only to see his wife floating in sexual escatsy.

Jalal wasted no time and placed himself near her entrance and looked deep in to her eyes and suddenly entered her in a gentle way yet punishing way.Jalal grunted as he felt how tight she was and started to thrust deep inside her.He moved in slow pace and closed her eyes in pure pleasure he was offering her.

Jalal moaned when her nails pierced into his akin due to the unbearable euphoria he was giving to her.Beads of sweat formed on their bodies due to their intense session.


Their bodies moved in unison of love and desire.
Their eyes met when both of them reached their peak together.It was a different feeling both of them felt when their eyes met each others.It was not just their bodies reached to the peak but also their hearts.

Jalal stayed inside her as he rested his head in between her br**ts.Jodha played with his soft hairs and his soft yet warm breath send shivers down her spine.







There wasn't a exchange of words between them.Both of them wanted to cherish every moment of their love making session.


"Will you still lie that you doesn't feel any thing for me?"Jalal asked looking straight into her eyes.

"Can't you read my eyes."a tear rolled down from her beautiful eyes while she smiled at him.

Jalal grinned like a idiot and said"Allah ka shukar hai,my plan worked.Finally you confessed your feelings."He rolled her and now she was on top of him.


"Plan?"Jodha frowned at him.

Jalal bit his tongue and fumbled"plan?...what plan?"

"Tell the truth Mr.Jalal"Jodha gave a death glare to her husband.

"Woh..I only sent those men.so that you will come back to me."Jalal admitted shamelessly and in return got a nice punch from his lioness.

"Oww.."he groaned in pain.


"You pervet..."Jodha started to beat him whilst Jalal was trying to control his lioness.

And like that they both confessed their feelings to each other "ON A RAINY DAY"


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sorry for the delay guys.Actually festival haina toh ghar mein function tha so that's why I couldn't find time to update.And thnk u so much for waiting and I know this isn't that much hot like the other ones but yaar this is my first try.So I hope you guys like it atleast tad bit.If so plz shower this with your likes and comments.


Edited by dharaangel - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Filmy os h pura ... Majja aa gya .. Update nxt part soon
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Very nice update nest part soon make it fast don't be late thanks for pm
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Nice update pls continue soon and thanks for pm
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Originally posted by: aswin2134ja

Very nice update nest part soon make it fast don't be late thanks for pm

aswin ek bat bolu ... Gusa mat hona ...Chng ur dilogue please ... 😆😆
Edited by Priyankaakdha - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very bad dhara 😆
OK then will unress after reading next part 😉
Accha ok
It's superb dear
Want to read the next part
Continue soon
And pls reveal the mistry behind jajo break up
Edited by avika444 - 9 years ago
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NICE OS DEAR
CONTINUE SOON😳
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Nice os dharu but i m little confuse about jodha and jalal' relation plz clear it 😃 and update next part so soon buddy
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Originally posted by: mamina



NICE OS DEAR
CONTINUE SOON😳


Congrats mami you r new goldie in the town enjoy your new color buddy 😊

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