Crime Control Squad (Case #1 Hit and Run) Last Chapter 28 Pg 19

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First of all i am really happy that u r writing and that too crime..

Read all 4 chapters... A very good start i must say...u have really succeeded building up the tension and suspense...and use of distinct characterization... Everyone is different frm each other and you maintain the difference... Eagerly waiting for your update

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Originally posted by: -Lachu-
First of all i am really happy that u r writing and that too crime..
Read all 4 chapters... A very good start i must say...u have really succeeded building up the tension and suspense...and use of distinct characterization... Everyone is different frm each other and you maintain the difference... Eagerly waiting for your update

Thanks Lachu..😊 I can see the difference of writing on existing characters and creating new characters and writing on them...😆

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Very well written Shweta..👏...I was actually seeing the entire scenes happening in front of my eyes... I liked how the case was slowly developing from a normal hit and run case to a more deeper conspiracy murder... I also liked how the team works together and the general bonding between them, especially Vedant and his equations with each one of his collegues...Good to see you writing after a long time...👍🏼

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Superb beginning Shwetha.. The story seems to be really interesting..

Liked the way u blended the unfolding of new case with the team dynamics and character sketch of the crime squad members.. 👏

Though i'm not a big fan of crime genre ( its a bit difficult for me to memorise all the details of the story and i usually end up re-reading the previous chaptrs to make sense... 😆 ) I really look forward to read the future chaptrs of dis story, as i expect wonders from the MOTD Creator... 😊

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