Crime Control Squad (Case #1 Hit and Run) Last Chapter 28 Pg 19 - Page 2

This is fantastic👍🏼
Thanks fr writing🤗

Originally posted by: do0dleR

Very well written Shweta..👏...I was actually seeing the entire scenes happening in front of my eyes... I liked how the case was slowly developing from a normal hit and run case to a more deeper conspiracy murder... I also liked how the team works together and the general bonding between them, especially Vedant and his equations with each one of his collegues...Good to see you writing after a long time...👍🏼

Originally posted by: marymol

Superb beginning Shwetha.. The story seems to be really interesting..

Liked the way u blended the unfolding of new case with the team dynamics and character sketch of the crime squad members.. 👏

Though i'm not a big fan of crime genre ( its a bit difficult for me to memorise all the details of the story and i usually end up re-reading the previous chaptrs to make sense... 😆 ) I really look forward to read the future chaptrs of dis story, as i expect wonders from the MOTD Creator... 😊

Originally posted by: ...Shibu...

This is fantastic👍🏼
Thanks fr writing🤗

shwe that pic is nyc..put this in wattpad too😊

Originally posted by: arshiss

shwe that pic is nyc..put this in wattpad too😊

Interesting update.. 👏 So the case is getting dark and complicated..waiting to know how the team will solve it out

I am liking Vedant's character. Interested to know about his past.. I hav started wondering whether he will get back his family (if any.. 😆 ) as the case progresses

thanks for the pm.

Originally posted by: marymol

Interesting update.. 👏 So the case is getting dark and complicated..waiting to know how the team will solve it out

I am liking Vedant's character. Interested to know about his past.. I hav started wondering whether he will get back his family (if any.. 😆 ) as the case progresses

thanks for the pm.

shwe 👏👏