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( hi..I am a silent reader of this forum, and SwaSan fan, today posting my first ff on swasan, please comment and share your views )
~Tu Jaane Na~
(Scene): Sanskar came Swara's home, dadi is doing "Khaatirdari" and all.. Sharmishtha and Shekhar also chatting with Sanskar but he is only
searching for his Swara, who was not there in the dining hall, Ragini was seen standing there ata corner with "lost-somewhere" expression.
Dadi : "Beta tum toh kuch kha hi nahi rahe, kya baat hai ? beta tumne hume maaf toh ki hai na? hum sachme bohat sharminda ..."
Sanskar stopped her in between and said : " Dadi ji, aap aisi baatein barbar mat kahiye, galti toh maine bhi kaafi ki hai, aap kisse maafi mang rahi hai ?
Aur waise bhi..beeti baaton ko bhool jaane me hi sabki bhalai hai, aap bhi bhool jao aur aap plz maafi mat mango bohat bura lagta hai mujhe.."
Shekhar: " Beta, humne toh humesha hi insaan ko samajhne me galti kar di... (giving an angry look at Ragini), lekin ab jab samajhme aya
toh ek baat dilse bolna chahta hoon "tum dil se bohat sachche ho... sayed galti ki hai tumne bhi..lekin usse nikal bhi aaye ho kiunki tum
dil se bure nahi ho...kuch logon ke tarah..."
Sanskar : "thank you... but uncle ..main iss sabse bahar sirf Swara ke wajah se aa paya...wo saath thi toh sab kuch sahi chal raha tha... par ab..."
(sanskar stopped and cleared throat )
Sharmistha : " Ab kya Sankar..tum kya kahna chahte ho batao na..lo swara bhi aa gayi.."
(Swara entered , looked at Sanskar and smiled )
Sanskar smiled back and Sharmistha noticed Sanskar's eyes little teary...
Sanskar : (took a deep breath and continued ) : "toh jab Swara bhi ihaan hai , toh mujhe lagta hai ab sahi waqt hai ki main kahe du joh kuch bhi aj kahne ke
liye mujhe ihaan aana pada..."
Sekhar and Dadi looked at sanskaar, Swara nd Sharmistha looked at each other..
Sanskar continued " Dadiji, uncle, Aunty, aap sab jante hai ki Main aur Swara ek huye...(stopped and again cleared throat) ..Matlab...saath they
kiunki humara ek Mission tha..joh ki ab successfully puri ho chuki hai,... hum bas ye chahte they ki Ragini ki sach samne aaye..
lekin us manjil tak pauchte pauchte hum donoko kuch aur bhi aisa kaam karna pada joh hum bilkool bhi nahi karna chahte they..
(stopped and lowered his head) .." humari jhooti shaadi ko sach banana jismese sabse bada ...(stopped) ..sabse bada..."Accident" hai..swara ke liye.."
..(looked up at everybody) " but sach maniye..maine kabhi Swara ki zindegi kharaab nahi karna chahta tha..haalat ne karwayi joh bhi maine ki..
I am..sorry for all that..lekin main usko aise dard me ak zabardasti ki shaadi jhelte huye nahi dekh sakta...joh bhi galat huya..usko..
usko kuch hadh tak sahi karna chahta hon... (sigh ) isiliye..maine ek decision li hai...wohi aap sabko batane aaye hai"
Sharmistha : "kya decide ki tumne Sanskar?"
Sanskar looked at Swara..on her eyes... and said " ki... ki.. ( looked on another direction ) "main Swara ko divorce dunga... "
Sekhar surprised, Dadi Shocked, Ragini gave a smirk
Swara continued looking at Sanskar...
Dadi : Yeh tum kya kahe rahe ho beta... Shaadi ek pavitra bandhan hai..tum aise tod nahi sakte ho..."
Sanskar :" jaante hai hum daadi..isiliye zabardasti wo rishta nahi banana chahte hai..hum Swara ki zindegi kharaab nahi hone de sakte ..shaadi jaisi pavitra rishta wo jabardasti kyun nibhaye? usse pura haq hai apni zindegi sahi dhang se jeene ki..ye rishta ek bojh hai, Swara ke liye..aur main usse azaad karna chahta hoon, ta ki woh apni khusi se jee sake..na ki bewajah ek rishtey ki bojh zindegibhar sahti rahe..nahi Dadi ji , main ye nahi hone de sakta.."
Ragini :( just commented to make fun of Swasan relation) "Par tum toh Swara se pyaar karte the Sanskar...aur jaisa ki aap sabne jaante hai, wo kaha gaya ? wo bhi natak tha kya"
Shekhar (Angry ) : "iss ladki ko iss room me kisne bulaya... chal tu nikal aur aapne kamre me jaa, tujhe muh kholne ka bohat shaukh hai.."
Sannskar (Smiled) : "Uncle ..please calm down .. Ragini ko jawab main deta hoon ..aur waise bhi...mera pyar hai hi aisa...har koi humesha mazakh hi
udaata rahata hai.. (looked at Swara and smiled with teary eyes..)
then Sanskar turned at Ragini and told " waise toh tumhe jawab dena main jaruri nahi samajhta..lekin..fir bhi
tumhare "samanya jaankari" ke liye kahe doon... Main kya aur kyun kar raha hoon wo tum iss janam main nahi samajh payogi...
kiunki tumhare kiye pyaar matlab sirf haasil karna hota hai... toh main tumhe nahi samjha paunga...toh aise bichme sawal karke mera aur apna
waqt barbaad mat karo..."
Ragini gave angry expression and said " Dadi maa koi bhi bahar wala aake mujhe kuch bhi suna deta hai..aap kuch kahenge nahi?"
Sanskar smiled , Dadi shouted at Ragini..
Dadi :" Tu choop kar chodi... tujh se jyada baharwala iss ghar me aur koi na hai..haan...aur ek baat yaad rakh chodi..
ye jise tu baharwala kah raha hai wo damaad hai iss ghar ka...aur unka izzat karna sikh warna tare liye achcha na hoga.."
Swara (talked for first time) "Kaun damaad daadi..."
(Everyone looked at Swara ...surprised)
Swara looked at Sanskar with slightly teary eyes and told
:
" Aap jinhe damaad kahe rahi hai daadi wo toh rishta todne ki baat bolne aaya hai,
Toh ab jab unhe iss rishtey ki koi zaroorat nahi raha..toh hum bhi kyun nibhaye?"
Sharmishtha : " tu ye kya bol rahi hai swara ? ye baat tujhe bhi maaloom hai aur mujhe bhi ki Sanskar apne jagha sahi hai...woh joh kuch bhi kar raha hai..tere liye hi.."
Swara : "Mere liye ? main kahan se bich me aa gayi maa ? (looked at Sanskar) yeh aapna faisla sunane aaya hai ... mujhse discuss karne
ya puchne nahi..ye inki decision hai...mera nahi... "
Sanskar : "matlab..swara..main toh bas..."
Swara " Its ok Sanskar.. ab kuch bhi sunne aur samajhne ke liye baaki nahi hai... tumne mee pe kaafi ehsaan ki hai..ek aur ehsaan kar do..
jitni jaldi ho sake... divorce papers bhej dena..main sign kar doongi..aur aaj ke baad iss ghar me kabhi mat aana...kiunki ye log
tumhe damaad mante hai, aur inke values aur emotions ke saath kaafi mazakh ho chuki hai...ab bas karo.."
Swara left the room..Sekhar went behind her...
Sanskar stood there lowering his head..
Sharmishta came near him and told " mujhe pata hai beta..tum Swara ki bhalai chahti ho..I think she is disturbed... waqt do usse ,
wo samajh jayegi..ke tumne jo kiya usme ...tumhe dard sabse zyada mil rahi hai.."
Sanskar looked at Sharmishta ..surprised..
Sharmishtha " mujhe sab pata chalta hai beta..maa jo hu...tumhare ankhon me saaf dikhai deti hai ki...tum Swara se bohat pyar karte ho."
Sanskar again lowered head and said in low voice "lekin..maine toh usse sirf hurt karta hu aunty...dekho na..(looked up with teary eyes)
..dekho na..main chahe kuch bhi karu ..wo galat hi hota hai haar baar..aur haar baar Swara ko dard milti hai..main hi curse hoon
uski zindegi ke liye...promise ki..main..jaldi..bohat dur chala jaunga..itna ki..meri yaad bhi Swara ko kabhi padeshan na kare..
(stopped a little to control his tears)
Chalta hoon Aunty..Swara ko kahna, main ihaan aur kabhi nahi aayunga.. sorry aagar mere wajahse aaplogon ko dukh paucha ho toh..maaf kar dena mujhe Aunty.."
before Sharmishta could console him..Sanskar left...
Sharmishta looked back and saw her saas heared everything, standing there silently
Sharmi "Maa..hum kya kare maa.. Sanskar sachme pyaar karte hai Swara se..lekin Swara ke dil me kya hai wo toh.."
Dadi :" hume kuch karna hoga Sharmishtha..aise iss rishtey ko tutne main nahi dungi..meri Swara ko sanskar se zyada pyaar koi nahi
kar sakta.."
Sharmi "par hum kya kare maa"
Dadi "tu mare saath aa zaara"
Sharmishta and her saas left the room..to discuss a secret plan on "reunite swasan" Mission..
Precap : Ragini showing Swara some pictures---Sanskar with another girl in pictures--- Dadi left a msg for Sanskar from Swara's phone---Sanskar restless----calling Swara--- Swara ignoring calls---Laksh noticed sanskar in pain...decided to reunite SwaSan--- planned something and sent Swara a msg--(and some more surprises coming...)
plz give me your valuable comments , and if you don't like the concept or writing please let me know...all type of comments will be welcomed... 😃
UPDATE PART 2 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/127808254
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