~Tu Jaane Na~ SwaSan FF (UPDATE ON PAGE 3) - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice concept ...but swasan ko alag math karna...
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Loved that dadi and shomi are trying to unite swasan..
Eagerly waiting for the next part..
Continue soon
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Wow it was a lovely FF ,I liked it a lot dear😃😳,it was so interesting dr,loved it soo much the precap was just awesome😃👏👏,pls continue soon👏
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Originally posted by: mridulakrishnan

nice concept ...but swasan ko alag math karna...

Never... 😊
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~Tu Jaane Na~ SwaSan FF


Part 2:

Sharmistha's room :
Sharmistha and Parvati discussing something...

Sharmistha : "Par maa..."

Parvati : " Dekh Sharmistha, ab par var kuch nahi , tu chahti hai Swara khush rahe, hai ki nahi ?"

Sharmistha : "haan ma, aur Shona ke liye main kuch bhi kar sakti hu , lekin ye ladki kabhi batati nahi ki chahti kya hai , kya chal raha hai uske dil me ..Na to wo Sanskar se khul kar baat kar rahi hai , nahi uske bina aage bad pa rahi hai, na to wo usse alag rah kar khush hai aur na hi saath nibhane ki bat kar rahi hai, main karu th kya karu maa ?"

Parvati : "isiliye to..tareko jo kahe rahi hoon na main, wo kar, dekh Sharmistha , mareko ye baat samajhne me bilkool galathi na huyi ke Swara aur sanskar ek dusre ke liye bane hai , aur main donoko milake rahungi , haa , iss baar ye rishta tootne me na dungi..arre shaadi biya koi khel thodi hai...tu mareko bata tu saath de rai hai ke nahi.."

Sharmistha : "theek hai maa..aap ne jo kaha..main waise hi karungi "

Parvati : " bas..baaki tu mare pe chod de.. dekhna bohat jald humari Swara wo hasti khelti Swara..wapas aayegi..uski khusi Sanskar me hai... tu bas saath dena aur dekhti jaa main kya karti hoon "

Ragini was outside the room, and she heard everything about Parvati and Sharmi's plan hiding herself there in a suitable place

Ragini (in her mind ) : " Humare ghar ujar ke tum Sanskar ke saath khush rahogi ye hum hone nahi denge Swara...Laksh hume ab kabhi nahi apnayenge..aur ye sab tumhare wajah se huya..agar pahle hi tum Sanskar ke saath shaadi karke khush rahe leti toh hum bhi apne pati ke saath khush ho pate..lekin tumne aisa nahi kiya Swara..tumne humara sach sabko batake humara ghar , humara pyar , humara ma papa sabkuch humse cheen li..aur ab tumhe Sanskar chahiye ? Main tumhe kabhi khush hone nahi dungi Swara..tum dono ko kabhi ek nahi hone dungi...jaise main tadap rahi hu apne pyar ke liye..waise hi tum aur sanskar bhi tadpoge ak dusre ke liye.. zindegibhar..."

Scene : Maheswari Mansion

Sanskar entering the house , Sujata noticed him..

Sujata : "sanskar...tu kaha tha beta shubha se gayeb..oho achcha...Lawyer se baat karne gaya tha kya ?"

Sanskar : (looked up with surprise ) : " lawyer kyun ? "

Sujata " Hey Bhagwan, iss chode ko buddhi do... arre toh swara ke saath divorce kaun karwayega ?"

Laksh came there , he was going somewhere but stopped there hearing sanky and Sujata conversation..

Sanskar's eyes again became teary , he looked another direction to hide that and stopped a while to clear his voice then said : "ho jayega maa, aap chinta mat karo, main Swara ke ghar gaya tha, mujhe laga..pahle usse pata hona chahiye?"

Sujata :" Aur kya kaha usne ? Swara bohat samajhdar ladki hai aur mareko pata hai wo bhi chutkara chahti hai rishtey se.."

Sanskar looked at Sujata, he started recalling all that harsh words Swara told him... Laksh noticed the pain visibly clear from sanskar's face , Sanskar was trying hard to hide it but his eyes telling the whole story...

Sujata : "ke huya Sanskar ? Tare tabiyat toh theek hai na ? ke huya ? Swara ne kuch kaha hai kya? "

Sanskar : " Nahi..nahi maa.. swara ke pas ab mujhse kahne ke liye ab kuch raha nahi (smiled) ..bas tired hu thoda sa.. rest karna chahta hu .. aapse baad me baat karu ?"

Sujata : "haan , haan beta , tu jaa, aaraam kar le thodasa..."

Sanskar left for his room and Laksh came infront of Sujata

Laksh " Chachi ji , aap kisiki divorce ki..matlab Sanskar aur aur swara ki divorce honewala hai kya ? aap chahti hai ye rishta na rahe ?"

Sujata : " ha Laksh , tujhe toh pata hai , kin halaton me ye dono ka biya huya tha... wo bandhan toh bojh hai na aur mara beta kyun rahe iss bojh me? aur mene pahle hi kahe di ke Koi Bangalan mara bahu nahi banegi bas.."

Laksh: " kya chachi ji aap bhi ...Bangalan aur Marwari laga rakhi hai aur wo bhi iss jamane me... aap puri duniya dekh lo dhundke...marwari chodo kisi bhi caste me ya religion me aap ko swara se better ladki nahi milegi..insaan ki value uski swabhab aur gun se ki jaati hai , na ki janam kundli se...aap hi kaho Ragini jaisi marwari bahu milegi aapko toh aap khush rahogi ?"

Sujata : "tara baat sahi hai Laksh ..lekin fir bhi.."

Laksh : "fir bhi.. purani kheyalon se nikalne me aapko waqt lagegi...theek hai koi baat nahi , lakin kya aap Sanskar aur swara ke mamle me jaldbaaji nahi kar rahi hai ? Sanskar mera bhaai hai , usse dekh kar mujhe nahi lag raha hai ke wo ye sab karna chahta hai ya khush hai ye sab se,.."

Sujata ; " na na Laksh , tu galat samajh raha hai mareko ..Sanskaar khud aake mareko kaha ke wo Swara ko divorce degi...mare ne koi zabardasti na ki...sachchi.."

Laksh : "Aisa hai ? fir toh mamla kuch aur hai...Mujhe hi bhaai se baat karna padega..."

Laksh left....

Scene :Swara's House :

Swara sitting on bed, in her room ,lost in thoughts...

Someone knocked at door... It was Ragini...

Swara : " Ragini.. aao na, mere room me aane ke liye tumhe knock karne ki zaroorat nahi hai "

Ragini came and gave Swara an envelope ...

Ragini : "Swara, wo..ye Sanskar sayed bhool gaye yehi... jab woh gaye, humne dekha, ye Sofe par hai..toh humne socha ki tumhe de de...tum log miloge toh unhe wapas kar dena..sayed zaroori ho.."

Swara : "Hum ab sayed kabhi nahi milenge Ragini..tum ye baba ko de dete..baba kah rahe the unhe Maheswari mansion jaana hai.."

Ragini : "tumhe pata hai Swara...Humse toh koi baat nahi karte...ab tumhi socho iss ko kaise lautana hai, aur tumhi papa ko de dena..lo, pakdo.."

She knowingly gave it in a way so that the envelope fell from her hand while Swara taking it from her ...and a picture came out from it

Ragini "oops..sorry...( and picked the picture up ) ye ..gid gaya..lekin ye.."

Swara also saw the picture..it was Sanskar with a girl, both smiling holding hands...
Swara snatched the envelope from Ragini and saw all the pictures...there were something like, the girl posing with Sanskar, smiling with him , having fun etc.."

Swara : "ye kaun hai ? Kavita toh nahi hai..."

Ragini : " Kyun tumhe nahi pata ye kaun hai? ye toh Sanskar ki bohat achchi koi dost lag rahi hai..bohat kareeb koi... aur tumhe nahi pata... tum toh patni ho aur tumhe hi nahi pata.."

Swara : " Mujhe kuch nahi samajh me aa raha hai Ragini (looked up with teary eyes) main issko nahi jaanti..aur...(angry) waise bhi... mujhe wo kyun pataye? main kaun hoti hoon ?Main koi bhi nahi hoon..tumne dekha nahi...rishtey todna chahte they wo... par tumne sahi kaha hai Ragini...ye bohat zaruri cheez hai unke liye... samhalke lautana padega"


Swara stormed out of her room...

Parvati came there and noticed Swara in that mood and Ragini standing there ..

Parvati : " Swara beta kya huya , kaha jaa rahi hai ? mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai...wo aaj Sanskar ..."

Swara : " Sorry Dadi ji mein apko bich me rok rahi hu , lekin plz mujhe sanskar ke bareme kuch nahi sunna... humara rishta khatam ho chuki hai dadi maa, ab koi baat baaki nahi hai...main mandir jaa rahi hu daadi ma.. wohi jaha humari zindegi badal gayi thi humesha ke liye...mujhe God se kuch puchna hai... main..jaldi wapas aa jaungi , fir baat karte hai "

Swara left..

Dadi shouted at Ragini : " tune firse apna rang dikhaya hai na ? kya kiya tune swara ke saath ? dekh chodi , ab hum kuch bhi thari harkatein bardasht nahi karenge haan.."

Ragini : " Nahi dadi maa, hum bas ihaan se jaa rahe they , Swara ko gharme dekha ke ki udaas hoke baithi hai , iss liye puchne chali aaye... par baat nahi huyi..humse usne koi baat nahi ki..aur baaki aap ko pata hi hai.."

Dadi noticed Swara's phone lying on her bed... and she thought something and told ragini : "achcha cha ..theek hai..tu ja ihaan se..aur haan ,Swara ki kheyal rakhne ke liye hum sab hai, tu usse dur rahegi toh meherbani hogi..ab jaa"

Ragini left...with a smiling face as her plan working somewhere..

Dadi entered the room took swara's phone and thought " kyun na jo plan ki thi humne , wo abhi se suru kar du, mauka bhi achchi hai .."

Dadi typed a msg "MANDIR ME MILO..."

And sent it to Sanskar, and smiled , thinking... "achcha hai, dono jitna milenge akele me, utni hi kareeb ayenge...aur duriya kaam ho jayegi... devi maa mari swara ko uski khusi lauta do..mareko pata hai, sanskar zaroor ayyega.."


Scene : MAHESWARI MANSION

sanskar in his room , sitting on sofa, covering his face with hands...

Laksh entered.. came near sanskar and touch his shoulder

Sanskar looked up : (his eyes were red, as if he cried for long ) ..arrey Lucky, tu aaj kam par nahi gaye..

Laksh sat beside him : "nahi bhaai, socha tujhse kuch zaroori baatein kar lu..."

Sanskar : " haan haan..bata na.."

Laksh " tu promise kar , tu sach batayega.."

Sansker smiled and nodded " haan baba tu bol to sahi.."

Laksh : "tu Swara ko divorce kyun de raha hai ?"

Sanskar surprised at this question and turned his face and said " yeh kaisa sawal huya..tu sabkuch janta hai Lucky "

Laksh : " Mujhe ye pata hai bas ki tu Swara se pyaar karta hai ,hai ki nahi , fir alag hona kyun chahta hai ?"

Sanskar turned and looked at Laksh : " main kya feel karta hoon wo important nahi hai, mere liye ye important hai ki Swara kya chahti hai, aur wo mujhse pyar nahi karti ..(lowered his eyes) wo ye shaadi nahi chahti thi...aur main use ek zabardasti ke rishte me nahi dekhna chahta hu... aur waise bhi..(sanskar stood up ) main Swara ke liye sahi nahi hoon...agar main usse iss rishtey se azaad kar du, toh tum dono bhi ek ho sakte ho..tum bhi to.."

Laksh : "ek minute Sanskar, Ye baat joh abhi tumne kaha wo phirse aur kabhi mat kahna..jis din se tum dono ka shaadi huya..uss din se, swara mere liye sirf meri bhabi hai, achchi dost hai, main uski bohat izzat karta hoon, aur raha baat Swara ki..toh main usse mil chuka hoon..maafi mangne gaya tha..usne hume saaf kahe diya ki..wo mujhe maaf kar chuki hai , aur puri tarha se apni zindegi me aage bar chuki hai..uske dilme mere liye ab kuch nahi raha..nahi gussa nahi pyar..hum sirf achche dost hai... "

Sanskar : " Bhabi ? (smiled) nahi re lucky..main ek curse hoon uske liye, aur tu zabardasti usko mere sath jud mat.. uski insult hogi... main bohat buda hu..aur wo toh mera shakal hi nahi dekhna chahti hai.. aur sahi bhi hai..maine usse dard ke ilawa kuch diya nahi... "


Laksh : " kahi kuch gadbad hai Sanskar... jo dikh raha hai wo hai nahi.. tu bas jaldbaaji me aa kar koi galti mat kar..iss sab ke liye waqt hai abhi.."

Sanskar turned to Laksh and Laksh noticed tears in his eyes : " Nahi Lucky , Waqt hi nahi hai , Swara ko sab jaldi chahiye..mujhse ..mujhse chutkara jaldi chahiye... main bas uski khusi chahta hoon aur bas...ab aur kuch nahi ho sakta isske ilawa... aur yakeen maan mujhe koi dukh nahi aur main bohat khush hu..kiunki isime Swara khush hai"

A msg came on Sanskar's phone but as it was silent , Sanskar did not Notice it at that time...

Laksh : " sanskar, mujhe dikhai de raha hai tu wakay bohat khush hai.."

Sanskar lowered his had and felt it is going out of his control to stop tears now...whatever swara told him , stabbing his heart badly and he is feeling too heavy to talk to anybody about this...he told Laksh : "Lucky..mujhe..mujhe kuch kaam yaad aaya ..tu ruk ..main abhi aata hoon"

And he left before Laksh could stop him

Laksh : (in his mind ) Mujhe tujhko aise nahi dekhna bhai..maine bhi galti ki hai , mere wajah se Swara ki Zindegi kharaab huyi..main uspe bharosa na kar paya... Swara deserves a devoted person like you...joh har haal me uski khusi chahte hai..khudo meeta ke bhi..main usse itna pyar
Kabhi nahi kar pata..ye khuda ki marzi hai ke tum dono ek huye..aur ab unke marzi ke khilaaf jaa ke tum dono aise alag nahi ho sakte... main hone nahi dunga... ab mujhe hi in dono ko milana hoga... kuch toh karna padega..kuch toh karna padega.."

saying so Laksh left ...

Scene :Sanskar was seen punching the boxing bag crazily...
he was sweating heavily and telling himself " kyun main usko har baar hurt kar deta hoon..kyun?
...(punches) Maine wada tod diya dosti ka...kyun ? (punches )...Main kyun usko bata diya ki mujhe pyaar ho gaya usse..usi manhoos ghari se toh wo humse nafrat karti hai (punches).. Kyun ? Kyun ? Main aapne tak ye baat kyun nahi rakh paya .. kyun ? (punches ) Mujhe maaf kar do Swara.. (punches and cries ) Main tumhe kabhi hurt nahi karna chahta tha..(punches...) Main tumhe nahi dekh sakta dard me...(punches and leaves it there and sat on floor covering his face) " Mujhe samajhne ki koshish toh karte Swara... Kuch toh baat sunte mere bhi...bohat pyaar karta hu tumse main , nahi rah sakta tumhare bina..phir bhi ye sab kar raha hu ki tum khush raho..sirf tumhare liye..main marne bhi tayar hu Swara..aur jab tum mujhe kabhi apnayoge nahi toh fir kyun ye gussa Swara ? sirf ek Shaadi ke bandhan ko jhelne ke liye ? kis liye ? kiunki tum samajhti ho agar ekbaar ye jud jaye toh marte daam tak har haal me nibhana padega? warna Bhagwan gussa ho jayenge...? tumhare gharwale kya sochenge ? toh karne do gussa..mere pe karenge na? main sab sahe lunga ...lakin tum kyun iss bojh koh sahte raho..jiske shakal tak tumhe pasand nahi..uske saath zindegi nahi beeta paogi Swara...aur main tumhe roz mere saath daam todte huye nahi dekh sakta..sirf nivbhane ke liye mat nibhao Swara..jab pyar hi nahi hai..khatam karo..."

Sanskar broke in tears...

..Few hours later... Sanskar was seen coming out of his bathroom as he was bathing to wash off sweat and tears... he saw his phone lying on bed and missed call and new msg light blinking..sanskar cheked the phone only to find a msg from Swara's phone 2 hours ago... Sanskar at first taken aback and shocked as swara wantec to meet him , then realized it was too late and Swara must be angry again so he called her immediately..

Here in Swara's room the phone was lying on her bed ringing.. but there's nobody to pick it up..

Sanskar tried 3 times then thought " Swara ignoring my call...maine firse gadbad kar di... mujhe abhi jana padega, sayed wo ab tak wohi ho.."

Sanskar left..

#end of Part 2

PRECAP : Swara Sanskar got stuck in rain and end up spending a night together in a temple...😉.. Sujata realises Swara is best for Sanskar.. Laksh understood Ragini's plan and warned her also tried to bring her in right path... Laksh and Sujata joined hand with dadi and Sharmistha for reuniting SwaSan...and many more twists in next update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
Wow wow wow!
Ragini,koi kaske thapad lagao isko pl.
Aha!all r in mission swasan milap.yay!
Poor sanskar & angry jealous swara..
Awsm prcm.swasan stuck.haye!
Thnks 4 pm.cnt soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
Loved the update. Here laksh is not seeking for swara's hand. Instead he want to unite our swasan. I hate that evil ragini😡. How cum she make our swara agry by showing sanskar and someother girls photo. Very positive character dadi helping for uniting swasan👏. In precap finally sujatha felt swara is best for sanskar.Hope here after laksh will keep eye on ragini also not to make her creating more misunderstanding between swasan. pls continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow it was just amazing yaar👏👏👏
Loved it a lot😳😳
Pls do continue soon😛
Thanks a lot for the pm😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I am happy to see that my f is so much loved and appreciated , thank you guys, will try to update soon 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
I liked at lucky is not after swara...
Recap is awesom...

Continue soon..

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