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Posted: 9 years ago
I'm hell busy in my life... I started writing at a wrong time..
I should have started this story after my exmas but ab start ki hai to itne comments and all "plz post the ch"
Yar i'm a new writer... mujhe bohat time lagta hai oper se i'm writing this story in POV's so it's compeletly new for me
I was supposed to update stuck alone as it's 2 days... i haven't updated i was stuck with this story
Chapter will take time but i guess u guys are not ready to wait and u want Manan moments so prologue is here
in ch 1 i's all about Nandini... and Manan childhood and their memories but here is Manan's first talk
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Prologue:

I can't believe what Mukti told me...like seriously he wants to meet me ALONE but why?
What if he wants to express his feelings??
Oh My God what am I thinking?? stop this Nandu don't expect too much...
what if Mukti was lieing? yeah i know she is a frankster but she will not play with me like this..with my feelings
I think I should talked to him let me clear everything
I decided to stop my feelings I will not allow them to grow by the time cz it will only create problems for me itself...
I was having mixed feelings inside me when i got a text msg
It was him...Oh My God..means Mukti was right.. now what I will do?

Msg: "Nandini there?"

I finally got courage and replied camly
"yes"

Msg: "it's me Manik.. Mukti told u?"

Now i'm sure Mukti was right as well I was confuse...mixed feelings were going inside me...it's like my heart stopped beating
"Yes...what u want to say?"
i replied composing myself

Manik: "i want to talk to u... can we meet somewhere alone"

He just said that... he wants to meet me alone... i don't know what's going inside him but I stopped breathing...
I can't just say yes... we are talking after years...it's almost 5 years we didn't talk and now all of the sudden i can't just say yes
I controlled my feelings and anserwed
"No... why u want to meet me?"
I didn't mentioned "ALONE" what he will be thinking if i will write?

Manik: "i want to talk to you"

He was being straight forward and my heartbeat was increasing with each passing second
I so much wanted to talk and tell him how much i missed him in these 5 years... but no i'm Nandini...
At this point being so straight forward no no no...or what if he wants to tell somthing else.. i'm expecting to much.. it's better we don't talk

So i replied : "but I don't want to talk to you... you can tell me here what u want to say...I don't have much time"
I showed him as i'm really busy... obviously i'm busy... my exams are going on and because of him i'm not able to study... he is on my mind from morning...

Manik: "it's something important... and i will tell you when we will meet"

Now i was sure what important thing he was talking about... he is not ready to tell on chat...he want's to do something special?
what if Yes... he wants to do something special and what i will say in reply... no i can't meet him
Why he is stuck at meeting... even i'm not able to amma will not allow and i can't lie also
"I can't meet u... u can tell me here only"

Manik: "But why?"

Now he is asking reasons... now i have to explain him everything... If i will give some reasons... he will create solutions..
"i don't want to"
I don't know what will be his reply after this.. i was just waiting when i recieved another msg from him

Manik: "u are being rude...i was saying just once"

What?? he said that i'm rude... yeah i'm being rude...
Years back we were too good friends but now i'm not even ready to meet him... but what should I do?
We were childern at that time and now situation is changed...
"I'm not being rude.. it's just that i don't want to meet u"
I replied him but i was not sure what will be his reaction

Manik: "I thought you like me as I did... i will never msg you again... thank you"

After reading his msg my breathe got stuck...I was jumping in joy...He didn't said it directly but he said indirectly.. so the meaning is same..
I was waiting for from so long and finally the day comes... he expressed... but my face again went pale after remembering what he said at last
He will never try to contact me again... no i can't let that happen... He even didn't said it directly
"What u mean by i though u like me as i did?"
I asked him staright forwardly showing him that i'm a little angry and the realit was that i wanted him to say directly that's why i asked this question

Manik: "I Like You... i just wantto know You like me or not?"

Finally he said this but he even asked what i feel... i was confused... by the way I even don't know myself... what i feel for him?
I know that he likes me from so long and i just wanted him to confess... i never thought about my feelings... and even if I feel i'm not gonna say Yes... he will think I was waiting for his proposal and I smply said yes so i replied
"No"
a simple no.. i don't know why i typed it and how but the msg was now sent

Manik: "ok... i will never disturb to again... i'm sorry"
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Guys i want to update long so it will take time as well i will u guys have only idea of the story... this prologue will tell u how i'm starting it... hope this time u will also support me...
And plz don't say to post soon...
When u all say this na mujhe tension ho jati hai that i have to update u all are waiting all is tension ki waja se mujhe se kuch nai hota...
Mere exams a rahe hain and I need to work hard... even then i'm updating
or from last month i can see my results are are good I also have want to improve them...
I'm updating and i will update but have some paitence
Ch 1 after stuck alone till then enjoy this
Do tell how is this...
Take Care
Stay Blessed
Love
Dua...
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Posted: 9 years ago
off course dear...
Interesting... Eagerly waiting for ur update...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
VERYYY NICE..
INTERESTING...
THIS HAPPENS WHEN WE AFRAID OF OUR PARENTS...
WE DO WHAT THEY SAY...
WITHOUT CARING OF OURSELVES...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice start
Nandini said no to him hmmm but she is nt sure of her felngs so it happens

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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice prologue..
manik is straight forward...
I really like it...
nandu is confusing...Cute...
update soon...
waiting for stuck alone...
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Posted: 9 years ago
It seems that she is actually confused...
nice starting...
take care...
keep smiling...
Keep Shining...
lots Of Love..
Stay Blessed..

Edited by APS234 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome start
liked the concept
manik is straight forwas that is nice
continue aaram se coz studies are more important
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Posted: 9 years ago
ITS AWESOME
PLZ UPDATE ASAP
EAGERLY WAITING FIR THE FIRST CHAPTER
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Posted: 9 years ago
super prologue /. eagerly waiting .. update son
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Posted: 9 years ago
Heyy ...interesting prologue...i'm loving this confused nandini ...n wanna know how she will gather the courage to finally accept it...
Cont. soon whenever u get time...
N yaa..thanx fr pm...
Byee... tc...

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