Manan SS.... Pyaar ka imtehan Part 30 on pg 136 updated .. 1st Nov - Page 30

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Kisi ko update Chaheye
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Thank you to all of you for your love and appreciation.Now Update time.

Sorry In Advance in Case of error or Mistakes.







In Police Station

Mr Malhotra reached in P.S and meet Commissioner in his cabin.

C: Ao Malhotra! Main tumhara hi intezar kar raha tha.

Mr Malhotra shake hands with Commissioner and take a seat in front of commissioner.

Mr Malhotra: Kam hoa?

C: arey yaar tum kaho aur kam na ho pahle kabhi aisa hoa hai.

Mr Malhotra with smile shook his head in No

C: Bht Kamzoor jaan hai bechare ki ! pahle hi round mein sub kuch maan gya.Yeh hai os ka written statement aur yeh hai statement in voice. Ab bolo agey kya karna hai.

Mr Malhotra think something and told Commissioner about his further Plan.

Here in Malhotra Mansion

All are enjoying their time with fun.Abeer was sleeping in Nandini's Lap . On one side on Nandini Manik was sitting and on other side Navyaand with Navya Cabir to ho ga hi.

In Other side Mady, Mukti, Aliya, Dhruv and then Aryaman.Cabir placed his head on Navya's Shoulder.

Nandini asked Manik : Manik tum ne medicine li apni.

Manik nodded in yes

Nandini now asked same question from Cabir and he said: yaar mujh se yeh medicine bar bar nahi li jati main aise hi thek hoon.

Navya on this said in a lil anger: Cabir medicine nahi lo gey to thek kaise ho gey.abhi kuch time pahle hi to tum ne kaha than a k sar pe chout lagi hai so tum bhool gaye abeer k bare mein to iss se pahle k tum apney friends ko bhi bholna shuru kar do I think tumhe medicine le leni chaheye.

Cabir with open mouth and wide eyes listen this taunt and others widely smile on this.

Mukti to Navya: Good Job Navya . I am impressed tu ne Cabir ko chup kara diya ... Hahahaha ... Guys Shakal dekho zara is ki.

Cabir replied in an irritated voice : Aisa kuch nahi hai Samjhi.

Mukti: Ya ! Right.

Nandini s eyes suddenly stopped on aliya and Dhruv and she saw Aliya's head was on Dhruv's Shoulder and they were holding each other hands together romantically. Nandini nudged Manik and pointed towards them.

Manik saw them and then asked Nandini about them and she nodded in yes. Cabir also saw this Change and He in his teasing tune start a song

Kuch to Hoa hai

Kuch ho gya hai

Do Chaar din se

Lagta hai aise

Cabir asked Dhruv and Aliya : Kyo Dhruv! Kuch hoa hai kya ? Navya gave a slap on Cabir's hand for this question

Cabir: Ky yaar mar kyo rahe ho poch hi to raha hoon . Jab hum story se out hoe the to scene different tha aura b Different lag raha hai bus isi liye poch raha hoon chakar kya hai mere dost.

Dhruv Stand from his seat and also made aliya stand from hersand said while holding her hand : Chakar yeh hai guys k merey aur aliya k beech sub kuch sortout ho gya hai and now we are Together.

Manik on listening this became excited and said: Really OMG buddy I am really Happy for you both and he hugged both Dhruv and Aliya. Cabir also hugged both of them and congratulate them.

After that other members congratutaled them and then Mukti said to Aliya: Not fair yaar ! Tum logon ne mujhe bhi nahi bataya . kya Mujhe apna friend nahi samajhte tum log.

Aliya and Dhruv: Aisa nahi hai Mukti yeh sub kuch sort out kuch din pahle hi hoa aur os k baad aisa koi correct situation hi nahi mili jis mein hum tumhe bata sakte.

Mukti : Ok never Mind... I am really very happy for u Aliya and hugged both of them.

Aryamaan : Guys yeh to double celebration banti hai. So kya khyal hai kaise celebrate karna hai.

Cabir with long face: Jaise celebrate karne tha waise to kar nahi sakte so tum log socho kya karna hai.

Nandini: Guys tum log singers ho to song k bina celebrate kaise karo gey. Chalo dhruv koi Acha sa song sunao apni Aliya k liye.

Manik: hmmm sound Interesting.

Dhruv with shy face: Ok

Cabir with cute funny expression : Haye re mere sharmile dost.

Manik asked servant to bring guitar from music room.

All others sat on their seats and dhruv sat with aliya and start his song.

Raaton ko apni palkon se
Khwaab sajaane do (khwaab sajane do)

Dhruv Hold Aliya's hand and kissed it

Phir khaabon ko aankhon se
Neend churaane do...


Khaamoshiyan rakhti hain

(Cabir and Navya looked at each other on these lines)

Apni bhi ek zubaan
Khamoshi ko chupke se sab keh jaane do



Kuch to hua hai (ye kya hua)
Jo na pataa hai (ye jo hua)
Kuch toh hua hai (samjho kuch samjho na..)


Jo kadam kadam chalun

( Manik Intertwined his fingers with Nandini and rested his head on her shoulder)



Tujhe hi tay karun main
Saansein bankar tujhe odh lun
Tu khayaal sa mila hai
Jisko gin sakun main
Aadaton mein tujhe jod lun

Tujhse roshan raatein saari
Tujhpe hi khatam baatein saari
Khaamoshiyan rakhti hain
Apni bhi ek zubaan
Khamoshi ko chupke se sab keh jaane do
Kuch toh hua hai (ye kya hua)
Jo na pataa hai (ye jo hua)
Kuch toh hua hai (samjho kuch samjho na..)

Tujhe ek baar pyaar se jo chhu sakun main
Waqt ko phir wahin rok doon
Phir dil machal ke gar hadon ko bhool jaaye
Dhadkano ka safar chhod doon

Tune di hai saari khushiyan
Tu hai toh hai meri duniya
Khaamoshiyan rakhti hain
Apni bhi ek zubaan
Khamoshi ko chupke se sab keh jaane do
Kuch toh huaa hai (ye kya hua)
Jo na pataa hai (ye jo hua)
Kuch toh hua hai (samjho kuch samjho na..)

All came out from their La La Land when song finished . All clapped for Dhruv . At the same time Mr Malhotra entered and said: Nice song ... Mujhe nahi pata tha k tum sub log itna acha ga lete ho.

All thanked Mr Malhotra for this appreciation and manic then asked :Dad kya hoa app PS gaye the na Commissioner se milne.

Mr Malhotra with love patted on Manik's Cheek and said: Son everthing is under control tum tension nahi lo.

Cabir: Uncle baqi sub to thek hai but kya hum kal college ja sakte haan

Mr Malhotra: Haan haan kyo nahi tum log jab chahe college ja sakte ho.


ALL: O that's great.


Mukti: Phir kal sub college chalte haan aur Kafi time k baad hamara full gang ho ga .Bht Maza aye ga.


Cabir while thinking some thing: ya right Maza to kal bht aye ga.Hamein bhi aur kisi aur ko bhi.


Mr Malhotra after listening this understands that kal k liye cabir ne kuch naughty plan kiya hai and smile on this.


Here Nandini received a call from Chachi who asked her when will she return home and she replied after some time.


After the call she said to all: I think mujhe abhi chalna chaheye.


Manik: kya! Tum ajj yahan hum sub k sath nahi ruk rahe.


Nandini: Nahi Manik! Actually Mady k music therapy ki wajha se Rishab ne abhi bolna start kiya hai aur main nahi chahti o ski therapy me koi bhi rukawat ho so abhi main chalti hoon Rishab intzar kar raha hoga.


Manik : Ok Chalo main tumhe drop kar deta hoon.


Nandini: Nahi Manik tum apney Friends k sath time spend karo mujhe Aryamaan drop kar de ga.


Manik : No way! Tum ne kal bhi aisa hi kiya tha


Mukti : Kalb hi matlab? Nandini tumhe kal se Manik k bare me pata tha?


Nandini: haan aur ajj jo kuch bhi hoa wo sub tum logon ko surprise dene k liye tha


Cabir :Are bus karo yaar (to mukti) yaar tu 1 din me kitni inquiry kare g .(and now to manik) Aur tum Romeo Juliet kuch to sharam karo yaar hum sub k sath sath uncle bhi yahan hi haan.


Manik: Haan tu ! Hum ne aisa kya kiya?


Cabir: Acha abhi kuch nahi kiya to tu pahle kar le main phir Dabara se tujhe yeh sub bol doon ga.


Manik: What


Mukti: Chup karo tum dono. Haan to nandini tum jane ka kah rahe thi na.

Nandini:haan aur Aryaman mujhe Drop kar de ga.


Aryaman: Ok


Manik: No way tumhe main drop karon ga.


Cabir: Kya yaar Manik tu agar Nandini ko Drop karne jae ga to tujhe wahan se wapis lane k liye bhi kisi ko bhejna pare ga so better hai ajj Aryaman ko hi drop karne de. Tu kal se apni is duty pe wapis a jana.


All others smile on this and Manik made a cute puppy face and said: Ok and he then turned towards Cabir and said tujhe to main dekh loon ga.


Cabir : haan haan dekh lena ajj raat main yahan hi hoon.


Nandini and aryaman bid bye to everyone and leave from there.After this Mr Malhotra also leave for his room.


Navya to Mukti: Mukti hamein bhi chalna chaheye.


Mukti: Navya No na ajj raat yahan hi ruk jate haan na Manik k pass.


Navya: Mukti ! main yahan kaise aur phir abeer bhi to hai.


Manik: Navya ! Mukti is right sub ruk rahe haan to tum bhi ruk jao aura beer ko koi problem nahi ho gi. Tum mujhe sirf 30 mints ka time do aur phir dekho.


Cabir: Ja Bacha ! hum ne tujhe yeh time diya


Navya Slapped on cabir's shoulder for this.


After 20 mint Manik came back and said: Chalo Navya tumhe kuch dikhana hai.


Navya and all others came with Manik . He opened the door of 1 room and all entered with him and saw the Room of a Kid




Navya's eyes are full of tears on seeing this much love for abeer. Mukti hugged her and remove her tears.Manik turned towards Navya and said ab se jab bhi tum yahan Ao gin a to yeh Abeer ka room ho ga. Now Manik saw tears in Navya's eyes and asked: Arey kya hoa ... Pasand nahi aya kya.


Mukti while hugging navya said : nahi Manik aisi baat nahi hai.Navya ko yeh room bht pasand aya bus itni care and love abeer k liye dekh k Navya emotional ho gayi hai.


Manik: Arey iss mein rone ki kya baat hai. Abeer yeh care ,yeh love deserve karta hai yaar. Wo Hamare group mein 1st Kid hai to yeh love and care to kuch bhi nahi ... Agey Agey dekho ose kitna love milta hai.


Navya thanked Manik for this room and for this arrangement . Manik side hugged her and said : Its Ok.


Remaining Night Full gang enjoyed their time with Chatting , taunting and teasing eachother and in all this they also spend their time with Abeer.

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Edited by cute-aly - 9 years ago
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mere childhood pics k saath u found my toys also...
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Originally posted by: paarsaa

mere childhood pics k saath u found my toys also...



Tum to ab bari ho gayi ho to tum ne to in se khelna nahi so isi liye wo toys abeer k liye a gaye haan
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow update...
Really luved it...
Harshad ne muh kohl dia wow...
Ab nyonika ka Kay hoga???
Thnx for pm...
Update soon...
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Originally posted by: cute-aly



Tum to ab bari ho gayi ho to tum ne to in se khelna nahi so isi liye wo toys abeer k liye a gaye haan


kisne kaha mai badi ho gayi?
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing update di..
Ab jaldi se nyo ka part end karo...
Cont soon..

LOVE,
AAROHI...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update Loved it.👏👏
Cabirs taunts will never stop. Cute gesture of manik for abeer. Waiting for the next part to see the reaction of nyonika on seeing manik and Cabir. Continue soon😊

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