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HEY GUYZZ..
I m new here ..i also want to write sonething on our akdha
so here i m
i will update the cs only if i get 15 likes
ket me tell you the concept of my story
one incident that changes the life of jodha jalal
it is based on 21st centuryđ
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CREDIT GOES TO SHAGUN
SHAGUN LOVE UHH BABU
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CHARACTER SKETCH
JALAL KHAN-A LOVING N CARING HUSBAND..LOVE HIS WIFE JO ALOT...BUSINESSMAN OF THE YEAR..VERY HANDSOME..GIRLS CAN DIE FOR HIM..ONE INCIDENT CHANGES HIS N JODHA'S LIFE..OWNS KHAN COMPANY
JODHA KHAN/SINGF-A CARING WIFELOVE HIS HUSBAND ALOT..BUSINESSWOMAN OF THE YEAR..VERY BEAUTIFUL..ONE INCIDENT CHANGES HER AND JALAL' LIFE
OWNS SINGH COMPANY
HAMIDA BANO-LOVE HIS SON BUT IS A TRUE MUSLIM..DON' LIKE HINDU
BHARMAL SINGH-LOVES JODHA BUT THINK JALAL IS A CASNOVA
MAINAWATI SINGH-LOVE JODHA AND HER HUSBAND..KNOWS THAT JALAL IS RIGHT FOR HER DAUGHTER BUT CAN'T GO AGAINST HER HUSBAND
RUQAIYA SULATAN-VILLAIN OF THE STORY LOVES JALAL'S MONEY N POWER
JODHA AND JALAL'S FRIEND
BAKSHI-ADI PAIR
SALIMA -ABDUL PAIR
MOTI-MAAN PAIR
JODHA AUR JALAL NE BHAAG KR SHAAD KI THI
THIS CS IS ALSO A GIFT TO JANI FOR TURNING INTO A DAZZLER
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INDEX
prologue-pg 8
CHAPTER 1 - PG 11
IMPORTANT NOTE-PG 13
CHAPTER 2 - 13
CHAPTER 3 - 17
CHAPTER 4 - 20
CHAPTER 5 -1
CHAPTER 6 - 52
CHAPTER 7-61
CHAPTER 8-77
Hey guys ...sry for the late update...m not leaving the forum abhi main yhi rhungi aap sab ka sar khaane k lite
N thanx to all who had commented n liked the previous chapter
Love uhh
Uhh all r my family now
CHAPTER-5
Morning
6:00am
Both joja woke up with new hopes in there hearts...
Bharmal n maina's room
Bharmal's phone was ringing
After sometime he picked up the phone
Bharmal- hello!!...what?????...OK...OK...
Maina-what happened Ji
Bharmal-...V-8 r coming
Maina-
Bharmal glared at maina
Bharmal-why r uhh smiling ...uhh know na with how much difficulty I send them to USA
MAINA-but ...
Bharmal- enough maina...not a single word...why don't you believe he is a Casanova
MAINA-but jodha...
Bharmal-no more discussion maina
Maina thinks-do whatever uhh want to do but this time kanha is with my jodha
Jodha's room
Jodha is excited as she will now able to meet her honey
She quickly takes shower and decided to wear a green one piece
She then wore her dress n was about to tie her hairs in a ponytail when suddenly she remembered something
FLASHBACK
Joja have to go for a party
Ja is ready n is waiting for Jo
Ja-how much time will uhh take baccha
Jo-bus honey I have wore the dress ...making my hairs ...uhh can come
Ja-ok baccha
Ja come inside the room n gets lost in his wife's beauty...
She was looking like an angel in green one piece
Jo was about to tie her hairs in a ponytail when jalal stopped her
Jo- what happened honey
Ja- I like your open hairs so don't tie them Baby
Jo-ok
Then jalal was not able to control himself so he he kissed jodha on her lips
First it was sweet but later they start to kiss each other passionately
Jalal entered his tounge inside her mouth n started playing with her tounge
They kissed almost for 10 minutes
They broke the kiss n saw desire in each other eyes
Ja-can we cancel going to the party
Jo-ok
N then they make love whole night
FLASHBACK ENDS
Jo then went downstairs n had her breakfast n left for office
N jalal also gets ready n leave for office
Jo entered the office n went straight to jalal's cabin
Jalal's cabin
Jo entered n both joja gets lost in each other
Ja-how r uhh baby
Jo -m fine n uhh honey
Ja -m also...uhh know. V-8 r coming
Jo -wow
Ja-i called them as they will help in our plan
Jo-ok
Ja-so first step of our plan is today...ready
Jo-yup
Then they lightly kissed each other left to execute there plan
Jo convince her parents to go along with her to the malll n same with jalal
Mall...
Both the families were roaming in the mall n suddenly they come face to face
Bharmal-uhhh
Hamida-uhhh
Let's leave beta said bharmal n hamida
Jo-don't worry papa I know everything n now I know that he is a Casanova
Ja-ammi I also know everything now n this hindu girl is full of attitude
Jo-uhh idiot
Ja-uhh miss attitude
Jo - I hate uhh
Ja- I also hate uhh
Then they leave n gave each other flying kiss n this get unnoticed by there parents
Precap- V- 8 entry
Tomatoes n onions are allowed
Cricket
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