ASYA OS : IT'S NOT THE END

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Posted: 10 years ago
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ASYA OS: IT'S NOT THE END


Hey lovely quboolians, hope you're doing great...😊

Well, no one knows me over here...i know that...😭😭

So let's introduce myself...

I'm Pratiti...😃

I'm a die hard asyaholic!!!!😳😳

I was so addicted to qubool hai...😕😆

So addicted to mr.khan, zoya's shayaris, theri nok jhoks!!!!...😆

Her famous dialogue, allah miyan what's wrong with you mr.Khan? Still reverberates in my ears...😆😳

I so miss asya!!!!

In fact i stopped watching qubool hai when KSG left the show...😭😭

I still did not manage to find a show which could replace the void asya's absence created in my life!!!!!😭

Well I'm talking like a heart broken laila!!!! Lol...

Anyways just a few days back i visited the forum and my goodness...

I found that you people are still keeping alive the asya memories!!!!😉😊

I felt sooo nostalgic!!!!

I read many stories at a go...

This forum is really gifted with talented writers... sadie, ankie, to name a few...👏

So i decided to hop in amd make new friends!!!!1😊

So a big hello to everyone...

This is a little os on asya...

To mark my entry in the forum...

I really do hope you guys like it...

Lemme know, please...* puppy face*...😳😳😳


Before reading...

Just imagine KSG is playing d role of asad...




Zoya lay on the floor... bleeding out fast...her abdomen hurt badly...tanveer had stabbed her thrice...

Beside her lay asad, wincing and trying hard to get up...

It's in vain...zoya shed a few silent tears...

How she wished she could just take away all of asad's pain...

It's better to die than to watch him wince helplessly...


He's hurting himself more by trying to move...

She knew why was he trying...he would not give up until there's even an ounce of strength left in him...

It's for her...

She knew he is trying...blocking out his common sense, he's trying to undo everything that just happened...

As if he wants to stop the major bleeding by merely his love...

He cared little about his own wounds...


Asad slumped back on the floor...a helpless groan escaped his lips... he is unable to even lift himself up, how is he supposed to fetch zoya to a hospital?

The other alternative lingered on his mind and he looked towards zoya... life...his life...

People say it the wrong way...

In moments before the end, you don't remember the good moments...

Asad just thought that she deserved better...

A profound guilt overcame him...

It's all his fault...had she not been married with him, she would have lived many more years...

His so called bff tannu did this to her...

He owed her so much...

A new life filled with happiness...two beautiful daughters...

Zoya saved his soul in every way possible...

ANd he, always failed her...

He tried once more...but slumped back again...

This time tears of despair ran through his cheeks...


Shaking his head, he looked towards zoya...her eyes...

How will he face them??

She called him jahapanah six packs???

And there he laid, bleeding out and crying like a helpless child whose favourite toy is broken...


Her eyes...they were calm...serene and pure...

Asad had expected to find accusations in them...

But they were full of love...

A lone tear escaped her eyes...

What is he thinking...it's high time he accepted the reality...

I'm dying...

It pains me to think but he's dying as well...

I look...my blood and his blood has got mixed in this floor...

I know my dreams of a beautiful future with him lay shattered...lay bleeding...

But i need to be strong right now...for my jahapanah...

The last few moments should not be full of despair...

It should be full of love...

We need to show the world, death can't just separate us...

Our hearts may cease to beat...

But it will always bear the name of each other...

Asad just surrender to fate...

Let death overcome us...but let not death overcome our love...

These last fe moments are priceless...let's get immersed in us...

Let death do it's work...

We'll do ours...love...


Zoya stirred and reached for asad's hand...

Asad understood and dragged his body forward...

Their hand touched...

Even today something happened in asad's heart when he touched her...

Even today zoya got butterflies in her stomach...

It's the same...it always was...


Unspoken words coursed through their eyes...


I'm sorry zoya...


Don't asad...it's not your fault...


I can't...i can't save you, damn it...


You always did that asad...you always save me...


Not this time...you're dying...


No asad...we're dying...


I'm so helpless...


Don't be...forget everything asad...forget that we are stabbed...forget we're bleeding...just imagine we're lying under a sky full of stars...and a deep sleep is about to overcome us both...


I don't wanna loose you...


You won't, i swear... we're about to dream asad...We'll be together in the dream... forever...wherever we'll go after the sleep, we'll always be together...ours an immortal love story...we're dying together...We'll always be together...


What will we dream, zpya?


A beautiful cottage by a lake...you are standing there...in a black tuxedo...I'm coming towards you in a white gown...

There's moonlight flooding us...you look stunning...


And you gorgeous as usual...


We'll dance together... on my favorite song...


Would you cry, if you saw me crying, would you save my soul Tonight? I could be your hero baby, i could kiss away the pai., i'll stand by you forever, you can take my breath away... Enrique Iglesias...your all time favourite...


It's so wonderful asad...


Till death do us part...


No, not even death can part us...kiski itni majal jo zoya ko asad se alag kare??? Allah miyan, what's wrong with you? How can you even think of partting??


Zoya, i can't wait to live the dream...


We need to sleep first, jaan...


I'm already sleepy...

Me too...


Love you zoya,


Love you more, asad...


It's not the end if you're with me,

It's just a new start,

You need to see...

God told our hearts to beat...

For each other, with love replete...

We'll be together always...

I swear, if i know this,

Can embrace death itself with peace...

So, let's just sleep once more,

With a peace unmatched...

I know, we'll dream together...

A sweet and warm one...

Let your warmth overcome the cold...

I know,

There's a future awaiting "US"

Cause, There's no tomorrow without you,

So let's just sleep once more...

Cause i know...

It's not the end if you're with me...



so, that's it guys...read it and let me know how has it turned out...leave loves and comments guys...this is my first time over here...


Love,

PRATITI...😉






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Posted: 10 years ago
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Firstly, Pratiti welcome to the forum..
Yes AsYa will always live forever in the hearts of the fans.. Seldom I have seen a couple as AsYa...

This is your first story here and OMG it is just awesome..
I could really imagine the whole scene playing in front of me..

I wish this was shown in the serial.. AsYa feelings and the pain they felt looking at each other dying.. You just captured the emotions beautifully..

I literally had goosebumps reading this... I can't believe this is your first here.. You should have been here long back.. Now I really can't wait to read all your other works.. I am sure they will just as beautiful..

Great work.. And I look forward to reading more from you!


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Avie

Firstly, Pratiti welcome to the forum..

Yes AsYa will always live forever in the hearts of the fans.. Seldom I have seen a couple as AsYa...

This is your first story here and OMG it is just awesome..
I could really imagine the whole scene playing in front of me..

I wish this was shown in the serial.. AsYa feelings and the pain they felt looking at each other dying.. You just captured the emotions beautifully..

I literally had goosebumps reading this... I can't believe this is your first here.. You should have been here long back.. Now I really can't wait to read all your other works.. I am sure they will just as beautiful..

Great work.. And I look forward to reading more from you!


thanks a lot dear for the warm welcome...
I'm so glad you liked it...
I've been writing on reporters and IKRS forum...
This is my fi asya os...
I'll write more surely...
Thanks again...😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Such a lovely OS ... So beautiful ... amazing ...
Very beautifully written ...
Loved it ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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first of all welcome to the forum pratiti...
enjoy your time here...
coming to the os..
it was very nice..
you beautifully described asya's last moments..
death through dreamzzz...together alwayzzz...wow...
loved the poem that u written at last also..
try to write more..
there r somany wonderful writers here..try to read their stories also.. enjoy your time in the forum :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Amina...

Such a lovely OS ... So beautiful ... amazing ...
Very beautifully written ...
Loved it ...

Thanks amina...😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome OS Pratiti
So beautifully written..loved it !!!
I think I have read your other work on the other forum...
Hope you come up with another AsYa story soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: binuuu

first of all welcome to the forum pratiti...
enjoy your time here...
coming to the os..
it was very nice..
you beautifully described asya's last moments..
death through dreamzzz...together alwayzzz...wow...
loved the poem that u written at last also..
try to write more..
there r somany wonderful writers here..try to read their stories also.. enjoy your time in the forum :)


Thanks a lot binu for the warm welcome...
I'm happy that you loved my endeavor...
Yeah definitely i will write more, cause you guys inspired me a lot..
I'm reading new stories here too...
Thanks agagain...
Love,
Pratiti😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Prinky-

Awesome OS Pratiti

So beautifully written..loved it !!!
I think I have read your other work on the other forum...
Hope you come up with another AsYa story soon...

Thanks a ton prinky...
Really? You've read my other works??? I'm flattered...😳
Yeah I'll definitely write soon...
Thanks again dear...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sasir

Amazing..
Very emotional

Thanks sasir...😊

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