ArHi FF: Revealed #7 | Link to Thread 8 Pg 1 - Page 63

Originally posted by: cherrybloom1

Were you talking about this, G? 😆

Btw, has anyone noticed how all the stories written by Jigs are named something "inappropriate"?

If my mother gets to know that I've read something called "Stripped" and am reading "Revealed", I'll probably never be able to convince her what the stories REALLY ARE about 😆

P.s. Sorry, I'm really bad at creativity skills. 😕 It took me an hour to get this thing ready

Originally posted by: albmum14

Yes, that's perfect!!! 👏

Thank you!

Is it an edible badge? Made of chocolate? 😛😉

I see that you are ready for the update. Good luck!😃😆

@Bhavi: I thought you were talking about hiring the helicopter and taking a day off work...😕 lost in translation...😲😊

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Jigs, I'm going to borrow your words here as I struggle to express my feelings about just how much I loved this chapter, "Where does one even begin?"

You have shown them pick up each piece of their splintered heart and offer it back to the other for safe keeping. Because for them, that's the only place for it to be, hamesha. And the way you have shown them reach this place is what's so beautiful.

Arnav needed to say the words, Khushi needed to hear them but when they came, her care for him still wanted him to not go through the pain. That was immensely moving. There was so much he'd kept buried in himself, in his inability and unwillingness to voice his feelings. We make decisions for others thinking we're shielding them, little realising the damage we're doing. A salutary lesson for all of us.

One of the most uplifting revelations for me was seeing this transformed Khushi. As you said, his "vixen" was back. The one we were all waiting to see. The way you showed her reconnecting with her home was just beautiful. The sense of joy and wonder that you feel after that first much awaited shower of the monsoons. When everything feels fresh and new.

This glimpse we had of their easy domesticity brings home just how much was missing in their life. The easy banter, how the dealing with the mundane is also elevated when it's shared with a loved one, the just ... living.

I'm quite sure Shakespeare did not mean this when he said "Love is a many splendored thing" but when you write of their lovemaking, that's all I can think of! It was bone melting, spine tingling, but above all heart stoppingly tender. A true meeting of souls.

Arnav's note left me all teary eyed. So much pure love leaping out of every word. I'm madly in love with their love Jigs.

Lines from an IPK classic song were proved here ...

Hai teri chahat meri zaroorat

Sooni hai tujh bin duniya meri

Naa reh sakoonga main door inse

Hai meri jannat galiya teri

And now waiting for the leap to see what awaits them :)