SaHil OS: Far Too Long - Page 3

Read it again.

A small part of him, that small, insecure part . . . the one that craved a mother's love . . . and had never gotten it. The part of him that craved a father's love . . . and got only pain in return. That part of him just knew that his wife had stayed because she was tied to him, and she was the kind of woman who kept her promises.

The part of him that wanted to be chosen for himself . . . loved freely . . . and made to feel that he was worth the effort . . . that part of him had gotten its deepest desire today. He reached out and grabbed her in a hug, his heart thundering in his chest. He buried his face in her neck, inhaling deeply."

❤️ Ahil is so beautifully written.

Seriously. Can't U give us more.😳

Originally posted by: chicksoup

Read it again.

It is even more beautiful.

"Despite the all-encompassing love he felt for her, and the joy he had discovered in her arms and in their marriage, he knew that she had been forced to marry him. And despite how happy they had become, he always knew that Sanam had no choice when she tied herself to him in marriage.

A small part of him, that small, insecure part . . . the one that craved a mother's love . . . and had never gotten it. The part of him that craved a father's love . . . and got only pain in return. That part of him just knew that his wife had stayed because she was tied to him, and she was the kind of woman who kept her promises.

The part of him that wanted to be chosen for himself . . . loved freely . . . and made to feel that he was worth the effort . . . that part of him had gotten its deepest desire today. He reached out and grabbed her in a hug, his heart thundering in his chest. He buried his face in her neck, inhaling deeply."

❤️ Ahil is so beautifully written.

Seriously. Can't U give us more.😳

This was so beautiful Loved it! The emotions, the situation, intensity, passion and intrigue were all there in perfect measures 👏 Great job! Please write more SaHil stories! I have said this before, I love how u write! Would love to read more pieces by you 😳 Awesome!!

@Pagalpinky - Thank you for commenting on my stories. 😳 I'm glad you enjoyed it.

@sageglower - Thanks! Glad you liked the twist.

@chicksoup - Thank you for commenting again! I'm thinking about a second part, but can't seem to find the right way to begin and can't even envision how I would write it. No promises about writing something else on this, but if I do get the inspiration - I will put it up. That I can promise. 😆

@Junoon-e-SaHil - Thanks! 😳

@Raingoddess - Thank you for all of the compliments! You're giving me a big head (my ego's growing). 😆 But seriously, thanks for taking the time to comment and compliment. It is very encouraging.

This was seriously so beautiful

How did I miss this one?? 😲

I've said it before, but I absolutely love your sense of writing. You can't help but fall in love.. It was such a beautiful ride that it touched my heart so easily. The fact that Jannat fell in love with Aahil without knowing that she actually really did belong to him, was a nice twist.

He wanted to hold on to her and never let go. He groaned softly. He wanted to taste her once more ... to lay her on the nearest flat surface and bury himself inside of her. His body hardened at that enticing thought. He wanted to be a part of Sanam again. He wanted to so badly. He groaned again, the sound that of a man pushed beyond all endurance.

Beautiful words! Could so easily see it before my eyes. 😳

Most gorgeous part of the story was the hug, kiss and the end note. The way he pulled out his wallet to show a picture of her only to let her know.

"My Sanam was always you, Sanam," he whispered softly. "Let me tell you a story."

What a wonderful scene that would have been. The way they would talk and reminisce about past memories.. ❤️

Thank you so much for this heartwarming piece. It was such a honor to read it. 👏🤗

@muskaan17rocks - Thanks! While I know that most people think amnesia stories are cliche, but I love the idea of someone falling in love with the same person again b/c the heart does know. 😳 I guess we're both romantics that way. 😆

@mahwash22 - Thank you! 🤗 For the lovely comments and liking the story. Is it too much to hope that we'll get something like this in the show?

Oh gosh...this was awesone! Even though she didn't get her memory back, she listened to her heart and went with it. She chose Aahil! She thought she's married to Shaad but there was no love or a relationship... So she went to the one she really loved. That's our Sanam, that's how it should've been.

Great work! 👏 looking forward to reading more of your stories!