SaHil OS: Far Too Long - Page 2

its amazinly beautiful..❤️.

'Her lips landed, almost accidentally, against his neck, left bare by the half-unbuttoned shirt. But the kiss they bestowed on that naked skin was by no means an accident. '

This was amazing.. jjust came back to add.

Originally posted by: minnie2308

Now imagine the story he would tell . this spicy Jannat would definitely love that story versus... 'aap gubbarey baant rahi thi'😆

lovely story that would be ... but more interesting would be how Aahil narrates it. I wish I could hear him tell that story

wow...wonderful, wonderful os!

Very nice story! Lovely! Everyone is writing what would happen, and I find everything just as enticing! Brilliant! so novel! That Sanam couldnt remember, but chose Aahil and asked him to accept her as Jannat👏

amazing loved it and what a twist, she came to him as Jannat not Sanam!

Dude, I love you right now for writing this story. Best birthday present I got so far (today is my birthday by the way).

@MysticRiver - Thanks!

@Tunailuvsahil - Thanks! As of right now, it's only an OS.

@simran_singh_24 - Thanks! Check out my signature for the link to a SaHil FF I'm writing.

@minnie2308 - Thanks for the beautiful comments. Appreciate it. As for more parts, it'll be pretty difficult to "speak" Aahil's voice. A second part is probably not in the picture. And, yes, it was the dhaba plot in Bhojpur. He had started building the dhaba Sanam pictured, hoping to surprise her when she came back.

@Junoon-e-Sahil - Thank you! I thought Nickelback's Far Away was apt for this OS.Glad you like the story. I'm happy that it's worth the repeat reading. 😆

@flora212 - Thank you! I hope something like it happens in the show, as well. Although, today's episode kind of scared me.

@chicksoup - Thank you! I did intend this for an OS. Let's see if I get any more inspiration like yesterday's passionate hug and glances. 😉

@SONU2408 - Thank you. As for other parts, no guarantees. Let's see.

@princessaaliya - Thank you!

@najma123 - Thank you. I was wondering yesterday how Aahil would react if she confessed, but it wasn't Sanam. And this OS just came about.

@adventure_gurl - Thanks! Glad you liked the twist. I wanted to Jannat/Sanam to speak up for once and demand what she wanted. We haven't had that in the longest time.

@castlebones - Happy birthday! 😃 Thanks for the compliments. It was really intended as an OS, but let's see what kind of inspiration I get from the show itself.

@noesha - Thanks!

I hope I didn't miss anyone. Thanks for all the appreciation. 🤗 It makes me want to write even more. 😆

Oh that was beautiful
Great job
Thanks!

Hayyeee... so beautiful. ..!!