ONE SHOT-VM ONE LAST TIME

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Posted: 9 years ago
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TWINJ OS.

guys i wrote an OS similar to my vm it goes hand in hand with the vm. i hope you like the OS as well as the vm.
This one was on request from MN and Pilu on O khuda. so guys i hope u like it.
Scroll below for vm link.


They met at a house warming party and the minute they collided into each other,so did their fate, they crashed,sparks flew and they were forever entwined heart,mind and soul.

Unfortunate as it was their love couldn't blossom for long,the families opposed. No one realized that this was not just some crush or a fling. Kunj and twinkle were incomplete with out the other. They tried to meet in secret, their love grew stronger than ever but finally they couldn't hide their love they decided to confront the parents but they failed.

Twinkle was sitting in the gurdwara waiting for kunj to arrive. both of them had arrived at a painful decision. They had yet to say it to the other but both knew what they wanted to say.
She felt a serene aura surround her and she knew her kunj was here She turned around to see him walk towards her.

He entered the gurdwara searching for his reason to live and thats when he saw her, just like that first time he would always be transfixed by her beauty,his feet took him to her on their own,he was too occupied gazing at her.

He was surprised she still had such an effect on him.

He sat beside her,both gazing at the pool in front of them. neither wanted to break the silence because it meant breaking their relation too. finally kunj spoke up.

''Twinkle how long will we delay the truth?''He turned towards her and held her face,he looked into her tear filled eyes and his own filled with pain.
''we have to do this for our families happiness,but promise me one thing you will always stay happy. never loose your smile or the twinkle in your eyes.'' That was when twinkle broke completely,she let go of the control she was holding onto and sobbed into his chest. Like always he was here this time too,comforting her taking her sorrows onto him. The worst part was she saw a future where he wont be there for her.

"Twinkle i have one last request.will you do it?''


''Anything kunj anything for you. tell me."

''I want to spend one last evening with you,the same place where i took you for our first date. Lets repeat history one last time. Will you?'' He held his breath just like that first time while waiting for her answer.

''YES.'' That's all she said and left from there in hopes to escape from the pain it was causing to both of them.Walking on the empty road she realized her life will soon be empty too,devoid of any happiness,devoid of kunj.
She remembered all her moments spent with kunj the happy times and the sad times,how she had flirted with him at the roka function of her friends to make him uncomfortable. She remembered when he had jumped into The pool without knowing how to swim just to save her.
She kept walking lost in her thoughts of kunj when finally evening arrived.

she decided to wear the very same dress kunj had gifted her telling her she was the most beautiful girl for him.

She took in the gazebo setting,looked same like the first time,she was anxious to see him just like that first time but now her heart was filled with dread because when this evening was over they would part ways forever.

they tried to stay normal for the other but could not help when they flashed back to the first date.She tried to cheer him up with her talks but how could a heart smile in joy when it was too heavy with the knowledge that this is the last time they would see their love.
He asked her hand for a dance.

He had promised never to let go.

Today he had to let her go forever.

As they twirled in sync they memorized each other,wanting to prolong and make this moment last forever.
In her eyes he saw the unconditional love for him yet the dread of loosing him shone brightly.
For her he steeled himself.
The time had come to part ways.
Finally they broke out of their reverie.

Her hand slid out from his,he had to clench his hand from holding her again.
''Stay happy kunj. dont miss me.This is good bye''she whispered in his ear and kissed his cheek one last time. He closed his eyes unable to see her going away from him.
that was all she could say before she walked out of the gazebo into the night hoping the darkness of this night would hide her tears. The night was filled with darkness just like their fate but the sky was filled with stars lightening the darkness just a little,just like her memories with kunj which will light her future with some happiness.
"Dusk is just an illusion because the sun is either above the horizon or below it. And that means that day and night are linked in a way that few things are there cannot be one without the other yet they cannot exist at the same time. How would it feel I remember wondering to be always together yet forever apart?"
Nicholas Sparks, The Notebook



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Sherni_Jerry thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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beautiful VM
totally loved it
Nicely written OS too.
1056084 thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#3
Omg sis your VM on my requested song o khuda... soo beautiful. 😳loved it! 😊
Hats off to you sis it was outstanding and mind-blowing... thank-you for making my wish..👏 Totally lost in TwiNjlicious dreamland.

Thanks again for bringing a big smile on my face. 😊😊😃





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Posted: 9 years ago
#4
Sis finally got time to read your OS.
All I can say is - It's One of the beautifully crafted and emotionally touching OS I ever read.

Everything is written in soo much detail.

Enjoyed it. Keep it up.👍🏼
Edited by MNsTrous - 9 years ago
Iansomer1 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ethereal.Surbhi

beautiful VM
totally loved it
Nicely written OS too.


THANX SURBHI. I AM GLAD U LIKED IT.
Pilu05 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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lovely with beautiful VM yaar👏❤️
plz make more VM 😳


Iansomer1 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: MNsTrous

Omg sis your VM on my requested song o khuda... soo beautiful. 😳loved it! 😊
Hats off to you sis it was outstanding and mind-blowing... thank-you for making my wish..👏 Totally lost in TwiNjlicious dreamland.

Thanks again for bringing a big smile on my face. 😊😊😃






THANX BRO. i am glad u liked it i know it didnt have many effects...
thanx for the tareef.
dont thank me bro.
i am glad i could bring a smile on ur face.
so so happy.keep smiling bro
Iansomer1 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thanx chandni i hope the vm was clear to comprehend. picking scenes tat match the os was hell for me.
i am glad u liked it.😃
KhushiLovesZaya thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#9
Wow!!reallly very beautiful!! Hatss off!! Pls do make more
prem_diwani thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#10
beautiful VM absolutely loved it...

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