Dym ff(Ardhika/Nesam) part1 updated

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Part 1:

Neil almost hit the flower pot which was kept near the pillar at centre of living room in search of Radhika.
"Neil beta samaalke",ramu kaka gave a warning note from behind.
"Its ok kaka am all right,kakha chashini kaha Hein?.Apne kahin deka usse".
"Ha,beta kitchen ki aur jathe waqth dekha,shayad wahi milegi radhika beti".
"Teekey kakha I will see her ",he came to kitchen and saw radhika sitting on kitchen slab while munching the pan cakes that his mom made for her."Awwwe ma you know this is Awesome just awesome,Actually my taste buds were dead after tasted that stupid hostel's tasteless food arghh".she groaned out loudly.
"waise,ma I missed you so much especially your pancakes,you should awarded as masterchef of malhothra house".
"Chal pagli, hamesha itna bhag..bhag karthi rehthi hoon,kamse kam khate waqth tho kuch der keliye rest karo".
"Ayye aye captain as you say,radhika saluted mischievously at prerna.
"Waise radhu ,I too missed you so much ab tume kahi aur Jane ki koi jaroorath nahin,Tum hamesa yahi per rahogi ham sabke saath hamesa hamesa keliye".
Radhika smiled at her not understanding what she meaned by this "Mom aap log se Hume koi alag nahin kar saktha.Hamari rishtha itni aasani se thod ne waali nahin hein.U know ma I will even marry neil only for your pancakes".
when she uttered this Neil body go still.He almost gulped at what he heared.
"oiyyye dp darwaza pe kadi hokar kya sapna dek raha hoon.come here" her chirpy voice broked his stance.
He went near her and asked"chashini how was the journey?? Are you comportable with the arrangements na??".
"No, I hate it kya zaroorath thi ramu khaka ko bajneki.Mein kya bacchi lagrahi hoon kya ?? I am 21 years old and I can take care of my self "
"Haan, Patha Hein but I am worried for them whoever crossed in your way.Becharo ki haalath tho bahuth karab hogayi hoga na Yesi choti devil ki samne akar, tho issiliye send kiya unko".
"You you!!! Kaccha aam ki thukada , Thu muje devil kaha?,Teekey aaja dikathi hoon how their state will turn if any one messed with radhika mishra".with that she ran behind him.
Prerna's heart actually swelled in happiness."Bagwan bus inki Jodi yesa hi bani rahe.Kisski nazar na lage inki upar".
"Neil hoi dimple boy batha tho sahi hum ja kaha rahe Hein? " Radhika squealed in his ear as he ride his bike . "Wait chashini tume sab patha challega thodi der mein".
They were at restaurant.It was almost full of its customers.Neil took radhika to the centre table and ordered there favourite chicken kabab.She noticed Neils forehead coverd with frowns .He look so restless so she hold his hand and asked " what happen Neil? ,Is there anything troubleing you!?,"
Neil nodded his head negatively then sighed" No dear there is nothing like that" .He answered her while glancing his watch.
"Neil is any think interesting in your watch ?,why are you stare it in a every minute interval".
She gave a confused look then said"Gosh , Are you in love with your watch??? I can't believe this Neil !!!you totaly disappointed me",said as she clutched her heart.
"Pagli ,pagla gayi ho kya .kuch bhi bolthi hoon tu", he cried in annoyance.Then suddenly he got beep sound from his mobile and let out a sigh of relife .
Arjun was highly irritated with Neil.Neil was his chuddy buddy they know each other from their kG days.He took a vow in heart that he will support Neil in every problem infact every problem need to face him before it reach Neil .But today he was not at all willing to face this problem named Radhika Mishra.
She is quite expert in applying mirchi on his nerves.She never failed to prove him that how much irritating she is and always get under his skin.Everything was well with him all this 4years but now she was here.He know this is end for sure.Hope I get save this time he muttered under his breath. He spotted the duo at the centre table.He can see how tensed Neil was.Hope everything goes well then all can live happily so for this he need to face this Miss.Irritating Mishra.
He can only saw her back which was facing him.With a steady steps he reached there. Neil smiled like he is going to pose for close up ad.Arjun chuckled at the thought.
"Arjun morning hero,Have a seat".
Radhika almost narrow his eyes to neil" Neil I remember you did not mention about him joining us here".
Arjun know owner of this voice he slowly turned her side.Oh what was that is this eyes? It resembles like a black diamond. Such a expressive eyes .Ummm god will always do good things with bad persons.Never mind!!! .
"umm,As much as i remember it is public property you know? No one need to take permission to show his presence here .Anyone can appear any time".
How rude!!! he is not at all changed.But no actually he changed a lot.Quite handsome and Sharp.Who cares!!!
"Waise, Mister Did I ask you anything you can appear anywhere you want.But poking your nose in middle of others convo is called badmanners".
Here you go the rajdhanni express starts.How dare she question about my manners.His nostrils flared at the thought.
"See miss,I know what is manners? You don't need to threw your lectures on me.Waise you know adhiti devo bawa means treat your guest respectively.This is basic manners.You not even know what manners is but see your questioning me about my manners; How pathetic!!".
Bullshit ,Respect my foot!! How dare he question me"Mister whatever respect has to be given not to be asken".
"See miss.Am so smart..."
Neil head turned side by side as Arjun and radhika threw daggers at each other.Ho!!! no this needed to be stopped or else this place will witness aftermath of the tornado.
"Oh,oh hold on guys,As much as I remember it's Restaurant not warzone. Hold your tongues".
"Chashini ,I want to spend my quality of time with my buddies,I don't think this is wrong ".
Though their oral war stopped their eyes continue to threw daggers at each other.
"Neil,Am sorry I was quite over reacted,Sorry MR.Mehra".
Oh she said sorry this is today Flash news tigress bent down in word war.He almost virtually self patted his shoulders.Great going Arjun.
He nodded his head in acceptance. He felt someone kicked his foot under the table what is this !!!Radhika??? No way.He slightly bend to see under the table and he saw Neil kicked him once again.
He looked back Neil who was trying to say something.Oh he almost forget why was he came here at first.All thanks to the lady who sit opposite to him.
"Radhika ,Arjun just a minute guys".
"Neil,where are you going??".
"Chashini samja karo yaar" .Neil showed little finger and hurried towards the rest room.
Radhika almost giggled to see him.
Wow,Its sounds so great why she never giggles before him.There his spell broken as he hear her stern voice.
"Mr.Mehra don't think I bent down before you.Actually Neil was so worried .So I try to just make him feel good ok.I take back my sorry".
Here you go, Arjun will you ever think to face her again?? He questioned himself . lol who want to rot in hell .He almost rolled his eyes at a thought.
Radhika's keen eyes noted his.Why mister hot tongue is so quite.Something is fishy!!!
"What's cooking man?"
"Radhika tum me neil pasand Hein?"
"What!!! yeah off course Neil muje bahuth pasand Hein.Infact i love Neil and who knows this better than you? Did you forget the scar in your head ?".
By hearing scar Arjun nostrils flared in anger .[Actually he got this scar on his forehead when he playing Cricket with Neil.Radhika was hated to see this so she throw the ball stright on his face]. how dare she? Arjun focus on your duty he muttered himself then asked" Are you in Love?"
"whattt !!Love????" Radhika almost squealed in high pitched voice
Arjun can see how nervous she was by hearing love . He smirked at her. so Arjun tigress got nervous because of you for second time.well done Arjun.
Radhika noted the smirk which is somewhat seems hot."Aap se matlab ??? Me kisse se bhi pyaar karu aap ko kya?".
Oh god this Arjun seedha Baath kyu nahin kartha said Neil as he hide behind the pillar .
Arjun caught neil accused glance and asked in one breath "Radhika Are you in love with Neil?".
Radhika body stiffed in response She stood at her place "what the hell?!!!! Are you mad?" .
Arjun never expected her reaction to be like this.Well he turned his head in left and right almost every person in restaurant watching there table.God this going to be hard.
"How can you even think us like this. Don't you dare to doubt our relationship.What we share is more than to fit in a word its more than love.We are friends in real. I think you needed too consult a doctor as you became mad " .
Arjun leaned on her side."Radhika behave please don't create a drama here,Act like a adult arjun said this in very low voice.Radhika glanced the entire crowd and noticed they got everyone attention.so she took back her seat .
Arjun decided this is the time to make a thinks clear,He cleared his throat in air"Look Radhika ,I know what you mean and also know how attached you two were but what am asking is very important because its involved with three lifes.So please answer my questions honestly.
Arjun watched as curiosity catched the phool of her eyes.He was sure he have her attention so he begun to speak " Are you in love with Neil?"
"Hell,no!".
"well,Do you want to marry him??"
"By the way,I know you are stupid,But never thought this much ".
"Excuse me??What you mean??? Miss.Not so stupid".
"Well at first I love Neil as a friend as my mentor,as my wellwisher,as my buddy but love it has entire diffrent prospects I don't think we will fit in that category.Infact i never love anyone and for your second question if I never loved Neil then how will I marry him. Infact I never think about marriage i want to prove myself before I becomes someone else's Hope this will answer your questions".
Arjun admired her ,Was she the girl who he knows last 8years.He know how she always portraits how crazy she is but this woman who stood before him emits such a confidence and shrewdness which is his new found knowledge.To be honest he is quite impressed with this new side of her.
Radhika stood at her place to leave as she not getting any reply from him. suddenly she felt a pair of arms engulfed her from side.
Neil was more than happy to hear this.He instantly run towards her and throw his arms on her"Chashini love you dear .I know this will be your answer" said neil as he kissed her cheeks.
"Neil please let me go ,I can't able to breath" Radhika voice almost soaked.
Neil let go of her.And flashed his famous smile which complementing his dimple and muttered sorry.Then turned and hugged Arjun."Arjun my buddy.You once again proved your my bestie".
Arjun smiled at his crazy friend and uttered anything for you Neil.
"Ahem ,Ahem if you finished showcaseing your bromance then Will anyone explain me.Why such a scene took place before few mintues".
"Neil ,Why I feel something burning to see us like this . Are we jealous???" Arjun said while smirking.
"Jealous my foot, Neil I think I owned some answer in this part.Please spit it out what is this?".
"chashini, actually I over heared ma and papa ki last night convo. They discussed about to make us couple so that they can keep you always with us.I was in love with my colleague in Past one year but we never proposed actually we aware of our feelings.I know her from last 4years but never know how i fell for her.I aware what was in papas mind about us.After pupa and bua's dead papa always indented to make you a bahu of our house.I aware of this very well. so i never want to give false hopes to her.Actually nothing is important for me more than you".
"Neil you are head of the all stupids oh god ,You are in love??? I cannot believe this!! Being in love is one of greatest thing in the world am so happy for you ! But you please never talk to me again".
Radhika begin to move Neil and Arjun rooted their spot "Now what was her problem man???"Arjun said in exasperation.
"Arjun I think chashini is mad at me ,God wooing her is very hard task ,you come I will handle this ", Neil dragged Arjun with him towards the exist.
Radhika stood as she leaning against Neils bike and stamping her foot.
"chashini! " Neil called out her as he holding her wrist while Arjun stood beside him.
"Not a word neil.I was actually mad at you please move from here".
"please yaar ,Actually I know ,I hide it from you but I don't want to take any decision in haste. first I want to be sure what's in your mind? , Because no one is important for me more than you not even her . I don't want to lost what we shared already that's why I asked Arjun to help me in this.Actually nothing is important for me more than you ".
"So if I said yes to Arjun's queries then will you sacrifice your love for me??".
Neil nodded in response "yes,I will".
Radhika is stunned to hear him.she throw her arms to engulfed him and utter "gosh ,Neil I love you".Neil smiled in response and hugged her back.Arjun smiled to see the duo and felt Neil hold his hand .Arjun nodded and assured him through blinking his eyes in response.

That's all folks .Actually I have lined up exams this month.So just write this when I got some break.Hope you like it.Actually I am not a good writer 😛.Writing is just a hobby.Ok enough of my blabbers now enjoy reading it.If U enjoyed please leave your comments and likes.Love you dears.


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Posted: 10 years ago
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yeah guys ff is still not named .So its open choice needed your opinions.So pls suggest the name😉.
With love
Raji😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Raji,..Raji,...Raji,...
m the first post,...UNRES ,...😆

Wonderful story starting with Ra-Neil friendship showcasing their strong friendship bond,..

U made arjun to help Neil to knew Radz opinion about him,...Loved it girle,...I thot arjun might b Neil's Boss n so Neil was so tensed but u showed him as his Friend to my surprise,...Loved Ardhika Nokjoke too,...

It ll b perfect portrayal of Friendship btw RaNeilARjun & cute love track of Ardhika,...

As m poor in suggesting titles,..So,I leave that part,...Waiting 4 ur updates & dont 4get to PM me,...

I loved ur story n i want it to b a never ending story too,...

Edited by jey3ram - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Raji..romba nalla iruku..continue the ff..

All the best for ur exams...don't write ardhika story there...

My suggestion for title:Teri Meri dosti/100% friendship(okay this I copied )/colours of life...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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such a beautiful and different concept. amazing update dear. i just loved it. i loved ardhika and neil bonding its so beautiful.
for my side title suggetion "teri meri kahani". or " ye hai yarriyan".
Edited by shreepatil. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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raji...ur FF is so nice...
welcomeback to ardhika land after u finished ur exams 😛

so happy to read ur post...missing u somuch in AT 😕

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: jey3ram

Raji,..Raji,...Raji,...

m the first post,...

RES ,...LOL

Ok I heared ur call.
Ur first now unres it.😡😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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😳 Love you so much guys.Actually overwhelmed with all ur love.Thanks for the likes .

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: jey3ram

Raji,..Raji,...Raji,...

m the first post,...UNRES ,...😆

Wonderful story starting with Ra-Neil friendship showcasing their strong friendship bond,..

U made arjun to help Neil to knew Radz opinion about him,...Loved it girle,...I thot arjun might b Neil's Boss n so Neil was so tensed but u showed him as his Friend to my surprise,...Loved Ardhika Nokjoke too,...

It ll b perfect portrayal of Friendship btw RaNeilARjun & cute love track of Ardhika,...

As m poor in suggesting titles,..So,I leave that part,...Waiting 4 ur updates & dont 4get to PM me,...

I loved ur story n i want it to b a never ending story too,...

Thank U renu.I am happy that U liked it😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: -rosel-

Raji..romba nalla iruku..continue the ff..

All the best for ur exams...don't write ardhika story there...

My suggestion for title:Teri Meri dosti/100% friendship(okay this I copied )/colours of life...

romba santhosam ungaluku pidichi erukunu ninaikarapa.
😳 I like name suggestions but still its upto U guys .

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