SwaSan OS - A Beautiful Morning

I'm quite new to this Swargini forum but the amount of passion and zeal that I see in this forum are really awesome.

I was really amazed by the posting done by @Smilelicious yesterday on the bedroom scene between Sanskaar and Swarna...

A thought popped up and I have created a short OS. Nothing fancy but something in tandem with Sanskaar feeling... would appreciate any feedback.

Thank you.

Title : A Beautiful Morning (posted at the bottom)

"It's a new dawn
It's a new day
It's a new life for me
And I'm feeling good"
Leslie Bricusse, The Leslie Bricusse Songbook

He stood blocking the morning sun rays, at the same time admiring the lady who was trying to snuggle into the duvet. Long, soft ebony hair, which always had a fresh earthy smell, was in disarray; lengthy eyelashes curling protectively over her almond shaped eyes, a smile was playing on her bow curved lips. She looked a lovely sight early in the morning.

He is in his room, Sanskaar Maherswari's room but her impression was everywhere, from the bed cover to the toiletries littered on the dressing table, every nook and corner had her impression.

Thinking about her eyes, why do they always pierce his soul? The way she pursues her lips, those lush lips, slightly coated in lip gloss, glistening... here he goes again. He can't stop thinking of her. Hence, the out pouring of his heart when he was in low ebbs yesterday. Everyone thought he had said the words... love you Swara' in drunken state, the truth is his feelings have been killing him the past few weeks. He just didn't realize it until the night he was asked to fill her maang. He wouldn't have filled sindoor on her maang if he didn't love her.

Sanksaar closes his eyes, drinking in the sun rays and at the same time memorizing Swara, her time with him would not be long. She'll soon leave him.

She is facing the wall, her tall, thin frame giving her a fragile look. The room is dark, he can't see much but he knows he needs to hug her. That's the only way he could calm his thudding heart. His heart beats are getting faster, increased pulse rate, he needs her like air, oxygen. She senses him, turns around and smiles. He needs to see her but if he moves towards the lights switch, she'll leave, vanish into thin air. He closes in on her and she moves until she hits the wall. He puts both his hands on the wall effectively baring her escape. She covers her face; he slowly pierces open her fingers, her eyes are revealed. He takes away her hand, they stare at each other. Her mouth is slightly open, as if she is breathing thru her mouth. His warmth surrounds her; his exclusive scent by CK. Sanskaar lifts his hand and touches her temple, trails his fingers slowly down her cheek, tracing the line of her jaw, finally reaching her still open mouth, moving over the outline of her lips. He slowly, ever slowly pushes his finger into her mouth. She bites him. He moans...and gulps down the sound he made...Gosh! he has been having this dream for the past few days, if Swara ever found out that she starred in his dreams, she'll have his head off. Sanskaar shakes out of his sensual haze he is in when he sees Swara is about to fall off from the bed.

Sanksaar rushes to the bedside to stop her fall. He gently holds her. Without opening her eyes, Swara moistens her lips, drawing his attention to her; with her eyes still closed, her mind in her dream world, Swara turns around and reaches out her hand to run her fingers thru the tangle of Sanskaar's ebony hair. She traces his eyebrows, sliding down with butterfly touch towards his chin and at last his lips. It was as if she was memorizing his face. It was too much for Sanskaar's control. Without warning, he pulls her into his arms and shakes her out of her dream world.

Swara opens her eyes and stares at Sanskaar. A blush tinges her cheeks. She averts her eyes and asks him what is he doing?

Sanksaar : You were about to fall down, I was helping you.

Swara : Yeah, I'm not going to die if I fall down.

Saying that she jumps out of the bed and rushes to the washroom, leaving beleaguered looking Sanskaar...

- JM

Very well written dear

A perfect blend of words expressing sanky's thoughts

I loved Sanskaar's POV😳

Thank yo so much for appreciating my jotting down...

Just wanted to get Sanky's thoughts onto a paper...😊

Yes my dear...I used to write in the KK forum... Then I stopped...not because I was not interested, the kidnapping story line in KK was too much for me to handle and somehow I just stopped writing. I still visit the forum but just to read and comment.

Even for Swargini, just joined but watching Sansksaar, I just felt I needed to write down something...

Thank you so much for your appreciation.

Amazingly written dear 👏😳

Do write more 😊