My 2c on the confrontation scene

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inlieu

@inlieu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Sharoan
Awesome post. You have written swara's inner turmoil very beautiful👏👏.

Thank you for the kind words 😃

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inlieu

@inlieu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11
Absolutely loved your detailed analysis. I was nodding vehemently through it all. I've said a lot of the things you did in various posts but not half as well as you did and I love how you took it through each of the elements from both of their perspectives! Brilliantly put and couldn't agree more! 👏

Thanks, it's nice to see that I made some sense and that some of what was in my head reached other Sanskaar and Swara lovers. 😆

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

@ Inlieu, thanks for the 2nd post. Yup, its clearer now and certainly it seems we do agree 😊

On my reading of your first post, I guess I misunderstood that though you registered surprise at Swara's extreme stance (of snapping off the friendship), you had explained it away in the overall context of what Swara was feeling. That's why I said I partially disagreed. 😉

Thanks for the clarification. I do agree completely with you, that though everything else she said was perfectly consistent with her emotional turmoil, confusion, frustration and even anger, that last snippet of dialogue was very---well,---Un-Swara like. The contradictions inherent in that sentence imply a lot of things that is completely not like Swara--as I said (and you also feel), she is too generous a person to withdraw forgiveness once given; or to seek to bind a person to a mission by a sense of guilt. This is why, it really makes no sense for her to have spoken that last sentence, of snapping all friendship, but still expecting Sanskaar's commitment to "their" mission!!

I must confess I tend to get nitpicky when such out of place dialogues come through, but I guess that is a side effect of being so heavily emotionally invested in a pairing. I've got a few people on my thread asking me (rhetorically, I presume), if I expected Swara to immediately acknowledge her feelings for Sanskaar, or to give him a big hug. That's not it, not at all. I expected her to be angry and frustrated with him. I expected her to be distant with him. The only thing is, I expected her to clearly tell him that she could never reciprocate his love, and to warn him off from ever expressing such "bakwaas baat" to her again. It just seemed a massive overkill for her to break off the friendship altogether--when it is so, so clear that she still needs that friendship. I just can't buy the logic that a person as rational and "together" as Swara, could not see the dichotomy in that snippet of dialogue.

Like you said, maybe this is the dialogue writer's (not so wonderfully thought out) way of inserting intrigue and tension to future proceedings?

BTW, I'm Viji. What is "inlieu" in lieu of? 😉

Edited by CogitoErgoSum - 10 years ago

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