NEW TS || Please Suggest a TITLE || UPDATED PROLOGUE ON PAGE 1

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi Kutties 😊
Here goes a TS.
It's on the current track...
BUT...There is something different in this story 😉 because I'm not at all liking the on going track 🤢
I'll complete it soon if I'll get good response or else will just discontinue... 😳
So no worries 😳


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi guyz... 😃
Here goes the prologue
Not proofread. So ignore typos and enjoy reading 🤗


PROLOGUE


"Ishita...I forgot my file...please...if you don't mind..." Raman pouted at her standing on the doorway.

"Don't make excuses Raman...what you want?" She asked huskily playing with the button of his shirt.

"Arey yaar...truly...I want my file..." He cleared the air making her make a face and mumble, "You became so unromantic...!"

When Ishita walked inside the room Raman got alarmed by something. In no time he ran inside calling her to stop taking his file. The reason being the file which Dr Manoj gave him (surrogacy) was among his other files. He was scared of his Sherlock Holmes biwi.

Ishita was searching the cupboard and got a blue file. On reading the hospital name on the file she was about to put it back on the shelf not at all intersted to read what is inside. Before she could do it Raman was beside her. Panting.

"Raman...!!! You scared me!!!!" She screamed.

"Voh Ishita...I thought of coming over and taking the file myself." He managed to say.

"Alright...take it..." She made space for him to search the cupboard.

His hands stealthly tried to grab the hospital file. But he was not that smart to escape Ishita's sharp eyes.

"Raman...why you want that hospital file?" She asked in a dangerous voice.

"Hos...pital...no...it's my...office file..." He said making her sigh aloud saying, "I saw the file before...it's not that what you want Raman..."

She said making him drop the idea to pick the file in fear of her getting to know everything. As she slightly tilted her head she saw another blue file which was what Raman was asking for.

"See...here is your file." She handed him over and asked him to leave firmly. He walked out constantly looking back at Ishita only to see her reading the file. He could not even think of staying there for a second.

"Raman...you should go home now." Dr Manoj patted Raman's shoulder.

"Hmm..." Raman hummed wearing his blazer and walked out.

At home...

Ishita was awaiting Raman from the past two hours in vain. He would excuse something or the other and hung up. Else, would shout out at her like a Ravan. Still...she enjoyed it all. She did not feel annoyed by his behaviour. All that she could do was smile dreamily at herself like a fool.

"Raman...come fast..."


That's it guys...
Should I continue...
Tell me sincerely 😳
Do like and comment... 😳

Gaya3
Edited by Gaya3sb - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Updated Prologue...
Do read and let me know if I should continue or not 😳
Because it's all about the surrogacy track...
In a different way
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Maybe yes 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Gaya3sb


Maybe yes 😉



😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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First Of All I am totally against the Surrogacy Track...
Current Track of YHM is too much to tolerate..
I already stopped watching YHM... Bcoz I hate current track...and yeah cvs ne mujhe Raman se nafrat (hate) krne majbur krdia Hai.
Bus buhat hui mrri bakwas.

Ab ayi Tumhari new story ki bari.
To prologue is nice..
But I don't know na k what's in your mind..
To yes please continUE
Baad ki baad mai dekhene 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Buttercup u got smart readers😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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INTERESTING Gaya...
Is she pregnant?????

Continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Oh plz don't say that she is preggy...

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