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palak sharma

@lashyyy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#761

plz update it's been long time now almost more than 2 months

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millee18

@millee18

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Posted: 10 years ago

#762

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Kays94

@Kays94

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Posted: 10 years ago

#763

RES!

unres!! ❤️

where do I begin?!?!

one of the most beautiful updates ever!

its amazing to see the transition of this story... from the very first chapter to now

from viren being an obsessive lover to being a caring husband and father to be!

the transition of his character has been the most beautiful so far!

its amazing to see how one person can bring about so much positive change in this man's life otherwise believing that this same guy who has had such a terrible childhood is now the same guy who is shopping endlessly for his wife and his future child is inspiring!

loved the way initially when viren told jeevika of "the dress" 😆 he knows what would look best on his gal for sure!!

then when she said put me down and he listed the two reasons I laughed and smiled ❤️

way to precious!!

then the way he's always so concerned about her health and not putting to much pressure on her!

he's such an adorable man

and the way jeevika mentions the two of them dancing!

mindblowing 👏

i think the back rub on the flight was probably the cutest part of the update for me!

just the way he gets the intuition that something is wrong with her or that something is bugging her internally is so beautiful! thats how you know they're soulmates in every which way

loved how they both came home to bags of clothes for jeevika!

like this man is over doing it, but in the most romantic way possible!!

and jeevika clearly doesn't seem to mind anymore!

and the last part with the nursery filled with everything was so beautiful to read!

especially when he says he did it for our baby!

love that so so so so sooo much!

honestly one of the cutest updates ever!!

thank you ❤️

i can't wait to read more now!!

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srujana

@srujanahpvr

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Posted: 10 years ago

#764

definitely a grt update... loved it ...
love the story as a whole and the journey of virika and all the transitions they have been through since the start..
cant stop myself from reading the whole story again and again..
thank you for the update and please hopefully update the next part soon (no pressure)
u have amazing writing skills..
keep up the good work

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Simarpreetm

@Simarpreetm

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#765

Millee baby thank u so much for giving us this beautiful update despite of u being so unwell. Each n every moment btw Virika is so so special. It's makes me go awww.. U hv described the love n passion btw them so so well. I'm in love with this update. Short of words to describe this story. It's so diff n yet so similar to Virika.. U hv always managed to keep the purity n essence of Virika alive in ur story. No one can be more caring than Viren. He can turn the world upside down to see his lady smiling. A very beautiful relation tat u hv shown just makes me say tat I wish such people exists in real world too. Thank u once again for the lovely update. I wish u never end the story but I understand from where ur coming n respect ur decision. Thanks for making us fall in love with Virika all over again. Lots of love to u Millee.. <3

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VirikaLuver

@VirikaLuver

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#766

Wat an amazing update!!
U described virikas relationship sooo sweetly n perfectly
Virens surprises wer awesome!
Especially the last 1
Continue really soon
Ur an amazing writer!
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808226

Hibernated

Posted: 10 years ago

#767

Beautifulll Update! <3 I completely loved the Virika moments. To see Viren being so attentive and affectionate towards Jeevika makes me fall even more deeply for him. The baby booties though ❤️
These two are indeed The best! #OTPforever <3

Thank you for the update :*

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pinky.padda

@pinky.padda

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#768

welcome back millie

you have been missed

awesome update

absolutely brilliant

viren is just the best

jeevika is so lucky

superb

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KryanVirikaLuv

@KryanVirikaLuv

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Posted: 10 years ago

#769

What's this??

An update???! I must be dreaming 😆

Thank you so much for updating at last

And for giving such a lengthy and beautifully written update as well!

Really, I think this has to be my favourite update so far

Viren's care for Jeevs knows no bounds, he's so sweetly protective

And damn that little sensual scene in between was way too beautiful & sexy at the same time

The way he kisses her stomach and says "Beautiful" ❤️

Bringing the surprise gifts for their baby each day was something else

It was way too adorable!

I really really don't want this story to end

You're an amazing writer and OOL is a story so unique and close to heart

At the same time, if you're not feeling it, I know exactly what you mean, and I know that it's a pain to write when you're not experiencing the same vibes

But please do try to continue this story as much as you can!!

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palak sharma

@lashyyy

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#770

woahhh updated after so long
u make us Wait so much yaar
ok now coming to the part
its so cute nowadays viren is so caring nd adorable
i just loved this viren i mean i loved the dominant viren too but this is really sweet nd cute
this is my fav update so far
i loves how he is all the time ready for jeevs
i loved his pampering
he actually changed so much
i loved the hot n passionate scene nd the way he kiss jeevs stomach beautifully written
n every scene is heart touching
superb update