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Posted: 9 years ago
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This story starts from the scene of talent preparation and how their life goes after that.

Part1

Manik-nandini.. I don't know why but.. I am having a feeling that something bad is going to happen

Nandini- Manik just relax nothing is going to happen baba.. Everything is going to be fine. Trust me baby. For now just focus on your performance.

Manika-nandini all the best nahi bologi mujhe? I mean you know na jab talk mera shining star meko wish nae kare mera din nahi banta..

Nandini- (chukles) all the best manik. Gives a peck on his cheeks and says make me proud my monstuuu. Iloeyouu.

Manik-does the same and says I love you too and all the best to you to. Be ready to lose from the great fab 5 xD

(Maniks phone rings)
Manik- hello.. Haan Bhai bol
Cabir- Salle tera romance hogayaaa ho to ab ajjaa humara next performance hai..
And han nandini Bhabhi ko bol WO bhi ajaye Navya dhund rhi hai usse
Manik-chiii cabir bhabhi and all.. Ewww.soo cheesy man.
Cabir-haan haan bass basss ajja an
Manik-haan arha hon ruk.
( phone disconnects)

Manik-Hogaya romance tumhara? Ab chalo xD tchtchtch. Tumhari vajhaa se mere friends se kya kya suna padhta hai xD
Nandini- hwww meri vjhaaa se?
Manik tum naaa.ahhh.
Manik-(chukels) or ni to kya. I know I am hot but its okay.. Baby..
Nandini-unbelievable ahh.. Manik ( and goes from there)
Manik-(smiles) and comes out and head towards the jam room.

(In jam room)
Mukti- where is Manik yaar. Its time
Cabir- he is coming.. He was with nandini.. You know..ahem ahemm..

Alia-guys they both are so cute na.. I mean I am so glad that he is happy.. He deserves it
Dhurv- I agree nandini is an angel for all of us. Not only for him.
He is lucky to have her in her life.
Cabir- akhir Bhen kiski hai?
Multi- meri dhondhuuu xD or kiskiii..
Cabir-oyeee meri Bhen hai.woo
Mukti- meri
Cabir-meri
And the fight goes on

alia &dhruv- stop it guys.

Abhimanyu comes..
Abhimanyu- hi baby.. Hi guys..
Mukti- hi babu.. (Goes and hugs him)
Fab3- hii manyuuu.
Abhi-so all set?
Fab4-yaaah
(Nandini and navya enter.. Navya goes towards cabir and stands. )
Cabir-hii..agyi tum.
Navya-haaan agyeee hum.kya kar rahe ho tum log. ?
Cabir- basss bhajan mandali bannae ka soch rhe hai.join karogi..
(Everyone laughs except Navya)
Navya hits cabir on his shoulder.
Cabir-oucch. Oyee kya kar rhi hai.. Pagaal.
Vese nandini manik kaha hai?
Nandini- Umm attaaa hi hoga

(In the meantime manik enters)
Manik - hii guys. Watt up? Sab yahaan cabir &mukti- loo agyaa romoe
(Everyone laughs &nandini blushes while manik gives them angry glares.
Manik-hogayaaa? Tumharaaa? To ab challeee? (He looks towards nandini and she ignores him and goes and stands hugging abhi who is her brother.

And manik smiles lookin at her and fab5 leaves?

Precap-fab5 performance.. Manik nandini manofying session


Did u guys like it? Should I continue?



Did u guys like it? Should I continue?
Edited by Ashimanan - 9 years ago

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Posted: 9 years ago
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YES U SHOULD
BUT DON'T BRING ANY NEGATIVITY
PM ME
AWESOME CONCEPT
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey I hve read it on Wattpad and must say that this story is awesome
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Posted: 9 years ago
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very much.. 😆
plzz update soon yaar.
egarly waiting...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Please do update soon cuz I was waiting for something like this to read .
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome start...
loving all the characters...
glad there is no fight between FAB5 and the others...
abhi is alive...so happy...
keep up the good work and continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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SO IT CONTINUES...

Part1B

(Fab5 goes on stage and performs on. "Oh yara oh mere yara"
The crowd goes mad for them and hoots and shouts and cheers for them
Three people over their were more than happy to see fab5 finally together and they were none other than navdiiyuu) .
The performance ends and now they are behind the stage and next is the performance of nandini's group

Navya- heey matarani ab ye aryaman kaha reh gayaaa.. Hum agleee hai
Nandini-navya relax ajayegaa WO. Time hai todha..
Navya-ufff nandini.. Tum rehndooo.. Humme tension ho rhi hai...
Nandini- a cha? Tension ho rhi hai?
Loo agyaaa pechee muddhooo

Navya- (shouts) tum pagal ho.? Phone nahi uthanaa hota? Kahaa the? Hum agllee hai.. Challo ab.

Fab5 comes
All-All the best guys. Rock the stage
Cabir-madhubala. Prove that idiot organiser wrong make me proud. Kiss her temple.
Fab4-waohooo.. Ahmm ahmm cabir and Romantic kuch jammaaa nahi xD
Cabir- Bass hogyaaa tum logon ka..?
(Navyaa blushes.) And hugs aryaman and then nandini and kiss her on her temple too.
Manik was coming towards nandini but she goes on. Stage with everyone.

(Manik feels bad now and thinks to manaofy his love his star his life)

On stage.
They perform and everyone appreciated their performance.
And fab5 was more than happy for them.

Nyonika comes behind the stage on congratulated both the teams. As one was her sons and the other one was her to be bahu's
Nyonika -(goes and hugs nandini) I am so proud of you all. You guys nailed it. Nandini beta u were amazing.. Kiss her hair.
Manik- (was more than happy to see the two most important girls of his life like this. But he being he said) mom what is this? U went and hugged her.? What about me? Even I performed and frowned

Everyone chukules
Nandini- haan tooo? Jealous q ho rahe Ho? she loves me more. Haina mom? (And hugs nyonika)
Manik- achwww? ESA haii?
Nandini-yaaa offcourse
Manik- mimics her yaaa off course.. Huh..
Nyonika laughs and asks manik also to come.. And he comes and hugs her..

Everyone went awww looking at the trio
cabir-(clicked a photo) said even we will join u guys..

It was a family hug.
They broke the hug nyonika went as she was to announce the winner

And undoubtedly fab5 was the winner and 2nd were nandini's group

And they decided to have a party and a sleepover at manik's place

I hope u guys are enjoying.

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Posted: 9 years ago
#8
THE FAMILY BONDING



Part 1C

(So after the result everyone decided to go home and from their they were going to manik's place)

Manik ,nandini & nyonika went home

(Nyonika was very well aware of their relationship and was very happy. She treated nandini as her daughter)

InCar
Manik-mom don't u think some one is looking like a potato

(Nayonika looks towards nandini)

Nyonika-ummm yeaaa. Someone is looking like one

(Manik and nyonika chukules)

Nandini- (sighs) and says mom app bhi? :(
Nyonika- bacha meko batao to hua kya

Manik- kya Maaa usse kya pooch rahe ho.. Mai batata hon. Madam naraz hai mere se cuz inko mazaaak samjh nahi attaa (sighs)

Nandini- haaan nahi attaa. Huh.. Or nahi samjhanaaa hai... To tum c
Shaaant rahoo
Maaa apko pata hai. Meko ye kudh kahi bhi le jataaa hai and then mere pe ilzaaam laga deta hai..huh

Nyonika and manik smile looking at her

Nandini - Maaa app Haas rahe ho? Sahi mai? Ahh
Nyo- bachaaa .. achaaa sorry.. Yea manik naaa hai hi pagaal..
Nandini - haan maa.sahi bola apne.. Nalayak hai xD

(Both maaa beti give hi-5 to eachother and manik just keep admiring them)

Manik-(fake anger) Bass theeek haii..
Ho jao ek team mai. Mai akelaaa hi kafii hon..

Nyonika- arreee tum donno basss karo.. Vrnaa koi party nahi hogi..

(Both say sorry
And they reach home)

The trio enter the mansion
And nyo ask them to go to their room and change ad get ready

Manik's room
(Both enter the room and manik locks it)

Manik- nanuuu baby abhi narazzz ho apne Mani se?

Nandini- hmmm

Manik- baby sorry naa. Mazaaak thaa na babuu..

Nandini -(look towards him) Mani I know mazaak thaaa.. But meko a cha nahi lagaaa.. Sorry faltu mai naraz hone k liye.

Manik(comes towards her and stands in front of her and holds her from waist and) nannu its okay.. But pls. Mere se baaat krnaaa band matt karaaa karoo.. Meko acha nahi lagtaaa... It fells like thousand people stabbing you with a knife

Nandini- (hugs him ) and says I love you maniii very much.. Be with me always

Manik-( kisses her temple) and says I love you too baby .. Humesha ( and tightens the hug)

(After a while both change and decide to rest for sometime as there is still a lot of time for the party to start)

Manik nandini hugging eachother and are sitting on the bed.

Manik-nanuuu tumne bohot acha gayaaa.. Made me proud baby

Nandini-thanks maniii :* and snuggeld more into him.

Manik&nandini were just enjoying this .. But then nandini's phone starts ringing..

On phone
Nandini-haan Chachi.
Chachi- beta a kaha hai?manik k yah an?
Nandini- haan chachi.. WO uske ghar mai party thi.. And nyo mom said ki mai college se Inke saath auu to agyiu
Problem to nahi haina?
Chachi- nahi beta.. Mai too khush hon ki WO teko pasand krte hai.. Akhir shadddi to ussi ghar mai honi hai.
(Nandini blushes & manik notices this)
Nandini-acha Chachi mai ajj yahi rukungii.. Theek hai?
Chachi- haan haan apnaaa hi ghar samjh.. XD
Nandini ( chuckules) and says chahchi bye baaad mai bat karungi.. Hhehhe.

Phone disconnected

Manik- kya hua? Blush q kar rhi ho?

Nandini- Ma-aii maii bl-lus-ush blush nahiii tooo.

Manik-achwww? Pakka shaddi ki baat ki hogi ( and laughs)
And. Nandini hides herself in his chest and he hugs her and they both take a nap for some time

Guys is it okay? Shall I continue?

[U]THE FAMILY
Edited by Ashimanan - 9 years ago

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