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Posted: 10 years ago
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One year after the contract marriage everything was fine between nachiket and ragini the kids were happy to see their mum and dad together ranbir has accepted ragini as his mum and aarav was slowly getting there. Even pam had got used to the idea of nachiket and ragini together. Neil was working for a private hospital so was ranbir and suhanni. Ragini was still working at Dr Amans hospital.

Ragini's Cabin 6pm
Ragini was just finishing up and getting ready to go home nachiket was taking her out to dinner tonight since they had got back together they had a ritual that they would go out to dinner once a week just the two of them. Dr Aman came in "ragini these accounts need to be sorted" "i will do them tomorrow sir" "no i have a board meeting tomorrow and need to show them there" "but sir why did you leave it so late" "i forgot" "ok sir i will look at them" he smirked he did not forget he had heard ragini tell devika that nachiket was taking her out today and he would make sure she did not go. "I will go get the rest of the files" ragini got her phone out to ring nachiket "hi nachiket" "hi sweetheart are you on your way" "i am sorry nachiket i going to be late Dr Aman has given me some accounts to go through he needs for tomorrow" "what time will you finish by" "hopefully not too long" "ok ring me i will come pick you up don't take a taxi ok". Ragini hung up. Dr Aman walked back in and put the files down.

8pm
Nachiket was at home waiting for ragini to ring he hoped she would not be too late they had both been busy these last few days and were looking forward to spending some time together. "Nachiket are you gaving dinner" pam asked "no pam i am taking ragini out for dinner when she is back"

Ragini's Cabin
Ragini was just finishing up she got her phone out to ring nachiket when aman grabbed the phone "whats the rush ragini" "what do you mean sir we have finished so i am ring nachiket to pick me up" he started moving towards her she moved back until she hit a wall. He stood on front of her and grabbed her wrist "what you doing sir let me go" "you know u want this ragini" "let me go sir please let me go" he let go of her wrist and grabbed her arm "sir please let me go" she wriggled free he tried to grab her arm again but just tore her blouse ragini tried to open the door but he had locked she banged on the door he came behind her and covered her mouth she bit him and banged the door again. Dr devika heard her cries and got the door open she was shocked to ragini with her blouse torn and dr aman standing there. Ragini got up and hidden behind devika aman ran out. Ragini what happened devika asked she told her. I am ringing nachiket where is your phone ragini. Devika rung nachiket from ragini's phone "hi beautiful" "its me devika" "i am sorry devika why you ringing from ragini's phone is she ok" "you need to come to the hospital now nachiket hurry please" nachiket hung up and grabbed his keys. He got to the hospital devika was waiting for him. "Whats wrong is ragini ok" "just come with me" she took him to one of the treatment rooms ragini was on the bed she had wound on her head and bruise on her arm. He walked in and saw ragini. "Whats happened ragini" he sat next to her she just hugged him she was sobbing he rubbed her back "whats wrong ragini tell me please" he broke the hug and saw the bruise on her arm and her torn blouse "ragini what's happened" she told him everything he was seething with anger "i am going to kill him" he just hugged ragini "i am sorry nachiket" "you have nothing to be sorry for" he told devika to stay with ragini he took his jacket off and put it around ragini "i will be back in a minute" he went outside and rung pam and dimpy and told them to come to the hospital. Pam and dimpy came with RK and Ranbir. He told them everything they were shocked. Pam and dimpy went inside to see ragini. "RK you are coming with me i am going to kill him the ba****d. He went into the room ranbir you take ur mum home with pam and dimpy "but dad" "please ranbir just listen to me ok" "where are u going nachiket"

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Contiuned


Pam asked "i am going to find him and kill him" "good don't leave him" he looked at ragini "he is not getting away with this" when suddenly RK came in the room "nachiket he is here outside" nachiket walked upto ragini held her hand "i will make him pay for this" she nodded pam sat next to her nachiket went outside RK and ranbir followed him.

Outside
Nachiket ran down the stairs and saw Dr Aman was standing next to his car he grabbed him by shoulder and turned him around "Dr Neil i am" before he could finish nachiket punched him in the face "how dare you touch my ragini" he got him up again and punched him again and again and again he was beating him up very badly when RK and Ranbir grabbed him "stop nachiket stop" nachiket freed himself "what you saying RK" "nachiket its enough" "he does not deserve to live" "if you kill him what will happen to ragini and the kids he is not worth it" Aman was on the floor not moving covered in blood nachiket went up to him and grabbed him by his shirt "today i let you live next time if you even look at ragini wrong i will kill you" he dropped back onto the floor. Nachiket,RK and Ranbir went back to ragini's room.

Ragini's Room
Pam and Dimpy were sat with her. Nachiket walked in she sat up she still had his jacket wrapped around her like a safety blanket he sat down next to her and hugged her she was crying "its ok ragini he will never hurt you again i promise no one will ever hurt u your nachiket is here i will never let anyone hurt you i promise" he broke the hug and looked at ragini cupped her face "you trust me" she nodded" he kissed her forehead "i promise i will always keep you safe" he wiped her tears lets go home. He was helping ragini up when she saw nachikets hand "nachiket your hand" "its ok ragini lets get you home".
The End
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Oh yes I want something like this to happen where Aman gets beaten up by Nachiket.
How dare he even looked at her. Filthy creature :/
Loved how Nachiket was protective about Ragini and Pam being there for Ragini as well.
It was a pleasure to read this OS. This was great. :)
Thank you for writing about this topic.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: hamna19khan

Oh yes I want something like this to happen where Aman gets beaten up by Nachiket.
How dare he even looked at her. Filthy creature :/
Loved how Nachiket was protective about Ragini and Pam being there for Ragini as well.
It was a pleasure to read this OS. This was great. :)
Thank you for writing about this topic.


Glad you liked it yes want Aman to be beaten up by nachiket
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: shabz50



Glad you liked it yes want Aman to be beaten up by nachiket


Oh it's my wish
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Oh yes i do hope it happens
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Shabz, this was fantastic! I loved the way Nachiket handled the entire situation (especially how he beat Aman to a pulp 😆). But my favorite was definitely the last line where he is taking care of Ragini despite his own injuries; that was just too cute! 😳

Definitely wish fulfillment for all of us with Nachiket nearly murdering Dr. Aman--thank you for that! 😊
Edited by neiralove - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Truly epic..i wish this happens..
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Oh how I wish to see something like this n serial... Actually It was in my wish list to see Dr.Aman beaten up by Nachiket... Thank u Shabz for writing...
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I actually want this to happen in the show as well. Brilliant idea it is @shabz.

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