#THREAD 2 LOVE- A FOUR LETTER WORD UPDT CH51 pg 98 31st jan 2016 - Page 17

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Chapter 47 D

Manik who was standing in the pool- half emerged in warm water - turned to nandini and curled his arm around her waist- who was sitting on the floating bean bag "so...?" he said and leaned closer to her.

"so..."she replied softly. He leaned own to kiss her but nandini was in the playful mood. Although, goddess venus was equally in mood to bring two lovers closer and played her part. In exuberance to push him away she lost her balance and fell in water. Manik immediately held her hand and pulled her out of the water "nandini are you okay..?" he asked perturbedly

She clung to him tightly- curled her arms around her neck and nuzzled her face in his neckline- breathing heavily. He wrapped arms around her waist tugging her closer.

Perpetuate intense hug- letting go everything they were suppressing in their hearts- and being puppet of goddess venus- a beautiful melody echoed- evoking their aflaming desires.

They had forgot to turn off the movie which in turn ended and as planned by cabir- who had forebode to leave the love birds alone- sequenced a romantic erotic number on repeat

( a/n: do listen while reading it will add fuel to fire-crazy in love from fifty shades of grey)

Uh-oh, uh-oh, uh-oh, oh no no

Uh-oh, uh-oh, uh-oh, oh no no

Uh-oh, uh-oh, uh-oh, oh no no

Uh-oh, uh-oh, uh-oh, oh no no

Uh-oh, uh-oh, uh-oh, oh no no

They pulled back and looked at each other.

Manik gaze skimmed her from head to toe- Nandini's dress cleaved to her skin- leaving nothing for imagination- evoking manik's repressed desires. He could see her sea green bikini through the wrap. He yanked her closer and she clashed on his chest with a jerk- Her luscious breasts squeezing in between them- gasping for oxygen!

look and stare so deep in your eyes

I touch on you more and more every time

When you leave I'm beggin you not to go

Call your name two, three times in a row

Such a funny thing for me to try to explain

How I'm feeling and my pride is the one to blame

yeah Cause I know I don't understand

Just how your love can do what no on else can

Manik right hand went directly to small of her back and his left hand caressed her collarbone as he swept the strap of her left shoulder down- he leaned down to gave an open mouth kiss on her collar bone- arousing the goose bumps- shiver ran through her body and she titled her head back in pleasure. He moved to her right shoulders and swept the down the strap with his teeth- his lips brushing her shoulders - evoking a loud moan "manikkk..."she puffed. He put his hands on her sides and slid her dress down and let it float in the water. Her eyes closed- head fallen back- clutching to his shoulders to support her from falling.

Got me lookin so crazy right now

Your love's got me lookin so crazy right now'

Got me lookin so crazy right now your touch's

Got me lookin so crazy right now

Got me hoping you page me right now your kiss's

Got me hoping you save me right now

Lookin so crazy your love's

got me lookin Got me lookin so crazy in love

Manik palmed her face with his both hands "Look at me." He whispered in deep hoarse seductive voice- urging her to look at him-red hue crept on the face with shy embarrassment. His eyes hooded with desperate need to touch and kiss her body- her eyes down casted with a gesture of surrendering herself in his hands "beautifulll.."he mumbled around her lips.

He kissed the corner of her mouth and then her bottom lip, before fully attacking her mouth. He sucked her tongue- caressing her mouth with his tongue- relishing its sweet taste.

When I talk to my friends so quietly

"who he think he is?"

look at what you've done to me

Tennis shoes don't even need to buy a new dress

You ain't here, ain't nobody else to impress

It's the way that you know what I thought I know

It's the beat that my heart skips when I'm with you

But I still don't understand

Just how your love can do what no one else can

They pulled back gasping for air- His fingers stroked the side of her breasts- soft fabric of bikini top rubbed on his fingers until his thumb rested just beneath her breasts. Her chest rose and fell rapidly as he perpetuated to caress the undersides of her breasts "manik..."she moaned and bit his neckline. She looked at him and locking his gaze with her He took a step back and tugged off his vest and again he yanked her closer- their almost bare bodies creating friction of perfervid desires. He could feel every moment of her chest with breath she took- he was cognizant of the effect he was having on her.

Got me lookin so crazy right now

Your love's got me lookin so crazy right now

Got me lookin so crazy right now your touch's

Got me lookin so crazy right now

Got me hoping you save me right now your kiss

Got me hoping you save me right now

Lookin so crazy, your love's got me lookin

Got me lookin so crazy in love

He submerged into the water and replacing his lips with his thumb- he kissed just beneath her breast. He dropped wet kisses on her stomach and brushed his lips over her bikini bottom's waist line. She tugged to his hair roughly and moaned loudly "manik...please..." he emerged out of the water- caressing her bare thighs- he curled her legs around his waist- she could feel him hard on her stomach and carried out of the pool.

Got me lookin so crazy right now

Your touch got me lookin so crazy right now

Got me hoping you page me right now your kiss

Got me hoping you page me right now

Lookin so crazy your love's got me lookin

Got me lookin so crazy in love

Uh-oh, uh-oh, uh-oh, oh no no.

Uh-oh, uh-oh, uh-oh, oh no no.

Uh-oh, uh-oh, uh-oh, oh no no.

Uh-oh, uh-oh, uh-oh, oh no no.

Uh-oh, uh-oh, uh-oh, oh no no.

He took her in the small gazebo arranged near the pool with small bed and red duvet- Soft breeze playing and making the curtains flow- inducing a dreamy look- but who cared for the decor when they couldn't even remove their gaze from each other. He placed her on the bed and lay on top of her- his lips parted and she plunged her tongue inside his mouth and kissed him hard- biting his lip and sucking them to suffice the pain. She wanted to show him that he has not loved before-with one kiss she wanted him to feel that she can make love to him for eternity.

His hands went to her front and open her bra and threw it somewhere. Their bare body rubbing with each other- inducing havoc in their heart- they could feel each others

Wild heart beats. They let each others warmth seep into their bones and she whimpered when he palmed her bare breast and sucked them. "manik...please don't stop..."she moaned and squirmed like a dry leaf.

He stood up and removed her bikini bottom and his jammers- covered them in duvet and wore the protection and positioned himself- entering her slowly- groaning and moaning. Their loud gasps and moans echoing. She called her names and he engulfed in his strong arms when they had enough and their body completely gave up.

Enveloping in tranquil air with utter silence- with Mother Nature being naughty and witnessing the act of pure love from corner of her eyes and instructing nightingales and nocturnal animals to be quiet and let the love birds enjoy each other presence.

"they say na when you touch someone with your spirit and they touch you back with their heart..."
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OKAY GUYS...HERE YOU GO WITH LONG UPDATE..I HOPE I STOOD ON YOUR EXPECTATIONS...
now time for a dropping a bomb... i really sorry but unfortunately i have to end this story now...i will be giving one epilogue...i know i am being very unfair but i have my very imp exam next month..which will decide my future...that paper needs my undivided attention and i cant allow myself to get distracted...
i also wanted to write more for you people...but i am not able to take time out of my tight schedule...henceforth you people have to wait for long...
i am not going anywhere..once i will be done..i promise to continue with part from where i left...
so please dont be upset...
and to make you little happy i am posting this fic on wattpad- editing lot of stuff especially adding details to the bold content...as i am not allowed to do it hear...so you people can read the detailed version of manan scenes there as well...
go and read guys..trust me i am editing it...writing in clear words...
i will add epilogue by tomorrow...
now i update lamba walla..please drop lambe lambe comments...plzzz
Edited by flighhigh - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautifully written.
Loved the Manan love.
Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 10 years ago
such a long update
loved it
Cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow!!!what an awesome update !!! Fab 5 family moments were awesome !!! Manan romance scenes just raised the temperature😳 !! Maniks care for nandini scene was like awww so sweet !! Nandini cute antics !! Many more scenes were awesome !! Such a looonnngg update that I have been waiting for and it was awesome👍🏼 !! Keep entertaining! Understanding ur situation will surely wait for ur next update keep writing !!!love u lods 😊👏😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
omg hot sensual sultry sexy wild intense passionate update
Manik is losing control looking at Nandani in that bikini and just wanted to lock her with him in the room and make love to her wildly showing all his love to her

while watching the movie he couldn't seems to control his desires and started to make her moan which can result too erotic for his friends when they all leave he just started his work of making her his only by keep on loving her and kissing her

continue soon and thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Such amazingly written.
The best lines ever
"They say na to make her fall in love you need to make her laugh...but every time I make her laugh...i am the one who fall in love all over again.."
This just stole my heart. Hats off. Keep going and continue giving the best as u always do.
🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanx for update...
It was really hot...
Waiting for epilogue...
Dear watpad link is not opening...
What's ur usernamr in watpad.?

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