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Gaya3sb

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Posted: 10 years ago

#191

Originally posted by: sukanksha
Arrrggghhh... Shagun... This lady is getting on my nerves

Be cool girl 😎

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Gaya3sb

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Posted: 10 years ago

#192

Originally posted by: rufana10

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awesome update
RKB is back in action 👏
shagun 😡
raman is going to divorce her 😃
Ruman scene was amazing...liked it so much
waiting for d next update 😊

Glad you liked it 😳
Thanks for the comment 😳

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Gaya3sb

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Posted: 10 years ago

#193

Originally posted by: nahtani88
Amazing Update
Continue Soon
Thanks 4 The PM

Tanks dear 😳

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Gaya3sb

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Posted: 10 years ago

#194

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan
awesome update
whts there in that diary
so finally shagun is witch
good finally getting a mighty rkb
y d hell appa amma supports shagun more
awww d ruman convo was sweet

Who knows what's in the diary 😆
I'm so happy that you liked it 😳

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Gaya3sb

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Posted: 10 years ago

#195

Hi guys...
A little late than usual...sorry for that 😕 I fell asleep and couldn't update late night 😳
Well...here goes the next part.
Not proofread. So ignore typos and enjoy reading 🤗

PART-6

"Even though you may want to move forward in your life, you may have one foot on the brakes. In order to be free, we must learn how to let go. Release the hurt. Release the fear. Refuse to entertain your old pain. The energy it takes to hang onto the past is holding you back from a new life. What is it you would let go of today?"

____Mary Manin Morrissey

Shagun was pacing in her bedroom thinking about Raman's words. From the past one week she is doing the same. Neither she had come out of her bedroom, nor does she consider her professional commitments. All that she could think of was just Raman. She was scared of failure. She wanted to do something as soon as possible, so that she would be able to demean Ishita again. To prove herself the best.

She could not even think of a defeat in front of Ishita. Even after having Raman as her husband she could not have him in all its sense. Her head was heating up thinking about the reason which attracts Raman to Ishita. She got furious. What it might be that ties his heart to Ishita's pallu? Is that Ishita's long beautiful hair? Is she more beautiful than her? She could not figure it out. Yet...she was sure that Ruhi is not the reason which Raman himself had shouted loud at her.

How to earn back Raman's trust. That was what her next thought. It was an impossible area that she wants to conquer. Raman had cleared it all that he does not want her in his life anymore. That he disgusts her. That he wants to move on. She had been totally banned!

He had insulted her parents who always supported her. That irked her. How dare he treat them rudely! She fisted her hands in anger. She wanted to vent it out on someone. Not on Raman. Because she wanted to start it over. A beginning...to close Ishita's chapter from Raman's life. To make a place in his life for herself. To win.

"Shagun...I've got you leave for the next one week. But...what're you up to? Where are you going...?" Bala asked patting her shoulder only to see her turning to him like an angry ghost. He took a step back fearing her and asked her the reason for her sudden tour. That too alone.

"That's none of your business annai...You just leave me alone." She shouted making Bala leave the room in frustration.

She was always the same. Nothing changed. Nothing can be changed. Bala had always tried to learn his sister's character. He had found his own parents responsible for her abnormal behaviour. He did always blamed them for the same only to get slapped or temporarily thrown out of the family.

Amma and appa wanted a baby girl after having Bala. It took six years for the couples to get blessed with their wish. When both were so happy with their first born baby boy and their dream come true baby girl, amma got pregnant again. The couple did not want another child no matter what. They tried for an abortion only to know that it is dangerous for amma's life. They were in dilemma. Appa could not risk amma's life.

That's how the couple decided to borne the child. Only for the sake of amma. But the fatal incident of Ishita's life happened the day she was born. Amma's left leg got paralysed in the delivery making both amma and appa hate the child. The whole family started treating her like an 'apshagun' when Shagun was ruling like a queen. They showered their love and everything on Shagun when Ishita was treated like a burden. She became a person whose living or dying never mattered to them. This made Shagun build up a pride inside herself that she is the only one who deserve everything colourful. That her sister does not even deserve living. That's what affected Shagun psychologucally thereby troubling everyone. Especially Ishita.

The only one who felt bad for Ishita was Bala. He wanted her to relax for some time. Be herself. Be away from every torture. Be away from her family. That was what made him play everything in his power to get her a job in a hospital in Mumbai. Making her leave the family for the sake of her job. Simply, making the torturous family bid her a nice 'alvida'.

When Bala's concern was his little sister's happiness...it proved to be both happy and a sad experience for her. She got the most beautiful days of her life in Mumbai along with so much of hurt that is still eating her up.

"Where are we going papz...?" Ruhi inquired her papa who was doing her hairdo.

"We...are...going...to..." Raman started to sing.

"Uffo papa...What happened to you...?"

"Hmm...see Rooh...you've your amma's beautiful lengthy hair..." He started to bring the topic of his concern.

"But mumma has short hair nah papa?" Ruhi furrowed her eyebrows looking at Raman's reflection in the mirror.

"When I said mumma...? I was talking about your amma." He looked at her after neatly plaiting her hair in either sides.

"Amma? What is amma?" The little girl got confused.

"Hmm...amma...is..." He hummed caressing her head. "Your amma is just like you...Soon you'll know what amma means." He said kissing her.

She jumped off from his lap and fixed her short skirt. Looking at him she made a sad puppy face. He was confused of her sudden change. Crinkling his nose he threw a pillow at her which she catched hold of and threw away.

"You're so bad papa..." She complained making his heartbeat raise thinking that she is going to ask him about Shagun. "Why are you stopping me from going school for a week? I'll miss Arjun a lot..." Her eyes welled up.

Picking her up he pulled her cheek asking, "My baby won't miss studies!!! Alright...Is he your boyfriend?"

"Yep. He's so cute papa...I love him." She said innocently.

"Let's skype...don't worry..." He assured her when they got into the car.

"You should drive carefully Mr Raman Bhalla. I can't handle one more head ache." Ruhi made a face like a grown up making Raman bow down in front of her saying, "As you say ma'am."

The father-daughter duo enjoyed a lot all through the drive. It was then that they got to spend this much time together. They were using it to the fulsome by singing...screaming...eating and even dancing inside the car. Ruhi was in cloud nine thinking that she is going to spend the whole week with her papa. She had already started writing a travelogue to show her Miss in the school.

Raman on the other hand was realising many things. He got to see a mini Ishita in his daughter. His mind took a walk in the past on watching his junior madrasan. Not only their hair resembles, but also the batting of their eyelids seemed the same. He could not help but appreciate himself for doing that mistake. The mistake of the night! It proved to be so beautiful...The light of his life.

Their car stopped in front of a beautiful posh villa. Ruhi was in a light slumber hugging her white teddy. Raman got out of the car without waking her up and pressed the doorbell. Opening the door, Ishita let out a loud sigh in watching the unexpected guest.

"Raman...you...here?" She asked nervously while he kept on moving towards her ignoring her question.

"Don't...I...you please...leave..." She said moving backwards.

"Why...?"

"Because...I...Why are you here Raman...? What you want?"

"I want you!!!"

"What the hell!!!"

"I said I want you."

"Have you gone mad or something? Just leave or else..." Showing her palm as if asking him to stop. "Don't come close. Stop there..."

"Are you scared that you won't be able to let go of me?" He grinned at her.

"Chee Raman...You're my akka's husband. I can't think of you like that. Be in your limit. You better leave now itself.I said leave." She shouted

"What chee? You would have heard that I'm going to divorce Shagun. So why so attitude babe? Why are you stopping me?" He asked pinning her to the wall.

"You're not making any sense Raman. You'd my word that you won't come to me...you won't interfere in my personal life. Then why are you acting weird all of a sudden?" She managed to ask nervously as he kept on looking at her cherry lips.

"Why always you and your sister decide my life? For a change let me do something for myself...For a change let me decide my life for once. For a change let me find my happiness..." He said closing the distance between his lips and her cheek.

"Raman leave me... You're my...brother in law..." That came out as a mere whisper from her.

"You...Wh-what did you say?" He broke apart a little to look at her face only to see her down casted eyes.

"That's the fact Raman...So please be in your limit." She said firmly.

"Oh really...! So I'm your brother in law! That's a great news for me. Wow...!" He said sarcastically and pulled her in his arms angrily. "Was that love when our daughter was in the hospital for your brother in law? Did you kissed your brother in law or am I mean something more to you? Tell me damn it!" He shook her by her arms.

"Yes you're just my brother in law. I was concerned. I could feel your pain because I was in the same state. I was empathetic. That's all. I never meant to cross my limits...because you're my brother in law. Period." She screamed on top of her throat.

"I would love to be treated that way...You know why...I never felt that you're regarding me as your brother in law. What's in your mouth is not that your body and heart does. They're treacherous Ishita...I mean it. Period." He said pulling her more into him making her tilt her head in disgust.

"Ramann...leave me. You can't stoop this low. I can't bare this. You can't be my Raman. You're not my Raman...What happened to my Raman...?" She asked in her weak voice.

"I love to hear that from you Ishita. That possessiveness seems so sexy!" He said nuzzling the nape of her neck making her heart beat like a drum which he could feel.

"You're crossing your limits." She tried to push him off.

"Actually...I'm learning...how to cross the limits..." Saying which he pulled her by her waist crushing her to him.

"This is wrong. You're doing wrong...You can't force me like this" Her voice raised.

"You know what Ishita..., Raman Bhalla won't run after you...asking 'please spend some time with me Ishita...' He is not henpecked. But...he became so shameless and rude you know...that's why he doesn't care about your feelings anymore. He won't listen to you anymore. Yes...I mean it..."

"What made you act like this? What happened to you Raman...?" She asked softly.

"I'm just tired...and I want to relax." He said looking deeply into her eyes.

"Raman...Are you alright...? Tell me what happened?" She asked lovingly cupping his face in her palms.

He just pushed her off making her land on the sofa. "Don't try to trap me in your love again Ms Ishita Iyer! You can't. I'm not that old Raman Bhalla who loved you a lot and trusted you to death. You and your bloody sister had killed that poor man in me. You can't trap me in your fake love anymore. I'm done with your dramas." He shouted at her.

"What the hell you meant? Fake love...? You mean my love for you was fake? How could you say that? How could you think that I was acting? How dare you insult my love Mr Raman Kumar Bhalla?" She shook him by his collars.

He smirked at her. "Don't get hyper Ms Ishita Iyer. Truth is always bitter. I can understand your situation." He took off her hands from him.

"You're being so rude...!" She said dropping herself on the floor crying.

"AMMAA..."

The sweet call broke the horrible silence which filled the room. Ishita looked up at the doorway in shock hearing that word. That too from her little princess. She shifted her gaze to Raman as if asking 'how it happened'. He did not say a word but shifted his gaze downwards.

He was unable to see her tears. Her eyes wore happiness. Still there was this sadness that those beautiful eyes in which he would drown to death is complaining. For his intolerable discovery that she faked her love for him! She was angry. Sad. But...the moment she heard Ruhi, everything else vanished in thin air.

"You're my amma, right?" Ruhi asked touching Ishita's cheek, wiping off her tears.

"How do you know baby...?" She kissed Ruhi's cheeks.

"Papa told me I've my amma's beautiful lengthy hair. See...our hair is same to same. So you're my amma...am I right?"

TO BE CONTINUED...

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Edited by Gaya3sb - 10 years ago

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Gaya3sb

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Posted: 10 years ago

#196

Updated Part 6 guys...
Hope you'll like it...
Sorry for not being able to keep the timing 😳
Enjoy reading 🤗
Please don't forget to like and comment 😉

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lakshmi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#197

amazing update dear

sorry for late reply dear

today only i got chance to read your wonderful updates dear

i loved you and thank you dear for ruman dear i loved them more than bond between ruhi and ishita

while start reading your update i am hell shocked i think that it is about shagun and raman but you change that focus it is about ishra thanks for that dear

i really feel bad for raman due to ishita how she is dumb to give away her love to beast her sister and i cant tolerate that dear

but i liked raman way to make her realize what is pain when most lovable person is away from her (but it is wrong but somewhat it is right ) dear

i loved the bond between ruman

i loved ruhi so much how she miss him badly and want to spend time with him was emotional and nice dear

i loved ashok whom care about his brother life and stands for him dear

want more ruman scene dear

i really loved the scene where ruhi asked about shagun to raman and raman answer to the question was awesome dear and ruhi love for raman was no words dear and i loved it so much dear

now our rkb is back know all about shagun and want to get back his love ishita from shagun for his lovable daughter ruhi dear

one accident change rkb life a heaven dear

waiting for battle against shagun a evil

somewhat i guess your story dear i dont know whether it is correct or not dont mistake me dear

i think that raman is love with ishita both madly in love with each other but not married and she is a mother of ruhi and for ishita shagun is everything and raman a groom whom is going to engaged with shagun fix by their parents and shagun is love with raman by his personality or money anything and she knows her sister love him and she always want what her sister have and ishita family is not bad but giving more importance to society more than her daughter happiness but ishita not told who is a father of her child to her parents but not shagun still somewhat i have a doubt that ishita parents are more partiality towards ishita because of more love of shagun

shagun know that ishita love her and she is conceived by raman child but she blackmail her sister that i love raman and i cant live with out him so please give me raman back (for ishita shagun is everything so she decided to give his love her raman to her)

raman when come to know everything that shagun is ishita sister and she is everything for ishita but he adamant in his decision not to go away his love ishita but ishita want to give her love to shagun and he try to implement some sense in ishita mind but ishita not want to listen him

agreement is he has to marry shagun instead of ruhi

mastermind behind all these shagun and shagun act like she loves raman more and also ruhi and also act like she is a good child and sister by accepting ishita child as own for her parents respect but she is selfish in everything

now raman know everything about shagun and he want to live his life and not a forced life and want to break his promise to ishita because of more love of ishita and ruhi and somewhat he have anger for ishita parents also

i dont know my assumption is correct or not dear

please continue soon dear

waiting to know how will raman win and how he get his love

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kaa1202

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Posted: 10 years ago

#198

Amma & Appa r confirmed psychos.

RKB replied Ishita in his own way.

Ruhi's entry is awesome.

Hoping for a IshRaRu moment in next update..

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Malvika

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Posted: 10 years ago

#199

Awesome update Gaya...

Shagun officially a mentally sick person...

Amma & appa they are disgusting how can they hate their own child...

Liked bala's concern towards ishu...

Loved ishu ruhi reunion...

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Balasri

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Posted: 10 years ago

#200

Poor ishita she has gone through a lot from her childhood how can her parents be that rude?? Atleast Bala can understand d pain she has gone through... Shagun is such a witch the way she is thinking is just horrible... Raman is back I love see dis arrogant raman den an emotional raman... Last part was jst awesome... Ishita Ruhi meeting.. Looking forward to more of their moments... I hate shagun continue soon