MANANA AZNABI (PART 2 oN pg 2

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hey gyzzz...a new ff on manan...from teenage to their collage life...

How they fought , nd became strog,
For eachother
With eachother...

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Edited by softysakshi - 9 years ago

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Okay I'm the writer of YOU BECOME MY STORY and BECAUSE I LOVE MY BEST FRIEND...and now WHY ALWAYS SAME STORY? too hehehe...So I'm glad you acknowledge our efforts and took a step I'll forgive you if you keep your words :)
As we all put lots of efforts and all we (I) need is respect and that can be done by a few words..as I believe if You Love Something that show that!! :)
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Try reading one more!! My sky full of stars!! It's a beautiful story and I am sure you will enjoy reading it as much as I do 😊
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Hello people...sakshi here...I was continuously trying to post a new topic...but dnt knw...continuously showing some errors...so having no other option...I have to post this ff here in this topic only...

Abt this ff...it is written by one of my frnd #cristina sparkal...she is not the user of forumas so posting it on her behalf...

Chapter 1
a grl smple yet knw hw to Style long black hairs cute pink lips happy go teenage grl ws sleepng on hr bed peacefuly
"oi uthigi ki nhi? Nandu kb se utha rhi hu itz almost 6:45am schl 7:55 am ko pohochna h n u still sleepng?" d grl mothr mamta almost shout on her
"ahhh i hate i hate i so hate dis kv schl y dere tyming is lyk dis?" c almost cryngly sad
"roz roz akhi dailoge 10s sal hone wale h tjhe esh xcul meh still jldi uthna nhi shiki" mamta sad irritatedly
"ufoo ma dt strt nw i toh thnking aftr 10th i wl nt study 11th n 12th here i wl join clge" c sad cnfusngly
"phele 10th toh pass ho ja n use phele schl k lia ready ho ja"mamta sad
"ohoo ma hmesha bato meh fasa k late kr date ho"c sad n run to d bathrum mamta gve a disblve luk to hr soon c come out of hr bathrum n chnge into hr uniform cmplening lyk always "huh ye v koi uniform hota h chii"
"sun nandu navya ka cl aya h puch rhi h ak choti ya do?" mamta ask
**Navya stylish grl who luvz to play with boys n a vry gud prsn frm heart luv nandu
a lot dey r bsty frm long ago**
"2 choti othrwise vo saru princi punish krega"nadu sad angryly hr mom laugh n inform navya d msj "ok maa bye miss me"c sad
"lunch toh leke ja"
"no na maa ok bye"c kisd he mom n run
mamta's pov
dis grl tufan h akdam kab bari hogi ye...
AT xcuL
"chii etni dhup me mrng prayer i so hate it"nandu sad
"me2 bt chl we dt hve choice"navya sad
dey soon finish d prayer gossipng ol d tym
At cLs
"oi tu prayer me kisko dhun rhi thi ha??"navya teasnly ask
"mehh nahii toh kisi ko v nhi yar"nadu sad
"ohh mjhe lga manik tjhe ghur rha tha aj"navya sad n nandu bcme xceted "realy sachii wohoo no no shut up i ws lukng at hm he nvr luk at me"nandu sadly sad "ahaa toh tu toh bol rhi thi u were nt sarchng or lukng fo any1" navya agn tease hr "uffoo navya i wl kill u"nadu sad blushngly
"tu bad meh mar lena tripathi ah gya ab mon dharan kr"navya sad scaredly tripathi was d rakshas of maths **MANIK MALHOTRA d dream of every grl of d xcul a hot handsm n t wht nt guy has a lot of attitude hve few frndz
nvr talk so much evn can sae he nvr talk to d grls n nandini has a huge huge crush on him c follow him on fb like mad grl he study in 10c n nandu in 10A
"uff fnly period is ovr bt m sure meh fail hongi yar maths me"navya sad
"toh me knsa pass hone wali hu see na nxt month is our boards n m nt prepar yet"nandini sad worriedly
"aree chill mar hm kbse xms ki tention lene lge?"navya sad proudely
"hehe true bt can u blve navu(navya)hm 11th meh pohoch ne wale h yaar"nandi sad
"realy bt kahi hm bicharna jaye caz my mom c is askng me to cmplete my 11th n 12th frm here schl only n u toh want tp go to clge na?" navya sadly sad
"aree fikar nt m alxo going to study here only fo u"nandu sad
"fo me or fo him maanikk?"navya sad
"aree dono k lia"c sad
"sb smjhti hu me"navya sad
"oi vo rha vo ohhh god he so handsm"nandu sad pointng to a coridor
"i hve to agree he is oi nadu why dt u talk to hm on fb?"navya sad
"no yar i had hard he is full of attitude n rude n lrkio k sath bat nhi krta h n vo natasha yaad h c so hot men usko
eshne bhau nhi dea den whum im?"c sad sadly
"aree gve a try atlist
"choor tu bata with whum ur with now?"
"suny,vivek,kartik.."
"okk gve a brk grl etne sare navu hw did u manege?"nadu askd shockngly
"telant grl"navya sad proudly
d strtd going on
OTHER SIDE
"manik did u finish dat prjct?"piush ask manik's gud frnd
"hmm done"manik rpy
"wohooo kb kha kese kia?"
"bs kr lia dude u can copy my1"manik sad smilngly
"thanks yar ur a lyfe saver
MANI POV
i notice dat grl agn noticng me in d mrng prayer den in d coridor c is cute wht m mentioning hr cute like realy m manik i nvr gve attention to grls got dat bt dat grl has sumthng dat attrak me so much bt wht d hell c is so full of attitude i knw othr den followng by her eyes c follow me on fb n etc bt nvr bothr tp tex me once huh...
his tauth were brokn wen he hard d lst bell d schl ovr ball ring he pick his bag n move to d coridoor n find her starng at hm he gve hr a wht luk c nervosely luk at otherside
MANI POV.fo d 1st tym i gave any grl a luk n c move her from
me hw dare c...
Nandu pOv. Aiiapaa c saw me starng at hm thank god he didnt insult me
AT NANDUZ HOME
"msj du na nhi deti hu nhi dehi deti hu noo nhi dena chahiye" nandu ws talkng to hrself typng a hy on fb to manik n lunkng at d send bottn "kya kru kya kru"c ws thnking wen hr mom clld hr n sdnly d send bottn got prese "shiiit shhittt maaa nhii ye mene kya kr dia"c nervosly shut hr leptop n grab hr bag n run to d tution in ol d tution time c ws hell tense
c return home n gathr sum guts n opn hr fb acc n saw a msj frm manik malhotra her eyes big opn c strtd dancng on d bed tuk hr phn n clld navya "navu navu he gave me rpy wohooo"
"like realy wohoo dr m so hpy fo u so wht cnvo did u strtd with him?"
"ntg i jst gve hm hi n he rpyd"
"kya??? Or kya rpy des ushne?"
"avi tk chk nhi kia"
"ohh nadu go n chk n cut d cll" saemg dat c cut d cl
nadu opn d msj n wen c saw d msj her happyns few away

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Nyc start
Hahahaha attitude problm
Lovd it
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awesome update...
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So here it goes another part...

CHAPTER - 2
MANAN=AZNABI
PART2
"so d all time follower fnly gather d guts to tex me?" c ws shock c ws insulted n ambresed readng d rpy he send to her c was in d state of crying c was confused now wht to rpy after thnking fo a while c gather sum corage n type "i didnt get u sry n dis msj is mstkenly gone to u i was sending it to sum1 else"n c end it to him n shut her lep top
on d other side
MANIK POV-
wht fu*k?? hw dare c phele toh c msj me den wen i smply tease her c is showng me attitude saeng it ws a mstke hw dare c fo d 1st time im gvng any grl attention n c grrr END OF POV
so after scoldng her alot in his mind he type "gr8 bt find sum batter xcuzez frm nxt time n ya dt ever repeat ur mstkes agm"n send it to her
aftr gatherng sum more strenth agn c opn her leptop n saw his msj "shiittt he is soo soo rude n full off attitude m nt gona msj him agn in my life"c sadly sad to herself
ring ring
N>Helo
Nv>helo chor tell me wht did he rpy?
N>he is vry bad navu
Nv>kiu kya hua?
N>he is too rude mavu
N>bataye gi kya hua?

N>he is full of attitude navu
Nv>shutup nandu tell me hua kya?
N>he called me his all time follower he sad dat "my all time follower fnly got d guts to tex him" den i feel so ambresed so i tex him d msj i send him
ws a mstke i ws sending it to sum1 else
Nv>ru crazy????
N>wht? Why?
Nv>baivakuf lrki...ahhh why did u sae ki it ws a mstke???he call ed u his follower den u how did he knw u notice him dat mean he also notice u na budhu?? N abt dat guts thing he sad fnly u got d guts to msj him dat means he was waitng fo ur msj sins long na??
N>shiittt navu ur talk has sum points bt i spoiled it all im soo dum
Nv>ur seriously now tex him agn
N>no i cant he strikly sad dt repeat ur mstke evr agn dat he clearly means nvr tex him agn
Nv>gr8 now wht to do srsly ur such a stupid ok find wl talk at schl tomoro now go n sleep itz already 10pm
N>hmm gudnyt

Cll cuts
Nandini Pov-
did navya talks has some logic or?? Na c has sum poinst bt kya farak parta h i toh spoiled all d thngs n oh nooo hw wl i face him tomoro at schl??

god plz save me End of Pov
c sit on her study table n opn a beutifull dairy n strtd writng
"dear dairy dis is d my worst n happyest day of my life happy caz jesa v kuch v ho manik gad rpyd me n worst caz i thng it is d 1st n going to b lst convo of us i had mAssd up all thngs i dt knw how wl i face him 2moro god plz gve me strenth to deal all dis mass whch i had created" c clse her dairy n off to bad

Mrng at schl
"chill mar nadu jo ho gya so hogaya"navya cnsol her
"par navu i cant face him yaar agar samne ah gya toh i wl gone"nadu sad in afraid
"koi nhi agar vo smne ah gya toh jst luk in d opsite drction"navya sad
"hmm"nadu sad
"chal ab mrng prayer meh"navya pul her to d line
d mrng prayer strted as always manan were in d same row bt today her eyes were close had was stret n was not even lunking at manik once n on d other had manik had been use to of getng her attention everyday
MANIK POV- Like realy??? Now c is egnrng me find jo krna h kre as uf i care PoV enD
d princi hold d mike n sad
Princi-sp dr students specialy d 10th studnts i have a spcl thngs is to tell u as u knw ur boads r too clse n after d boads sum of u wl cntinue here n sum may nt so here we r thnking to send u in a picnik fo 1 night stay" princi sad hpyly all d studnts were in 9 clauds dey cant evn imagin dis trip
"nandu suna tune trip picnik dat to night stay wala"navya sad xcetedly
"haa acha h"c jst node
"manik isnt is awsm na pinic"
piuse sad in a hpy tone
"m nt going" manik sad
"wht d hell bro u cant do dis" piuse sadly sad
"sry"manik sad n dere is no othr way to argu with manik so piuse jst noded Princi-ok guyz let me cmplete atlist d thng is ur going like to section 2gethr 10A wiTh 10c n 10B with 10D "wht did he jst sae? 10A with 10C??? Wohoo ab yehi hona baki tha"nadu sad to navya "itz fun yaar caz hm har jagah 10B k sath jate h n dis Time C n ur manik too"navya playfuly sad "ur manik plz he is nt...he nt my type navu he is too rude"nadu sadly sais

"umm so ur type is abhi ha??"navya teasngly sad

***ABHIJEET-d sweet boy n caring nandini bsty actually he use to luv her bt wen c rejected him dey bcme bsty same cls with nandu*** "shut ur mouth navu"nadu sad angryly
"men m in"manik sad
"wht u mean??"piuse ask
"i mean m to joining u in dis picnik"manik sad
"bt avi toh tune kaha tha"piuse asked cnfusngly
"u want me to agn chnge my mind"manik sad irritatedly
"no no men ok find"piuse sad
mrng prayer was ovr n aftr cntinues 3 periodes

d princi oder d 10A student to be on dere cls n 10C students to come in 10A n joind d rest of d students dey wl gude u abt picnic NaDu pOv.-
aippaaa kiu asah kiu kr rhe ho??? Im tryng to avoide him n u ahhh" manik enter her cls with his smark n attitude d grls were going gaga n nandu ws bcmng more n more nervose MANI POV-
nw hw wl u avoide me?? N fo how long??
d students had taken dere sit bt manik n piuse had came late so dey can find d sit to sit... princi- jst acjust with ur mates guyz come on
"ok fine sir i can see dere place left i wl seat dere"mani sad pointing to d space letf in nadu's side NADU poV-wht d god kya ho rha h ye why he is troublng me???
"navu eshe or koi jaga nhi mile?"nandu ask worriedly
"u should b hppy ur crush is siting nxt to u bebz"navya sad "happy???"nadu sad bitng her lips
princi-sure manik u can
nadu pov-
wth a smark he come near me i ws hell scared or u can sae amberese due to insident hpnd yesterday he sit very clse to me as d space was were little i can feel his tauch on my

sholder n waist his arms were tauchng my his waist was tauchng my intentionaly or unintentionaly dat i dt knw bt a electric current ws going thaugh my body i could see navya teasingly smilng on us if i could i wl kill her dere d princi ws instructng us bt here m stugling n seeng my feet agn n agn jst to avoide eye cntc with him i could feel his eyes on me god dis moment i wl nvr gona frgt PoV enD

MANIK POV- i was nt getng sit in d cls rum n saw a little ampty place near dat grl nandi dt knw y i ask d princi can i sit here d princi alxo agree bt wht d hell d grls die to sit with me so clse bt c is behaving like sum alient is going tp sit with her i sit next to her vry clse i think i intentinaly tauch her baby like body whch ws so soft i knw c was shivering by my tauch bt was continuesly luking at her feet or can say avoidng me? I saw her frnd smiling on us i ignored her dt knw why i thnk to tease her so i drop my pen n bent to pick up as c was luking at her feet n d pen alxo spt at her feet roling dwan so fnly

our eyes met i could see her small eyes bcmng big whild whch actually luk cute
"m nt a alient" i sad lukng ito her eyes
"wht?"c rpy fo d vry 1st time i hard her voice whch was vry sweet it can melt any angry prsn mybe me alxo
"wht?wht? Why ru lunking at me like dis atlist spt stareing at me here atlist"i sad
i could see her face turning into red due to shynss n ambresement c didnt rpy n move her eyes frm me soon d cls was over n den other clses alxo aover n itz was time to go home n pack d bags fo d picnic

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Nice one... please continue soon. 😊
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awesome update...
loved it so much...
can't wait to see what happens next...
keep up the good work and continue soon...
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