Originally posted by: Hamlet53
OS.. White that hurts.. ooh..hellloo! hello hello ..loved the reference to the moon, one that is used time and again over the ages by creatives. Lends itself well into the night time setting, when parents across the world from a variety of cultures read or narrate stories to lull their babes to sleep. the lunar presence also holds religious significance in many faiths. The moons beauty also inspires many a sweet thoughts around the emotion of love. The lover and the beloved both compare each other's beauty to the distant moon.wow hammie you're so good with words 👏. The girl here equates her dreams, that her prince charming will come from the moon riding a white steed and whisk her away from her world into a magical world of make belief. Loved how you mentioned the realistic streak in the girl,thanks so much however quite spontaneously she questioningly considers if he could be the one whom she dreamed about?but her own reluctance and distrust robs her from the colour that he promises they seems unreal.. Rosie,the section about her pain being colorless.. is fantastically conveyed! thanks for noticing and appreciating Her pain without colour seemingly, sends wave of her smarting to him too.. her hurt and his quest to help her step out of pain.. inspires him with the novel idea of visualizing her as he desired to see her with colour ,that he only he can paint into her hoary life.. Thank you for yet another warm and appealing story so beautifully written. thanks for your wonderful feedback Loved the tone of ideas and words you have used rosie. yes once again perfect Sunday afternoon reading.. now waiting for another one for next Sunday, much love ,as always yours ,hammie. 13.9.15
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