Vidha OS: White That Hurts - Page 2

OS.. White that hurts.. ooh..hellloo! ..loved the reference to the moon, one that is used time and again over the ages by creatives. Lends itself well into the night time setting, when parents across the world from a variety of cultures read or narrate stories to lull their babes to sleep. the lunar presence also holds religious significance in many faiths. The moons beauty also inspires many a sweet thoughts around the emotion of love. The lover and the beloved both compare each other's beauty to the distant moon.. The girl here equates her dreams, that her prince charming will come from the moon riding a white steed and whisk her away from her world into a magical world of make belief. Loved how you mentioned the realistic streak in the girl, however quite spontaneously she questioningly considers if he could be the one whom she dreamed about?but her own reluctance and distrust robs her from the colour that he promises they seems unreal.. Rosie,the section about her pain being colorless.. is fantastically conveyed! Her pain without colour seemingly, sends wave of her smarting to him too.. her hurt and his quest to help her step out of pain.. inspires him with the novel idea of visualizing her as he desired to see her with colour ,that he only he can paint into her hoary life.. Thank you for yet another warm and appealing story so beautifully written. Loved the tone of ideas and words you have used rosie. yes once again perfect Sunday afternoon reading.. now waiting for another one for next Sunday, much love ,as always yours ,hammie. 13.9.15

Originally posted by: Hamlet53

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<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">OS.. White that
hurts.. ooh..hellloo! ..loved the
reference to the moon, one that is used time and again over the ages by
creatives. Lends itself well into the night time setting, when parents across
the world from a variety of cultures read or narrate stories to lull their
babes to sleep. the lunar presence also
holds religious significance in many faiths. The moons beauty also inspires
many a sweet thoughts around the emotion of love. The lover and the beloved both
compare each other's beauty to the distant moon.. The girl here equates her
dreams, that her prince charming will come from the moon riding a white steed
and whisk her away from her world into a magical world of make belief. Loved
how you mentioned the realistic streak in the girl, however quite spontaneously she questioningly considers if he
could be the one whom she dreamed
about?but her own reluctance and
distrust robs her from the colour that he promises they seems unreal.. Rosie,the section about her pain being colorless.. is
fantastically conveyed! Her pain without
colour seemingly, sends wave of her smarting to him too.. her hurt and his
quest to help her step out of pain..
inspires him with the novel idea of visualizing her as he desired to see her
with colour ,that he only he can
paint into her hoary life.. Thank you for yet another warm and appealing story
so beautifully written. Loved the tone of ideas and words you have used rosie. yes once again perfect Sunday afternoon reading.. now waiting for another one for next
Sunday, much love ,as always yours ,hammie. 13.9.15
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Originally posted by: awida

Thanks for writing these wonderful one shots. I like reading them good to know you enjoy reading them , thanks , coz the make me feel the pain of love, and the joy of struggling for its success.glad you can feel their anguish Viplav won't give up. That color he wants to put on Dhani is now there on her portrait. So there is a hope. absolutely ❤️

Originally posted by: tarun1234567

it was so awesome..

im in love with all your OS..thank you so much 😊

but this White that hurts has attracted me more..

first of all i used to hate this white colour.even i'm not that fond of white . i love red😳.

but slowly dhaani has made me to like this colour..that's nice .

i think this is the power of White colour..

Originally posted by: mechatronics

Just Wonderful 😊

Originally posted by: AISHU183

OH GOSH VIDHA DID NOT MEET IN THIS OS PHYSICALLY EVEN THEN U PRESENTED THEM BEAUTIFULLY.THEIR MONOLOGUES WERE AWESOME. Glad you liked reading about their deep inner thoughts . thanks for the appreciation 😳VIPLAV'S DETERMINATION & DHANI'S HELPLESSNESS WERE WELL PORTRAYED.😃

LOVELY OS ROSE😳R U A WRITER OF SHORT STORIES OR IS IT A HOBBY..its a hobby and i don't consider myself as a writer OF U COZ U WRITE WITH A LOT OF CONVICTION IN UR STORIES😊thanks for believing in my conviction 😳

Originally posted by: Guruvishva

Another lovely OS Rose 😉
Wow it's so beautifully written 😳