TAAREY TS : PYAAR HUA-(COMPLETED)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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PYAAR HUA


Swayum and Rey are BFFs...

Taani (not so much attitude.. but messing up with her is... u guys can guess) and Sharon (attitude.. the Diva) are BFFs...

Swayum is Taani's own Brother...

Rey and Sharon are just Friends...

Swayum and Sharon like each other... Swaron think TaaRey dosent know about this... But our TaaRey knows SwaRon likes each other..

Taani and Rey are..mmm.. friends.? Yes friends.. mmm no no no... umm.. enemies.. yes enemies... ummm... no no.. they are... what they are they too don't know then how do I know..😉

But what if one realizes it... I mean what they are to be... hmmm.. lets see...

Rey : Swayum I think yeh wohi hai...

Swayum : (looking around) kon wohi hai...?

Rey : Kon..?

Swayum : tune hi kaha hai na wohi hai.. so I mean wohi kon hai?

Rey : Are yaar mein apne feelings ke bare mei keh raha hoon..

Swayum : Oh jaisa.. toh tu tere ye wohi waali feelings ke bare mei kaho na, what r u waiting for..?

Rey : Swayum I think... (he stopped and looked at swayum)

Swayum : U think...

Rey : I think I love her dude...(he said keeping his right hand on his heart)

Swayum : (suddenly) Rey tune suna who awaaz...

Rey : Kya awaaz.. maine kuch nahi suna..

Swayum : Itna bada awaaz hua... aur tune nahi suna..

Rey : Tu kya bol raha hai.. I didn't hear any sound..

Swayum : u didn't hear.., dil tootne ka awaaz.. iss college ke saari lakiyonka dil tootne ka sound...

Rey : Swayum..(he glared at swayum..)

Swayum : What Swayum... meine kya galat bola.. aakir mera bestfriend ko pehli baar pyaar ho gaya.. who bhi college ke most wanted guy ko.. the one who is the dream of many girls.. so obviously hearing this their heart will broke na.. (Swayum teased him)

Rey : Shut Up ok (Rey warned him) iska mein kya karoon oh god...


With Shaani

Sharon : Babes.. don't you think aaj kal Rey ka behavior kuch ajeeb hai...

Taani : Sharon tu uss idiot ka naam mat lo.. mujhe tang kare ke alaave use kuch nahi aata.. and I don't feel anything wrong in his behavior..

Sharon : As u say who tujhe tang karata hai tune bhi kya kam karta hai uske saat.. phir bhi tum dono ek dusre ke saath deti ho like friends.. no like best friends but always u guys fight each other but if anyone is hurt the other has pain... actually tu aur Rey is unpredictable and is like a relation undefinable or may be...

Taani : Or may be kuch nahi hai... Hum ise hi hai... Don't think too much ok.. (in mind- kya sharon ko bhi ise lagte hai)

Sharon : lekin mein kuch kaha hi nahi...

Taani : (thinking to change the topic and then she smirked getting something) wohi toh hai.. tu kuch nahi kahte ho... (she stressed the last sentence)

Sharon : (she understood the meaning).. Taani hamara class ka time ho gaya.. chale..(she neatly tried to escape)

Taani : Ha chalo.. (in her mind- ab tu chal dekhti hoon ki tum kab tak ise baghti ho)


With Reyam

Swayum : Ok.. Ok.. Ab bata kon hai jo thumhara dil churake le gaya.. aur kab propose karne waala hai.. (swayum asked excited)

Rey : Propose... hmm.. wohi toh problem hai.. you know its very risky to propose her and dangerouse too...

(Rey went in imagination.. he saw himself getting a black eye getting a tight punch from her after his romantic proposal..)

Rey : Nooo...

Swayum : Rey.. kya hua..??

Rey : Kuch nahi.. I just imagined the after effects on proposing her..

Swayum : Bata na kon hai ye tera dangerous deewani..?

Rey : Yehi use propose kare se zyaada bada risk hai tujhe yeh batana ki who kon hai..

(Again Rey imagined himself with broken legs and broken hands..)

(Rey gulped and looked at swayum)

Swayum : Rey.. yeh baar baar tujhe kya ho raha hai... aur mujhe batane se kya risk hai?

Rey : bcz exactly it is too dangerous... (Rey thought about the guys who have been after her and how swayum dealed with them.. and again he gulped )

Swayum : Rey I think tu pagal ho gaya hai bilkul...

Swayum was thinking who will be that girl and Rey was imagining about his condition after telling swayum.. Suddenly something strike on swayum's head..

Swayum : REY... I WILL KILL YOU (He stood up).. How could you..? U r my best friend and how could you do this...??

Rey : (Rey got scared) Swayum Calm down.. plz.. we can talk.. just listen to me.. it happened and now I cant step back I really love her..

(Not letting him to complete)

Swayum : Calm down... you mean really... mein calm kaise ho sakta hoon.. tu mere Sharon ko.. I cant believe it.. (Swayum thought the girl was Sharon bcz when rey said its dangerous to propose her means Sharon seems tough girl outside)..

Rey : whooo dude.. hold on.. ab yeh Sharon kaha se aaya... Swayum ; (confused ) toh who Sharon nahi hai.. I mean tum pyaar...

Rey : What... tu paagal hai kya mein aur Sharon.. its imposible.. (swayum sighed in relief...).. (Rey smirked) ab sir itna relif kyu ho gaya, thoda der pehle bahut hi hyper tha... kya chakkar hai boss..

Swayum : Ab tu jaankar mera peir mat keench... ok... topic tera hai mera nahi.. ab bata kon hai who..?

Rey : Aur kon hoga meri Taani..(he said dreamingly)

Swayum : oh.. Taani..

(swayum started driking the coke.. suddenly realization stuck him.. the coke choked in his throat and he spit out but it directly fell on Rey's shirt)

Rey : My new Shirt.. Saale tujhe kya ek coke bhi teek se peene nahi aata...

Taani who was entering the canteen and was waiting for Sharon saw the coke scene and started laughing but tried to control maximum but she didn't heard anything...)

Swayum : (SHOCKED) KYA...!!! TU.. TU TAANI SE PYAAR KARTI HO...

Rey : Ha tune suna nahi kya... tune mera new white shirt kharab kar diya.. ab mein uske saamne kaise jaaunga..

Swayum : WHAT...?(He stood up still in shock and due to to the this the table shook and the ketchup again fell on Rey)

Rey : Arggg... Swayum... (Rey glared at him, but swayum was not affected bcz he was still in shock)

Watching the whole scene Taani could not stop she was laughing like hell. Hearing the sound of laugh Rey turned to his right there he saw his angel clad in long white skirt with light pink shade and pinkishwhite top..Rey got lost in her.. She came towards them controlling the laugh.

Taani : Hai guys... Rey yeh kya tu ab tera shirt ko kilate ho... how sweet...

Rey glared at Swayum.. seeing this taani counldnt control and started laughing again.. Swayum was still in shocked state and was nervously laughing.. Rey again started to get lost.. But then it clicked him.. she is laughing.. that too laughing on him.. how dare she... (whatever new may happen in their relationship status but they will never change) Rey stood up.. by this sudden action Taani controlled her laugh her best..

Rey : You... how dare u laugh at me... (Rey shouted in irritation)

Taani : And may I know y I cant laugh..? ise scene dekhe toh obviously koi bhi meri jagah ho who zaroor hasungi.. and I must tell you.. krishnaji ne mujhe mooh diye hai so I will laugh, talk, eat and will do whatever I like.. I don't need anyone's permission ok (she said in attitude and angrily glaring at him, how dare he shout at her..)

But now Rey smirked and came closer to her... dangerously closer... making her heart beat faster and nervous too.. Rey smirked more seeing his affect on her...

Rey : (husky low voice) Do anything...?? Then am ready to experience the talent of ur mouth that is adored with those beautiful petals with mine.. and if u want I can show u what my mouth can do...

Rey slowly moved back.. pink shade spread on her cheek hearing his words.. She looked at him and got lost in him and he too.. Then Taani came back from the trance thus Rey too.. She don't know what to say.. then it hit her Rey zipped up her mouth.. how can this happen.. to her irritation Rey was smirking at her.. he was enjoying her irritated face.. after all she is Taani Shekhawat so how can she lose..

Taani : Oh Really... U dirty-minded stupid man.. haina ladkiya tumse jo fida hokar batakti hoon jaakar unlokon ko dikhao..

(this made him angry)

Rey : You said my mind dirty.. u called me stupid...

Taani : Truth may be sometime bitter to accept.. (now she smirked at him)

Rey : Tum ladkiyaan jaise beautiful dikhti hona, jaise hai hi nahi, uske just opposite ho ander se..

Taani : kaise bhi ho tune mangaya haina ki mein beautiful hoon..

Rey : mein yeh kab kaha ki tum beautiful ho.. meine toh generally kaha tumhe nahi...

Taani : Oh really aur tumhe kya laga tum handsome ho.. tum nab hoot jaise dikte ho...

Rey : Don't you know Taani college ki saari ladkiyaan mujpar marti hai.. ok... aur mein bhoot ho toh tum bhootini ho...

Taani : (angrily..) tum na tum.. tum.. raakhas ho.. demon, devil sabkuch ho...

Rey : Oye kya tune kabi mirror dekha hai... tera yeh baal..(now lost in her..).. you pink cheeks... tera chehra.. teri aankhein.. aur.. aur...

Taani : (confused and angry) : And what huh..??? (this brought rey back)

Rey : (stammering) aur.. aur... I mean.. ya.. ha.. ha tune mirror dekha hai.. tu chudail jaise dikhte ho.. ha chudail jaisi.. koi bhi ladka tumhe dekar bhaag jaayenga...

Taani : (super angry) you... hmmm... you know what... just go to hell...

She stommed her feet and started walking away...

Rey : Yaa.. If you come with me me...

She turned to glare him but he blinked his one eye at her.. her eyes and mouth go wide.. she got irritated and turned away cursing him under breath.. Rey was lost in her.. he found it cute she murmering or cursing him... he was smiling like an idiot..

Here there is a poor soul sitting in shocked and undefinable expression.. No one was giving him attension as if he dosent exist.. He was watching Rey to Taani and Taani to Rey till she went away..He stood up before Rey blocking his sight to see Taani going.. Rey looked at swayum...

Rey : Swayum... are tu kab aaya.. sit na.. sit...

Swayum glared at Rey

Swayum : Rey yeh kya tha... Tu kah rahe the ki u love her and whats happening...

Rey : Yeh bhi pyaar hai boss.. You know.. we are like this.. and we will be like this... making her angry is the cutest sight I hav ever had... Yeh bhi pyaar hai...

Swayum : Tu aur Taani.. ek saath.. yeh kaise hogaya...

Rey : Abe saale.. ab ek saath huye nahi hai.. hone wala hai.. ok..

Swayum : so what ho jaayenga na...

Rey : toh tujhe koi problem nahi hai...

Swayum : mujhe kya problem hoga.. I was shocked bcz u were behaving like enemies always... I didn't expected this...

Rey : But ab tera possessive bhai kaha gaya.. meine socha tu mujhe maar dalenga

Swayum : Y should I do that.. I know you in and out.. tumhare alava use koi bhi handle nahi kar sakta.. aur Taani ko tujse acha koi nahi milega.. After all this is the first time you hav fallen in love and you realized that it is love.. many girls were ready to throw themselves on you and u hav also seen many beautiful girls but u didn't gave a damn to them but ignoring all u felt something like this for Taani.. I think it is a true feeling..

Rey immediately hugged swayum

Rey : U r the best.. u understand me well.. I can never ever get a best friend better than you.. and I feel blessed to get you.. U r right swayum.. its just not an attraction or infactuation.. its love.. am sure.. I can feel it in my heart.. I promise you swayum I will never hurt her and I will always protect her.. love her till my last breath.. u can believe me..

Swayum : I believe you.. but phir bhi agar tune use hurt kiya na..

Rey : tu mujhe maar daalenga..

The both laughed and hugged once more...

Swayum : tune use kab propose karne waala hai...

Rey : I don't know.. but jald hi propose karenga...


With Shaani

Girls washroom

Taani : What does he think of himself? I will kill him one day.. he always irritate me..

Sharon : who are you talking about...?

Taani : uss khadoos ke bare mein aur kon hoga.. college ki saari ladkiyan jo marti hai na us par.. meine toh use roka toh nahi na unlogon ke paas jaane keliye..

Sharon : are you jelous Taani...

Taani : mein jelous...

Sharon : Taani don't act too much.. accept karo ki u like... mmm no no no.. you love him... I know u do...

Taani : Oh ho.. toh main acting kar rahi hoon toh tum kya kar rahi ho...

Sharon : Kya karoon I am waiting for ur idiot brother to propose me...

Taani : mein bhi iskeliye hi wait kar rahi hoon... who bilkul khadoos hai... I think I hav tobe single for life time... kab use yeh realize hoga yeh krishnaji bhi nahi jaanti hai...

Sharon : Hmm... lets see kab tak who log hume wait karwate hai..

Taani : ha... chalo class hai ab..

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JUST A THOUGHT CAME IN MY MIND...

avoid the mistakes pls...

GUYS LEAVE UR VIEWS...

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PART 2

Edited by DTaaRey3 - 9 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago
#2
oh gosh
that was hilarious
TaaRey cute tom & jerry fight
rey realizing his feelings
shaani waiting for reyam to propose them
very well written
eager to read next part
update it asap
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Posted: 10 years ago
#3
superb
so entertaining

loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago
#4
amazing start
love their cute fights
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome update plz keep writing like thid😉😛 loved it plz continue soon thanx for pm
Posted: 10 years ago
#6
Fun stuff..
Both love eachother but r like cats :P fighting all time..waiting for rey's proposal and love in fight.. ! :P
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Posted: 10 years ago
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full on entertainment bara h is story me to
love
drama
hate
tease
sb kuchh yr
i really loved it
update soon dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
#8
superb story.
loving rey and taani
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Posted: 10 years ago
#9
awesome new thought , loving it , well waiting 4 next
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Posted: 10 years ago
#10
damn interesting
lovely concept
taarey n all ones
scenes are fab
upt soon

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