FF mothers daugthers and father pride.

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This will short story about Sneha and Amaya. It regarding current track I know alot lot of people hate track but I love Amaya more then ever. She selfless she has barried her happiness and love Mantu for her family pride and respect I think it take guts to do that..Another word love is scafise Manya also remind of enterial and divien love story of Radha Krishna they never got married but they lived each other hurt as one that Manya they have that understanding and love. Anyway getting back my stories it how CG get better after a month and start talking and he actual tell Sneha what happen. Sneha feel bad for cursing Amaya wishing she was dead but depend she love her she didnt mean anything by it, Mantu there to and heard everything. He realise that his Amaya had scafise her happiness for others he feel bad for but same proud of her. But it to late Rama mum and three witches has set fire house Mathur house and only person is Amaya who unconsions in kitchen. Sneha and Mantu arrive at home and see from outside home Amaya is in kitchen and cough Mantu run save her. Mantu take Amaya out the house and him Sneha rush Amaya to hosiptal. Amaya lying unconsion on Sneha and Sneha struching Amaya say Beta im sorry for all hush word curse I said please beta forgive and wake up. When Sneha and Mantu reach hospital Amaya rush into operation tether and few hours later the doctor inform that Amaya still danger and next 24hrs are creatcal and chances of Amaya serving is nill. So this basic story what guys think if u like it the i continue please leave ur feedback thanks

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Aaah you were in the EHMMBH forum na? I remember you! Sorry off track.
Nice concept would like to read it.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I would also love to read it...
Continue soon 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter 1
"Sneha beta come to me I want say something." Ganjand said to Sneha, as Sneha come near him and sat next to him holding his hand " Yes bhaji what is it." Ganjand smiled said " Please bring Amaya beta I want talk her." Sneha got shock at father was asking, looking shock face his daughter spoke "I know beta what you thinking after what she done but beta what she did was for the family sake. Sneha she love you a lot and Rachita a lot believe me." Sneha couldn't believe her father siding with selfish that girl as Sneha spoke " No bhaji that girl only think about herself no one else, she love Rama that why did this betrayed me and her sister I never forgive for that and she was curse of you current state." Ganjand cried and said " No beta your wrong please don't make the same mistake I made with you 25 years ago you are misunderstanding Amaya. I will tell what happen when I had stroke." As Ganjand explain how Rama mum got to know that Rishi was not Rachita really dad, and she was gone expose the truth in front media make ruin the family name. And how he had beg Rama mum not do so, so Rama mum had put two conditions which where if Rishi Mathur really daughter got married and she would get the hawali then she won't say a thing. And Ganjand explain how Amaya sacrificie everything for family name and her love Mantu. Mantu standing Ganjand called and said " beta I was wrong about you, altough I was in coma I could hear everything and sense everything, I heard you tell Amaya you love her one day before wedding and I seen in Amaya eyes love for you I'm sorry beta I never understood but beta I seen how stick by her. I seen the pain and love you have amaya. Please Senha you have to save amaya from that hell she living" Sneha was shock at truth reveals her how what amaya did for family and her, she curse herself for not trusting amaya all pain curse amaya she all alone yet she never a word tears roll down sneha face as she broke down completely.

To be continue please leave your comment until next time bye.
Edited by indian10 - 10 years ago
indian10 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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No comments you guys don't like it
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Posted: 10 years ago
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its good... would like to read more... update soon

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