ManYa FF: ISHQ ki Takkath...Part2 updated 23/09

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Hi ..
After the rama and amaya marriage track all fans of manya and rara are totally depressed. .so I thought to write a story wats gng to happen in their lives after marriage.. this marriagr track has gone veyind control so I wished the real track goes in this way..
I wish u all like it..
sorry before in this I am gng to add EMA scenes .. those scenes are gng to play major role reveling the reason behind marriage..

any kind of feedback are accepted..with love..😳

PART1

Mantu was shocked after marriage and could not concentrate on any thing..he is just living like a dead person with no fefeelings. ..the only question in his mind was how can amaya do this to him when he saw in her eyes the spark that she loves him..he need an answer from amaya and he is unable to bear the pain in his heart..hhe cannot express or share his feelings and situation to anyone..at present his state of living is totally typiical..hhe cant rest at home nor concentarte on work..wwere ever he goes or whom ever he see he just felt like it is amaya who is in front of him.. to gain peace he thought to visit temple and pour his pain in front of mahadev..because he is the only one whom he can share his feelings..

amaya saas asked her to go temple and do pooja.. after reaching temple amaya recalled her past how mantu heared her talking with mahadev..and gave the suggestion that money is not imp.. suddenly she saw mantu was crying and expressing his feelings abt her to mahadevv...sshe thought not to dusturb or interfer and stood still..wwhen he was expressing abt her tears were rolling from her eyes and her heart was filling with happiness and she felt like to hug mantu..

mantu was telling abt how their hatred to friendship to love changed towards her..bby recalling past memories..he was describing each and every moment from the day 1 when they met eachother how they fought and how their friendship started and how their shared their secerts abt their family ..sweet memories ..how they cared and respect each other feelings..aand the day he felt that he was in love with her ..hhow he climbed to her room to see her even if they fought with eachother.. how his love made him to break down into shop at night to help her...

suddenly he stopped and questioning mahadev how could he do to him that when she was not in her destiny yy did he brought her into her life and made his life hell..hhe said till now I haven't recalled from the past when I have lost my parents and left with chiklu..he was missing the love of his parents a lot..I felt since u have given so much pain in past in order to fill that place u brought her in my life but again u made me feel like I am unlucky person on earth to gain love...how could u take his love the love that he has seen in her eyes.. he reminded mahadev that he never asked anything from himself and he was adjusting his life with wat he has given and never complainted abt any thing else..the only wish he asked for himself was to give his love amaya to him.. how could he be so cruel ..I thought u gave ur blessing when ur malla has fallen on both of us ..I felt u have choosen amaya for me.. was his love not pure towards her..

a devotee was breaking coconut a piece of it has hit with a force on mantu head..he hasn't felt any pain because the pain in his heart is more than the physical .. ..amaya was shocked to see mantu talking to mahadev as if nothing has happened to him..she saw drops of blood on his shirt and rushe towards him shouting his name mantu ..but mantu is in deep discussion with mahadev he couldn't hear anything he lost all his senses. .his pain in heart is dominating ...aamaya tore apiece from her paalu (ssaree) and she was cleaning his wound..her touch made him back inthis words..ffor few seconds he couldn't understand wat she was doing...
after finding wat happened to him he gently stopped her and said she has no right to do anything and yy she is bothered ..sshe knew he is hurt by his behaviour but not listening to his words she is busy cleaning the wound..tthen he asked u r thinking abt physical wound but y u haven't thougt abt the pain in his heart...sshe was not responding..ssuddenly he stood and was abt to leave but amaya caught hold of his hand and stopped him that he needs bandage because he is bleeding.. he is ready to die instead of bearing this pain given by her..by this answer amaya stopped him by placing her finger on his lips and said u have bright future and she is not the right person who can get his love..he said I know amaya I loved the right person..his bleeding was increasing and not allowing amaya to tie bandage...amaya was loosing all her control on her feeling by seeing his blood..mantu said untill u not give me the reason behind marriage i am not gng to do bandage ..his stubborness made amaya tell the secret behind marriage..

she said she cant say at this place and asked to take her to an open place were no one can hear their secret ..aafter tieing bandage to his head he took to his home..hhis home were she revealled that rachi is not superman daughter how gc was begging infront of sumitra and how she was blackmailing gc that sge was gng to reveal the secret to media and her condition for not revealing the secret..
mantu was shocked and could not understand wat he was hearing..and was shocked how a mother can spoil son future for sake of revenge... amaya couldn't understand anything from his face expressions..tthe next moment mantu gave a tight hug and said I am proud of u amaya and mahadev has given him a right person in his life..tears were rolling from both of their eyes. making her calm and said she took wrong decision ..aamaya was shocked to hear it from mantu ..i know u r situation was typical tounderstand at that time but she has no right to take a decision on behalf of everyone with considering her mom mainly..and how could u think that rachi is not sneha daughter ..have u talked to her abt this without any proof u believed sumitra words and seeing gc u thought its true..in my view u dont know abt sneha past neither u were not ready to ask her ..the truth of rachitha will be out one or the other day ..how could she believed sumitra and her words ..u never thought how sumitra knew that rachi is not superman daughter.. if u have told abt these conditions to ur mom the situatuon every one suffering might not occuredd..
amaya haven't spoken any word and was thinking how she became so dump..wwhile she was leaving mantu said now ur problem is also mine so I will inform u wat to do next..aand reminded don't take any decision in haste...a smile has occured on her face when he said those words..



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Posted: 10 years ago
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Start updating.. we re ready to read anything about Manya
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Update soon dear...
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exactly ... anything about manya... I m always ready...
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Pls update soon, missing ManYa so much... 😭
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Originally posted by: Adeebahussain

Start updating.. we re ready to read anything about Manya

updated part 1 ..thank you for your support..😊
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Originally posted by: Fanfictious_KJ

Update soon dear...
ManYa storied are just magical...
I am gonna read everything that has ManYa...
Missing ManYa so much... Please update soon...


update part1..hope u like. it..😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: wrizaa

exactly ... anything about manya... I m always ready...


updated part1..hope u like it..😊
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Originally posted by: arohijsp

Pls update soon, missing ManYa so much... 😭


updated part 1..hhope u like it...😊
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Good start yaar..
Please do continue. .
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