Juda Hoke Bhi Tu........ Epilogue Pg 11 - Page 11

Originally posted by: DivanIsh

i was dying to read this one but wasn't not getting the right chance

aaj aap toh busy ho toh socha aapki story hi padh lun
Teri is line se mujhe en(un)tangled ka ek scene yad agaya...guess which one...
Hint: Mai ta baita kol tere😉

ek baar mein puri padh li and ab main soch rahi hoon kyun padhi
😲

nahi nahi aisa sochne ki galti mat karna ki mujhe pasand nahi aayi
Tune to dara hi dia🤢

main yeh islie soch rahi hoon coz yeh meri favorite ban gayi...ab aap aage kuch bhi likho i will not be able to stop myself from comparing it with this one
Ermmm...ab mai kya kahun? Is baat pe nachun ke ye tera favrt ban gaya...Ya is baat par ro dun ke aage ki meri sari mehnat bekar jayegi😉

i remember aapne kaha tha ki this was ur first story and not much ppl were reading this one...i guess all the people who have missed this are fools me being one of them
Oye😛

This was so beautiful ki no words can do justice to it
Thnk u re😳

YHM forum pe hi maine ek story ko kaha tha ki that story is my second fav...first fav Ek hazaron mein meri behna hai forum mein thi

i would like to change all my words now...THIS STORY IS MY FAVORITE

Do u even realise wat this line has done to me? I am on cloud 9, 10, 11, 12, 13 etc etc
BTW whixh is ur secnd fav story on YHM? My bookworms are eager to knw😃

i don't know the reason but i am just in love with this one...kabhi reason samajh aaya toh bataungi zarur
Mujhe intezar rahega...
Waise kehte hain to love without reason is pure love...To mai samjhungi ke dis one is pure love

a writer succeeds when he is able to bring out reader's emotions and all the while i read this...there was a smile on my face and tears in my eyes...ab aap samajh hi gayi hongi ki kitni pasand aayi mujhe yeh

This was perfect didi and i love it...i don't know how many times i will read it again and again
Thnk u re...u made my day😃

i actually feel sad also because ab mera kisi aur story mein utna jyada interest nahi aayega...yeh story ander sama gayi hai

ek bhi aisi cheez nahi hai jo main yahan mention kar sakun ki i liked this i liked that kyunki har ek cheez har ek shabd...agar ek coma ya full stop bhi hai toh woh bhi mujhe behad pasand aaya

Ye kuch zyada nahi hogaya?😉 Koi gal nahi...I accept it humbly😆

this was the best thing i ever read and i mean my words

this will always be special for me

i just want to go on and on to praise this one par baaki taareef personal chat mein...not meant for everyone to read 😊😊😊
👍🏼

Originally posted by: maanvir