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Posted: 9 years ago
sorry wrong post😆
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What is this janki mazra.
Love the part.
And how sujata taunt annapurna.
Agar woh serial mein bhi essa hota toh kitna accha hota.
Shekhar and dadi wanted to help swara.
But she refuse it.

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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome.. thanks for the pm
Posted: 9 years ago
Started watching Swaragini today & still catching up with old episodes but falling love with this😳
and your SS taking my hopes high for serial😆 hope to see this happening in serial too
read all the chapters in one go and i'm mesmerized with this. love ragini's mama-mami❤️. drolling on SwaSan scenes☺️ every scene i can actually feel it happening. waiting to see what's the surprise. it's mad hard to wait for next chapter.
you're amazing writer.👏⭐️ egarly waiting to read next part. Continue soon and if possible do PM me😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Lifez_Beautiful

Ragini's mom??!! 😲Wow !! This is a completely unexpected twist!! cant wait to know the secret behind this now! Update soon dear!! 😃

Thnx for the PM! 😳

Thanks dear...
And wait for the next chapter for the secret😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: blackkitty

What is this janki mazra.
Love the part.
And how sujata taunt annapurna.
Agar woh serial mein bhi essa hota toh kitna accha hota.
Shekhar and dadi wanted to help swara.
But she refuse it.

Thanks for your comment😉
For the Janki majra wait for the next update😆
Even I want Sujata to support Swara
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: bgscribe

Awesome.. thanks for the pm

Thanks dear😉
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: nRiya

Started watching Swaragini today & still catching up with old episodes but falling love with this😳

and your SS taking my hopes high for serial😆 hope to see this happening in serial too
read all the chapters in one go and i'm mesmerized with this. love ragini's mama-mami❤️. drolling on SwaSan scenes☺️ every scene i can actually feel it happening. waiting to see what's the surprise. it's mad hard to wait for next chapter.
you're amazing writer.👏⭐️ egarly waiting to read next part. Continue soon and if possible do PM me😊

OMG so long comment😳
Thanks dear🤗
I will add you in my PM list and will try to update soon😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
CHAPTER
MAHA EPISODE
SUPRISES...

Next Morning in MM
Dining table:
Sujata: bhaisa kal jo hua woh theek na hua...iss ghar ka toh Ragini ne tamasha hi bana diya...

Ragini: (crying) Chachiji...

Annapurna:Sujata bas karo ab...

Sujata: na jiji...ab main chup na rahugi mahre bete bahu ne galti ki toh unko ghar se bahar nikal diya...janti hoon main... Swara mane pasand na hai...par ek baat to pakki hai jiji ki woh jab se je ghar me ayi hai usne apki bahu ki tarah pure samaj ke samne hume bejat toh na kiya...
(Looking at Durga Prasad)bhaisa ya toh mahre beta aur bahu pure ijjat ke saath apne ghar ayege ya phir apka beta aur bahu iss ghar se bahar...

Ram:Sujata chup ho jao...

Sujata: kyu chup rahu main aap toh bas apne bhaisa ki ha me ha milate rahiye...har bar main Hi apne bete ke liye kyu tadpu...

Annapurna: Sujata Sanskar mera bhi beta hai...

Sujata:(angrily) rehne dijeye jiji aap apna yeh natak...

Ragini:bas kijiye aap log...dekha aap sabne Swara ki wajah se hum sab lad rahe hai...woh ghar pe nahi hai par phir bhi ghar pe kalesh ho raha hai...

Sujata:(angrily) bas kar Ragini iss bar woh Bangalan nahi tu galat hai...bhaisaab ab aap phesla kijeye ya to Sanskar Swara ghar ayege ya Ragini Lakshya ghar ke bahar...aur agar apne phesla na kiya toh main hi yeh ghar chod ke chali jayuge...
Everyone is shocked...

Ragini (thinking) Agar Swara ghar pe aa gaye toh woh hume ghar se bahar nikal kar hi rahege...

DP:theek hai Sujata agar tumhari yehi zid hai toh Swara Sanskar iss ghar me aa sakte hai...

Sujata: ek min bhaisa mahra Sanskar aur Swara ghar toh ayege par puri izzat se maan samman se...

Durga Prasad agrees and asks everyone for preparations

AP:yeh sab kya tha Sujata...

Sujata:jiji insaaf hua aaj mahre saath...
Mera beta aaj ghar wapis ayega...

Ragini (goes to Sujata and whispers in her ears)yeh aap theek nahi kar rahi hai...

Sujata: tu manne dhamki de rahi hai...(she goes to her room and brings Sugan ki thaal with red Lehenga and jewellery) Parineeta aur Ragini yeh lo Swara ko tayar kar do...

Ragini gets angry but puts a fake smile and goes with Parineeta...

In the tent:
Sanskar: (on phone) yes mom sab ready hai na???

Sujata: tu chinta na kar ab toh mahri bahu ke ghar ane ka waqt aa gaya hai...

Sanskar: (smiling) thanks mom I love you...

Swara gets fresh and was drying her hair... Sanskar was mesmerized seeing her in a pink anarkali...

Sanskar: Shona 5 min me tumhara surprise aa raha hai...

Swara: Sanskar bolo na kya hai surprise???? Please na...

Sanskar: 5 min me tumhara first surprise ayega...

5 min later...

Ragini and Parineeta come inside the tent...

Swara: Bhabhi Ragini aap log yaha par...

Parineeta: woh papaji ne tumhe aur Sanskar bhai ko wapis ghar lane ke liye hume bheja hai...

Ragini: woh Chachiji ne papaji ko ghar chodni ki dhamki jo di...

Swara is shocked and she sees at Sanskar...

Parineeta: aisi koi baat nahi hai...Swara please tayar ho jao...Sujata Chachiji chahti hai ki aap dono ka swagat dhoom dham se ho...

Swara goes and hugs Sanskar... And whispers in his ears:thank you so much...

Ragini: Swara chalo tayar ho jao...

Swara gets ready and Sanskar gets lost in her beauty...

Sanskar: beautiful... Bikul pari kaisi lag rahi ho...


Swara blushes and they go to MM

In MM mainson:
Sujata does Swara's Aarti and takes her in...Swara was about to enter but Sujata stops her...

Sujata: Swara hamare idhar ek rasam hai ki jab dulhan aati hai to apne pati ki bahoo me andar aati hai...

Ragini: kya????

Sujata: woh thari aur Lakshya ki shadi jin halato me hui isliye jiji ne je rasam na nibhayi...par ab me chahti hoon mahra beta aur bahu puri riti riwaz se aye...

Annapurna also agrees with her...

Sanskar picks her up in his arms...
Lakshya goes away getting angry and Ragini becomes jealous as Swara was getting more attention then her...

Then Swara does other rituals also...

On dining table:
Sanskar (whispers in Swara's ears):time for second surprise...(saying loudly) Bade papa mujhe apki permission chahiye

DP:kis bare me Sanskar...

Sanskar: Bade papa me chahta hoon ki Swara apni padhai phir shuru kare...Swara MA in Literature karna chahti thi...

Swara is shocked... Everyone in hall is also surprised by Sanskar's sudden demand...

DP:hmmm...Sanskar tum theek keh rahe ho iss bahane se Swara ka dyaan bhi batega aur ghar me bhi shanti rahege...

Lakshya: par papa phir mujhe lagta hai Ragini ko bhi padai shuru karni chahiye...

AP:Nahi Lakshya Ragini ek gharelu ladki hai use tum iss tarah aaj ke zamane ke mat banao...

Sujata: je sach kaha apne jiji...ab mahri modern bangalan bahu ko hi je sab shobe hai...Ragini tu toh Sanskari Marwari bahu hai...

Ragini: Sach kaha aap logo ne me waise bhi padh likh ke kya karu???? Thodi me naukri karne wali hoon???

She goes away to her room...and calls dadi...

Ragini: hello dadima

Dadi: (Controlling her anger) bol ladoo

Ragini:dadima sab galat ho raha hai...Swara wapas ghar aa gayi hai dadima...

Dadi: ke????

Ragini: ha dadima hame bohat dar lag raha hai...

Dadi: ladoo jab tune koi galti na kari hai to tanne dar kis baat ka?????aisa toh nahi tu galat hai par dosh sara uss bangalan ki nati par daal rahi hai...kyunki agar yeh sach hua to me thara saath na dekar Swara ka saath dungi...

Ragini: dadima yeh aap kya keh rahi hai hum sahi hai humne kuch na kiya...ab hum phone rakte hai hume maa bula rahi hai...

Ragini ab hum kya kare ab toh dadima bhi hamari madad nahi karegi...

A laugh is heard from behind...

Janki in white Saree and open hair...

Janki:kya soch rahi ho tum... ki kon karega tumhari madad

Ragini: (Afraid)chali jaiye yaha se aap...

Janki: apni galti maan lo warna tum sab kuch kho dogi...Lakshya... Maa...baba...Shekhar... Apna parivar...janti ho Ragini Sharmista ki maa ne tumhe shrap diya tha...
(Coming close to her and whispering in her ear)woh tumhe lag chuka hai...

Ragini (closes her eyes)Nahi humne Lakshya ko pane ke liye bohat kuch kiya hai aap humara kuch nahi bigaad sakti...

There is no one in her room
Ragini: yeh kya ho raha hai humare saath... Hume baar baar maa kyu dikh rahi hai...Maa humara bhram hai ya hakikat...


In Swasan's room:
Sujata: Swara humara plan bilkul sahi jaa raha hai...

Swara: janti hoon mom...(looking at balcony)tum andar aa sakti ho...

A girl comes in...

Swara: thanks Anjali


Anjali: please Swara ab mujhe. Thanks kehkar paraya mat karo...me yeh sab apni bua Janki ke liye kar rahi hoon...

Swara (hugs her):Ragini tumhari sagi bua ki beti hote hue bhi tum mere madat kar rahi ho...

Anjali: Swara please aisi baat karo...me sirf sach ka saath de rahi hoon... Waise bhi mom dad kehte hai me bua ki carbon copy hoon...

Sanskar: Anjali jab hum ne tumhe pehli baar mandir me dekha tha uss din hum toh darr Hi gaye...

Sujata: aur iss hi baat par yeh plan bana uss Ragini ko darane ka...Maine iss ko bar bar balcony se isko Ragini ke kamre me bheja aur Ragini ko daraya...

Anjali receives a msg...

Anjali: ab me chalti hoon mera driver aa gaya hai mom dad wait kar rahe hoge...

Sujata: ab tum dono bhi aaram karo...

Sujata takes away Anjali hiding from everyone...

Swara: thanks Sanskar...

Sanskar: 356...

Swara: kya????

Sanskar: tumhara thanks ka count...

Swara: sorry...

Sanskar: 493...

Swara: kya????

Sanskar: tumhara sorry ka count...

They both laugh...

Lakshya was passing by the room... He sees them laughing and becomes sad...

Lakshya:Swara tum mujhe itni jaldi bhool gaye...main ab tak aage nahi badh paya hoon...

He goes away from there

Sanskar: ready to join college... Tumhara admission process is completed...

Swara: very excited...

Sanskar:(sleeping on bed and switches on the AC)aaj achi neend ayege...

Swara: hey bhagwan tum yeh room ko kya Shimla banane ka irada hai?????

Sanskar:Shona please so jao tumhe college jana hai aur mujhe office...

Swara: Good night Sanskar...

Sanskar: (kisses her forehead) Good night...

They both sleep...



Ab aage kya hoga????too tired to think so m also sleeping suggest me something...

Keep commenting and liking...
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Posted: 9 years ago
it just so dreamy😳love the way Sanku making place for Swara in his house and completing her wishes😊and sujata too helping him..wanted more romantic Swasan scene ☺️
update next part soon
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