Broken Ends... AR (short story) STOPPED

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Posted: 10 years ago
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B r o k e n E n ds...


T e a s e r


Saalon lag gaye mujhe yahan tak pohochne mein...aur tumhare beti ke ek ghatiya harkat ne..sabkuch khatam kar dia...poore hospital mein loug isi
baare mein baat kar rahe hai...chee..sharam ati hai mujhe yeh sochte huey bhi ke Shashank Gupta ki beti kabhi aisa kuch kar sakti hai..

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Ridhima...meri baat suno...tum

Mom..plz...aajtak maine wohi kiya jo papa nahi chahte thay...lekin ab..wohi hoga jaisa woh chahte hai...apne faislon ka nateeja bhugat chuki hu

main...ab agey wahi karungi jo papa ko theek lagega...

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1 year later...

congratulations...finally..Im soo happy for u dude...

thanks champ...mujhe laga ke tu nahi ayega

arey aise kaise nahi aunga...mere eklaute best friend ki shaadi hai bhai...ana to tha hee na...

shaadi nahi engagement...

raoool...

congratulations...finallly tuney shaadi ka faisla le hee liya...

Atul joshi,rahul Garewall and Armaan Mallik...best friends since their internship days...

Atul-Kripa bhabhi is looking so beautiful na...

Rahul-yeah...

Armaan and rahul excused themselves for a drink while atul joined in a conversation with some random colleague...

Rahul-armaaan...tuu khush hai na

Ar-yeah...meri life ka sabse important day hai aaj...khush kyun nahi honga...

Rahul-yeha right...armaan mallik...tujhe mujhse behtar aur koi nahi janta...achi tarah se janta hu main ke yeh decision kyun liya tuney

Ar-rahul tu...bakwaas mat kar...

Rahul-haa bakwaas hee to karta hu main...sach hamesha karva hee hota hai

Ar-kaunse sach ki baat kar rha hai tu...

Rahul-uss sach ki jisey tu jhutlaane ki koshish kar rha hai...armaan...tu yeh shaadi is liye kar rha hai na taakey apneaap ko tasalli de sakey ke tune usey

bhulaa diya hai

Ar-kiski baat kar rha hai tu

Rahul-usiki jisse tu kabhi paagalon ki tarah pyar karta tha...kya pata aaj bhi

Ar-dimaag kharab nahi hai mera...auron ki tarah past mein nahi...aaj mein jeeta hu main...aur jaha tak baat is decision ki hai to Kripa bohot achi ladki

hai...meri achi dost hai...humare khayaalat bhi milte hai...so

Rahul-so thats it?yeh wajah kafi hai teri ussey shaadi karne ki

Atul-arey tumloug yahan kya kar rahe ho...koi secret hai kya

Ar-raool ka dimaag kharab ho gaya hai...muskaan se pit tey pit tey yeh haal bana liya hai apna...sambhal isey...

Atul-oye kya hua

Rahul-I wish abhi bhi time hai.. tujhe samajh ajae ke... tu...chahta kya hai..

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Greenwater Hospital,Newyork


Iam sorry I tried my best..but...I dont think ke yeh case ab main handle kar paunga...I already suggested you Dr angad...now rest is up to you...

He entered the room and saw her pale face...sleep derived since days...specially last night...how they got baby Ria into emergency last night...and now

the little one was sleeping...if only her mumma could catch some sleep...

angad...

kkkya...kya bola doctor ne...sab theek to hai na...Ria...theek ho jayegi na woh


huhhh...RD...calm down...and sit...

angad ?

An:tumhe pata hai right Ria ki medical condition kya hai...pichle mahiney humein jo bhi pata chala uske baad...

R-to?

An-to...Dr Sen se baat kar li hai maine...and he cant handle this case any more...RD we need to take her to India...trust me...I have people there

aur...specialists hai mere jaanne waalon mein and they can


R-NO...

An-what...

R-I said no...main India nahi ja sakti...

An-u know what u have lost it...tumhe andaza nahi hai Dr ridhima gupta ke tumhari is stupid zid ki wajah se ek choti bachchi ki jaan ja sakti hai

R-kuch nahi hoga meri beti ko...I can take care of her...

An-u cant damn it...RD tum...samajh kyun nahi rahi...yahan koi aur doctor hai nahi jo Ria ke case ko handle kar sakey...its a very rare case...we r losing

time...and we cant afford this...please...ek baar Ria ke liye sochke dekho

She stared at her lifeless doll and closed her eyes which were soaked with tears...she can never think of anyone or anything beyond her daughter...she

was her life...only precious thing for her...she took her small baby hand and kissed it with twice thrice...

An-RD...

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I hope Iam left with readers?šŸ˜†Well sorry for past mistakes and if this can make you happy Iam all ready for it...hit likes and comments must for pms..
-LaddoošŸ˜›

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Posted: 10 years ago
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I n d e x

Teaser Pg 1

Part 1 Pg 2

Part 2 Pg 5
Edited by Laddoo.Phaddoo - 10 years ago
Ruppkotha thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice start
Loved it whole
Continue soon😳
Tc
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Armaan and kripa engaged :o
Riddhima has a baby...
Is angad also riddhima's husband ??

Continue soon !!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome update and loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Interesting concept... a lil confused about Riddhima angad relationship but vo jaldi hi clear ho jayega as u update next part which I hope is going to be SOOON! :p

Waiting eagerly to see them to the people they r meant to be with ;)

Great start and would love to read on... so do continue soon :* :*


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey nice storyline
so ridz is going india fo ria but I thnk ria is ammy's daughter.
thnx fr d pm
please continue sooon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Didu AR pe likh re ho??😲
Arsh/kash ko bhool gayee😭
Nice. .
Continue soon...
Thanks for the pm...
Please arsh story bhi continue karo
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome
A new ff
Waiting for more
Updates soon

Luv
Kj

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