VIDHA SS: THE BANGLES part 2 updated - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: kashish_777

Hi guys...

I'm overwhelmed by your responses...😳😳
Thanks everyone for your support and love...
And aishu said me to extend it...so here's a next part...😳😳




" she is not a widow..."

"Hum vidhwa hai..."

" arey chooriyan pasand hai toh pehen lena chahiye tha...hum sirf uske liye laye the..."

"Wo humare liye chooriyan kyon layega?"

"Humari man kiya, iss liye hum uske liye chooriyan laye..."

"Hum wo nahi pehen sakte the...hume aise hi apni zindagi bitaani hogi...wo samjhta kyon nahi?"

" hum usse aise nahi dekh sakte...hume usse sajte hue dekhna hai...wo samajhti kyon nahi??"

"Ye sab paap hai..."

"Ye koi paap nahi hai..."

"Yeh safed hi ab humari taqdeer hai..."

"Uski taqdeer hi mujhe badalna hai..."

"Hum par koi rang nahi char sakta!!"

"Uss par hum rang charayenge..."

"Hey shivji hume taqat dena, hum kahi bhatak na jaye..."

"O hello godji, agar sun sakte ho toh please sun le na...thodi si hi sahi, mera help kar dena, taki hum uss ladki ke sar se ye dharm, paap punya ka bhoot utar sake!!"

"Aur u ladka bhi na..."

" aur wo ladki bhi na..."

"Rakshas!!"

"Shikayat ki poorya, MERI shikayat ki pooriya..."




So guyz, wrote in a hurry...😕
don't know how it came out...
Thanks everyone...
Thanks aishu specialy...😊
comments are anticipated...😊
Love,
pratiti...

Wonderful update,it was awesome.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22
hi kashish.. just knew I had not read.. chorriyon ka part.. thanks for the pm,alert.. bas ek request..will you kindly post the link too.. that's my lovely girl😊
now as far as part 2 is concerned.. it was lighter and witty.. i think I enjoy the live warm conversation between them.. can visualize them both against the background of Banaras..dressed in a white sari.. whose widow was she? is still an issue with both readers and viewers
keep writing and spreading joy to us..
love hammie
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