Honge juda na hum...swalak story...part 2 updated on page 2

Hiii guys...as u all know i am huge fan of swalak...but in swaragini there is least hope of swalak union...so we fans imagine our swalak as couple nd live their love through so many FF OS SS etc...so guys for the first tym i also want to try an imaguned storyline for our swalak from the current track of swaraGini...i just want to know ur opinion guys...may I????

Originally posted by: mahi_anya

Hiii guys...as u all know i am huge fan of swalak...but in swaragini there is least hope of swalak union...so we fans imagine our swalak as couple nd live their love through so many FF OS SS etc...so guys for the first tym i also want to try an imaguned storyline for our swalak from the current track of swaraGini...i just want to know ur opinion guys...may I????

ofcourse will love to read...😃

That would be wonderful.

do post it yaar!! i would love to read it 😃😃

yes..would love to read 😃

Here I go with my story... Scene-1: after the swasan sindoor incidence laksh in his room thinking about his past memories with swara... BM- rang the noor Tha jab kareeb tu Tha... In The tent:- swara looking herself in mirror nd her sindoor nd remembering how sanskaar put sindoor in front of everyone... Tears falling from her eyes... She takes out laksh's pic from her bag nd crying terribly... Sanskaar watching her from outside the tent... He too has tears in his eyes... BM-hamari adhoori kahani ... Ragini in kitchen talking to herself- sanskaar NE swara ki maang bhar di ... Iska matlb Wo dono sach me pati patni ban gaye...yani ab laksh ji sirf hmare h... And she started smiling but then she realized onE thing... Agar swara aur sanskaar ki sach me bhi shadi ho gyi tab to use ab iss ghar se koi ni nikaal sakta...yani ab wo hmara sach bahar lane me koi kasar ni choregi...aur laksh ji ko humse door kar degi...ni hum aesa ni hone de sakte...hume kuch karna hoga... Scene- LAKSH's ROOM... laksh- swara...meri swara kisi aur ki ho gyi...Kya kami thi mere pyaar ne jo usne mujhe aese dhokha diya...maine hmesa uska sath diya aur usne mujhe hmesa rulaya...aur aaj mere samne wo mere bhai ki ho gyi...kyu kiya tumne aesa swara kyu...and he started crying loudly ... Ragini enters the room... R- laksh ji...kya hua laksh ji...aapne kya haal bna liya h apna...uthiye... L-ragini tum btao kya main itna bura hoon...kyu mujhe pyaar karne ka aur badle me pyaar milne ka haq ni h??? R- aap aesa mt boliye laksh ji hum sb aapse bhut pyaar karte h... L-main tumse kuch maanguga to dogi???? R- aap bol ke to dekhiye...hum apko duniya ki har khushi denge... L-mujhe meri duniya meri swara de do ragini...marr jaunga uske bina...uski saari galti maaf kr dunga pr mujhe swara de do... Ragini shocked nd shattered...tears falling from her eyes... L-i love u swara...i love u...laut aao na shona... IN THE TENT sankarr enters nd put his hnd on swra's shoulder...swra sees sanskaar... sanskaar-ro rhi ho???? mere pass ab rumaal ni h... swara- mazak lagta h sbkuch??? Kyu kiya tumne aesa...sab khtm ho gya sanskaar... S- abhi bhi laksh se pyaar karti ho na..??? Use dard hua isliye tumhe ho rha h na??? SW- kavita ko bhula pae ho tum??? Ragini laksh ko bhul payi???? fir main aur laksh ek dusre ko kaise bhul jae sanskaar???? S- aj ye karna zaruri tha per main tumse wada karta hun...ma baba ke sath sath laksh aur tum v ek ho jaoge... SW- sacchi??? S- mucchi... SW- ragini??? S- burai ka ant hota h swara ye tumne hi bola h mujhe...ab rona band kro nd smile... They both hug each other...laksh watching them from his balcony and crying... Scene-2 : ragini remembering laksh's words...she gets a call from sanskaar... S- milna h tumse... R- hume ni milna... S- soch lo main sanskaar maheshwari hoon... R- hume dhamki mt do...kaha milna h aur kab???? S- hotel blue moon shaam 6 bje... R- ok... And ragini disconnects the call and thinks kahin ye unki koi chaal to ni...jo v ho hume pta karna parega jake... SCENE 3- laksh entering in tent...swara without seeing him... Sw- aa gye tum...maine kuch bnaya h tumhare liye i hope tumhe pasand aayega...taste karke btao... L- pati ki sewa me bhut accha lag rha h na...mujhe dard deke khud kitni khush ho... swara turns nd sees laksh...his eyes are red nd face depressed... Sw- laksh tum yaha...aur ye kya haal bnaya h apna... L- tumhe to khush hona chahiye...tumne hmesa yhi to chaha ki main tumhare kiye pagl ho jaun aur tm mujhe barbaad kar do... Sw- bakwaas mt kro lucky...i mean laksh...jao yaha se... L- kyu??? Tumhara pati hume sath dekhega to mujhe maarega???? Sw- sanskaar aesa ni h... laksh shout on swara nd says- to kya main aesa hun??? he started throwing all stuffs... L- main to bhut bura hun na...ameer baap ka bigra beta islite tumne mujhe dhokha deke mere bhai se shaadi kr li... sw- laksh... L- naam mt lo mera...tumhe koi haq ni h mujhe rulane ka... Sw- jab mujhse hmesa aansu hi mile to kyu aa jate ho mere pass... L- bacchi ho??? Ya bewakoof...meri aankhon me apne liye pyaar ni dikhta... by saying this laksh come close to swara... Sw- laksh mujhe darr lag rha h...plzzz jao L- darte wo h jo glat hote h...meri taraf dekho... Sw- hum dono ki shadi hO chuki h alg alg insaan se...ragini patni h tumhari...use dhokha mat do... L- meri aankhon me dekho aur btao kya khud ke liye pyaar ni dikhta... swara looking down... L- agar tum meri shona ho to dekho aur btao kya meri aankhon me pyaar dard dhokha kuch ni dikhta... swara looks in laksh's eyes...they share small eyelock... L- i love you...ni kar sakta tumse nafrat... swara looking in his eyes nd starts crying... L- plzz ro mat...tm janti main tumhari aankhon me aansu ni dekh sakta... Sw- laksh... L- bolo na swara...kuch to bolo... Sw- laksh i... L- bolo na shona I what???? suddenly swara realized they are too close... Sw- laksh jao yaha se...mujhe akela chor do...just go... L- aaj to tm bhaag rhi ho mujhse aur sacchai se...per main bhi dekhta hun kabtk... Laksh turn to go out and sees sanskaar standing there... Swara turns to see laksh nd sees sanskaar outside tent... L- gusse me meri swara pe mat chillana... S- swara tumhari ni meri h... L- dekhte h... by saying this laksh leaves... Sw- sanskaar wo... S- i am sorry swara laksh se aese baat karne ke liye...aur haan tumhe koi explnation dene ki zarurat ni h... Sw- tumharu ragini se baat hui??? S- haan aur wo maan gyi h milne ke liye... Sw- thk h...ab use usi ke khel me usi ki tarah jawab dene ka waqt aa gya h... S- aur laksh???? Sw- main smbhaal lungi... S- kise??? Use ya khud ko???? Sw- nhi sanskaar aaj meri pyaar ki taqat hi mujhe jeet degi... S- main hmesa tumhare sath hun ... Sw- meri pyaari behna ragini...ready ho jao ek naye khel k liye... TO BE CONTINUED...

Oopsss somethin went wrong...no space btw dialogues...damn it...sorry guys...hope u all understand...

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Thank you...i will sooon update next part

Thank you sooo much to everyone for liking my story...i am continuing with my story... Part-2 Laksh in his room talking to himself- mujhe kisi tarah swara se baat karni h...per ragini ke rehte hue kaise karu...main use hurt ni karna chahta hun...usne hmesa mera saath diya h aur swara ke karan use aansu ni dena chahta...kaise baat karun swara se samjh ni aa rha h... suddenly ragini comes to laksh nd say- laksh ji dadi maa thodi bimar h hume unse milne ka mann kar rha h...hum shaam badi jaenge unse milne... Laksh thinking-yhi sahi mauka h...ragini ghar me ni rhegi tab swara se baat kar lunga...isse baat v ho jayegi nd ragini ko kuch pta v ni chlega L-thik h ragini...mujhe btana dadi kaisi h... R-ji... ragini thinking- sorry laksh ji humne aapse jhuth bola per hum aapko sach ni bta sakte ki hm sanskaar se kyu milne ja rhe h... Ragini leave the room... Evening time...sanskaar calls ragini... S-kaha ho???? R-bas pahuchne wale h...tum kaha ho??? S-yhi pe tumhare intzaar me saali ji...jaldi aaiye... sanskaar cuts the call nd make a call to DP... S- bade papa mere ghar ka kaam almost khatm hone pe h...to av office me ek meeting h wo meeting attend krke me apne ghar jaunga... DP- thik h aur raat ka khana tum swara yhi pe karna... S-ji bade papa... sanskaar disconnects the call...ragini ab tumhara sach sabke saamne aayega aur tum kuch ni kar paogi... Laksh calls swara... L-mujhe tumse milna h... Sw- kya baat h laksh???? L- baat to bhut h swara usse zyada sawaal h mann me...mujhe milna h Sw- mujhe ni milna... L- main puch ni rha swara bta rha hun...main tmhare tent aa rha hun kuch der me... Sw-per laksh... laksh disconnects the call... In the hotel ragini enters the room where sanskaar is waiting for him... S-welcome ragini welcome... R-dekhiye sanskaar main laksh ji se pehli baar jhuth bol ke aapse milne aayi hun...btaiye kya baat h aur kaise swara humare m laksh ji ke zindagi se hmesa le liye chali jayegi... S- pehli baar???? R u sure ragini tumne pehli baar jhuth bola h???? Ragini looks sanskaar... S-mujhe bakwaas karne me koi dilchaspi ni h...main swara se ptaar karta hun... Ragini looks stunned nd shocked... S- mujhe hairani se mat dkho...ab mujhe smjh me aaya laksh kyu swara ka deewana h...mujhe har haal me swara chahiye...tum mukhe swara do aur main tumhe laksh... R- aur humpe bharosa kaise kare ki aap sach bol rhe h???? S- mat karo...meri aur swara ki shaadi ho chuki h aur swara jaisi ladki ke liye shaadi ka value kya h ye tum janti hi ho...mere pass swara hmesa rhegi per agar tumne mera sath ni diya to swara aur main tmhari sacchai sbke samne le aayenge aur fir laksh tumhara kabhi ni ho payega... R- ni hum aesa ni hone denge laksh ji bas humare h... S- fir soch lo...choice is urs...ya to mera sath do ya khud ke pair pe kulhaadi maaro... Ragini thinking... S- zyada sochne se koi fayda ni h...tmhare pass koi teesra raasta ni h... ragini looks sanskaar... IN THE TENT... Sw-tum smjhte q ni laksh...hum dono ki shaadi ho chuki h...ek baat kitni baat samjhau...jao yahan se... L- main kahin ni jaane wala...har pal yhi sochta rhta hun ki meri swara mujhe chor ke mere bhai ke pass kaise ja sakti h... Sw-mujhe iss baare me koi baat ni karni... L- kyu ni karni??? By saying this laksh holds swara's hand... sw- laksh choro mujhe dard ho rha h... L- mujhse zyada??? Sw- choro mera hath laksh... L- main kabhi ni chorta agar tum chura ke bhaag ni jati... Sw- isliye mera intzaar ni kiya aur meri behen se shaadi kar li... Laksh leaves swara's hand... Sw- ab qa hua laksh???? Ab tumhe jawab ni chahiye???? L- tum ni jati to kabhi ni karra usse shaadi... Sw- wow laksh maheshwari wow...main chali gyi isliye tumne ragini se shaadi kr li...kya pyaar h... L- wo suicide karne wali thi swara...tumhari galtiyo ki sazaa use mil rhi thi... Sw- to fir baat hi khtm h laksh...jab tmne apni marzi se shaadi ki usse fir aj ye saare sawaal kyu??? L- qki maim ni bhul pa rha hun tumhe...main sirf tmse pyaar karta hu aur ragini bas meri dost h... Sw- maine bhi to sirf tmse pyar kiya laksh...hmesa... Laksh looks swara emotinally... Sw- per tmne mujhe bharisa ni kiya...jis rishte me bharosa ni h uska kya fayda... L- to tm waps kyu ni aayi swara...ek baar to bol ke dekhti main bekasoor hun...main sb chor ke tumhare pass aa jata... Sw- ragini apni patni ko v chor ke??? Jisse tmne apni marzi se shaadi ki??? Laksh remain silnt... sw- rhne do laksh...in baatin ka koi fayda ni h ab...tumhe mujhpe bharosa hi ni... L- to bharisa dilao n shona... By saying this laksh holds swara's cheeks... L- meri aankhon me dekh ke ek baar bol ke to dekho... Sw- ragini me meri shaadi ke din mujhe maarne ki kosis ki... L- fir se jhuth... Laksh shouts on swara... kyu jhuth bol rhi ho...wo q aesa kregi... sw- tumhe pane ke liye... L- main ni maanta... Sw- aaj tumhe meri har baat jhuthi lagti h laksh...aesa na jis din tumhe sach pta chale tav tk bhut der ho jae... laksh looks swara...he moves towards her by saying shina suddenly swara's phone rang... Sw- ragini ka phone... Laksh looks her phone...its ragini calling... Sw- main speaker pe rakh kar hi baat karti hun kya pta baad me tum fir se mujhe jhuthi bna do... by saying this swara receive the call... Sw- hello ragini... R- swara hume tumse milna h... Sw- ab kis liye ragini...fir se meri jaan logi??? laksh gives cold look to swara... R- tum aesa kyu bol rhi ho swara...hume sach me tumse milna h bhut zruri h... Sw- thk h main tumhare room aa jati hun... R- nhi swara ghar per ni...hume tumse akele me milna h... Sw- akele me kyu???? R- bhut zruri baat h...tum hume ek ghnte me hotel blue moon me milo... Sw- thk h... swara disconnects the call... L- per ragini ne to mujhse bola wo badi ja rhi b...aur hotel blye moon bilkul opposite raaste me h baadi se... Sw- mat sochi laksh...ragini tumharu best frnd h wo tmse kabhi jhuth ni bolti h na...jhuthi to swara h... L- per swara... Sw- ab jao yha se laksh...main ragini se milne ja rhi hun... swara leaving the tent... Sw- aur ha laksh...bas ek baar meri kahi baaton me dhyaan dena shyd tab tumhe sab saaf dikhne lge... swara leaves...laksh stands there confused... IN THE HOTEL S- very gud...ab tm swara ko mere liye convince krogi... R- isme koi chaal to ni h na??? S- chaak chalne ke mamle me tmsw kon jeet paya h bholi bhali pyaari si meri bhabhi... R- hum tmhara kaam kar denge...aur tm mera... S- zrur...ab main niklta hun wrna swara mujhe yaha dekhegi to shaq kregi... sanskaar leaves... R- pta ni sanskaar ji ki isme koi chal h ya ni per agar wo sach keh rhe h to isme fayda mera hi h...hume ek baar swara se baat karni hi hogi... Maheshwari mansion...everyone waiting for swaragini... Ap- 10 bj gye h per in dono ka koi pta ni h... S- maa meri swara se baat hui thi to usne kaha tha ki wo ragini se milne ja rhi h... Ap- laksh ragini ne tmhe btaya ni wo kha gyi h??? L- usne bola wo dadi se milne baadi gyi h late ho jayega... Dp- baadi phone lga ke pucho... L- pranaam papa... Sk- kaise ho laksh??? Aur ragini kaisi h??? L- ragini wahan ni h??? Sk- yahan ni h matlb??? Kahan h ragini??? L- une mujhse bola tha ki wo baadi ja rhi h... Sk- per wo to aj yahan aayi hi ni...kahin swara ne fir se... L- ni papa mujhe ni lagta swara ne kuch kiya hoga...aaplog yahan jaldi aa jaiye...dida aur maa ko v sath lke aaiyeg... Sk- thk h hum sab aa rhe h... laksh thinking to himself-pta ni q mujhe aesa lag rha h ki kuch to aesa h jo dikh ni rha h mujhe... Dp- ye dono behen koi kasar ni chorti h tamashe me... S- ragini aa gyi... everyine looks back...ragini coming downstairs... Ap- ragini...beta kahan thi tum aur ek phone v ni kiya... R- maa wo... S- aur swara kahan h???? Wo to tmhare sath hi thi na??? ragini give confused look to snskaar... R- han wo hmare sth thi per fir wo chali gyi...aur hum badi chale gye... L- per papa ne to kaha aj tum baadi gyu hi ni???? ragini nd whole family looked shocked...laksh looks ragini in anger.. TO BE CONTINUED...